TAKAcave: Private Collection

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CASE FILE: Custom Weapon

Yōjinbukai Taka
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NAME:
→ Susanoo-no-Mikoto (Susanō MK I)
→ Izanami
→ Izanagi
→ Hachiman
→ Tsukuyomi-no-Mikoto
→ Inari
→ Yamata no Orochi
→ Aizen-Myoo

TYPE:
→ Armor
→ Gun
→ Gun
→ Gun
→ Gun
→ Gun
→ Gun
- Motorcycle

FORM:
→ Modified Militarized Exoskeleton
→ FNX-40 Pistol
→ Twin Beretta M93R
→ Saiga-12
→ Grenade Launcher
→ Modified Sniper Rifle
→ RPG-7 rocket-propelled grenade launcher.
→ Modified Motorcycle

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BRIEFING:
→ using the resources available to him as Head of Science and Research within the Creta Military, Taka has developed a personal, combat-ready suit fitted to accommodate his needs. A full body Neoprene suit, akin to that of a Scuba-diver’s suit. The material weaved to construct this skin-tight under suit basically functions as waterproof, light armor with temperature-regulating elements that maintain the body's temperature and keep muscles from freezing up in the field. Additional weight has been outfitted in the form of lesser Kevlar plating along the mask and other portions (torso, upper arms and thighs) as well as impact-resistant graphite. While not bullet-proof, this customized suit hosts modest ballistic resistance. Attachments have been designed In the form of weapon-hoisters which can be attached and detached at will for the various weapons Taka has at his disposal. Colored Matte black, its ideal for infantry.

→ Taka’s most reliable weapon in the sense that’s it’s always on his person; Izanagi is a beautifully crafted FNX-40 handgun. 14 round clips chambered in .40 S&W. Fitted with a combat iron-sights and suppressor, threaded barrel for perfection, this Matte black stainless steel pistol is constructed with an ergonomic polymer frame which has a low bore axis for less felt recoil and improved control. Ambidextrous operating controls and profiled steel sides make this not only an incredible functioning piece of weaponry, but rather appealing to the eyes as well. Concealable and boosting pinpoint accuracy to a trained wielder, this weapon is both auspicious and deadly.

→ TheBeretta M93R machine pistol, while not meant for precise firing, is still quite the arduous weapon; especially after Taka’s renovations to its design. Swapping its steel body for more robust, though lighter carbon steel polymers, the weapon is balanced out by a reinforced grip meant for comfortable grasping. Matte black in tradition with Taka’s dark theme, the weapon has an operating selective firing mode; alternating between three-round burst and single fire which can alternate with the simple flip of a switch. Carried in two, Taka wields this in a set of twins as modified silencing additions have been applied; long and narrow, they’re optional and can be detached or reattached at well. These weapons are small enough to be concealed in any firm of attire.

→ Taka’s modified Saiga-12 Shotgun; it’s been outfitted for the pinnacle of combat orientation. Hosting the frame of an assault rifle, standard to its design, Taka has replaced its frame with a lighter, though just as durable metal substance for effective movement and usefulness. Equipped with a modified muzzle break and recoil compensator, firing this normally difficultly controlled weapon is more manageable. Semi-automatic with fires rounds in a burst fashion, it’s also outfitted with a AA 12Ga 30rd. drum magazine. Matte black with minor carbon-carbon inserts, the weapon is not only reliable, but easily devastating at close and mid-range.

→ Composed of mostly standardized materials, reinforced carbon alloys, Taka’s personalized Grenade Launcher, resembling the build of a Brügger & Thomet GL-06 is quite the effective tool. Matte black and small in frame, this stand-alone shoulder-firing weapon is used to send a variety of explosive applications across long distances (70 meters) via a series of augmentations to the materials which were all restyled by Taka himself. Designed to be disassembled, the weapon is carried in a case and can be swiftly assembled on spot making it a tactically superb weapon. A recoil compensator and grip have been able to further the firing experience and making it relatively easier for the owner to exercise with.

→ a silent assassin, it would be improper for Taka to move around without the most feared instrument of silent death known to man. After obtaining a L115A3 AWM due to his military weaponry inspirations, he modified its design, and restyled it to fit his own desires. Now composed a reinforced carbon fibers and aluminum for the lightest body possible, this effective killing machine was painted a perpetual black, matte to match the entirety of his personal collection. Bolt-action, single fire with 5-round detachable box magazine, this weapon’s effective range is estimated just beyond 1400 meters. Suppressed at the nose with a adapted suppresser, the Rifle also boosts a detachable aperture icon sight for both day and night optics jointly; enabling the magnification of almost 2 times normal, Taka, through the scope, can efficiently pinpoint targets vital points effortlessly. Carried around in a case or one of his vehicle compartments, the weapon can be assembled easily and swiftly. An attachable tripod is also accustomed with the weapon.

→ A prototype construct modeled after the widely–produced RPG-7 anti-tank rocket-propelled grenade launcher, Taka has both stripped it of imperfections and augmented its effectiveness. Made to be more lightweight through a series of alloy constructs and reinforced aluminum influences, the shoulder-mounted rocket launcher has been painted matte black. Dangerous, the explosive power of this weapon is potent and can level small buildings and penetrate tank armor.

→ Along with the construction and birth of his tailored suit, Taka didn’t limit himself as he indulged into both his personal and company capitals and limitation to generate a rather impressive piece of technology. The Aizen Myoo (Aizen M1) is a 2-wheeled motorized vehicle with exceptional maneuvering capabilities. Crafted from the same lightweight though durable metal products of the Amaterasu, this polished matte black Motorcycle has a rather unorthodox build; bulk and slightly rounded, before sliming inwards around the cockpit then rounding out at the rear, its long build is quite impressive.

Reaching top speeds of roughly 250 mph, Aizen utilizes a modified oval-piston cylinder engine to supplement its speed. Utilizing a non-returning throttle in combination with a dual throttle system, Aizen can maintain maximum velocity without Taka’s hands influencing the handles; it has a transposable function to where the throttle can be controlled by foot. Numerous storage components on both sides of the front axle (its sides), Taka can store and retrieve a series of weapons for his personal use. A grand piece of machinery, Aizen is Taka’s trusted vehicle when his car just isn’t the viable option.

PICTURE:
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Susanoo MK I:

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Izanagi:

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Izanami:

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Hachiman:

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Tsukuyomi:

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Inari:

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Yamata no Orochi:

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Aizen-Myoo:

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DONE!

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{REVISE}

- Susanoo Suit:

The whole concept requires work as illustrated on these points:
– There are no free weapon manufacturers in Aerugo as it is an Empire – no free enterprise economy in most businesses (kind of command economy). Even then with other countries, governments will want in on the whole weaponry if based anywhere else.
– If things like this were to be developed in Aerugo, the Imperial forces would seize it, and they would have enough ways to do so
– High tech weaponry is more of Creta's or Carraig's domain, they are the most advanced nation and they don't even have stuff like this (and that is a whole nation directed towards technological advances, not just one company bearing the brunt).

Exosuit: If anyone would manage to make something like this in its wholesome concept, it'd be Creta in military purpose, not an individual company just for their CEO
the place is called “modern day alchemist”, as in nowadays rather than extremely far futuretech. The most advanced piece is reserved for their Royal Guards and elite soldiers, and that stuff is highly classified, with even enhanced protection in proportion to the size that they have for ballistics resistance.

The thing is resistant to pretty much everything. You would have to layer and combine different materials to get all these effects combined – thus it could not be light nor skin tight. Things like temperature resistance, resistance against shock, liquids, bullets etc is realistically gained by a certain substance or material being used, if it were possible to just take single threads of all these materials and put them together to one fabric or material and retain all their effects, people would do it.

It reduces sound how exactly? By tension of the fabric? That doesn't even make sense.

Extending scales for reduced resistance? Thinking of a golfball effect, I can tell, but that works only because the indentations are round, as well as the ball and air or fluids in general moving over the surface of the golfball will generate negative pressure in these round indentations at speed.

Everything else will just result in LOTS of drag being created. Quite the opposite of the desired effect – unless you make it a ball-shaped, rounded costume, that's not gonna work. Also, armor thickness again. The “mechanism” for these scales would need to go somewhere, as well as the scales themselves.

At this point, we're already pretty far into the range of things that won't work, even less at once.

Bulletproof as well – thickness again. Unless it's at least like a regular bulletproof vest, the bullet will be your least problem – the impact force will still do a lot of damage, as that can only be dampened by thick enough buffering.

Movement, speed and flexibility, how exactly with all these layers of different protections and stuff? It can't be that light, with all that stuff crammed in.

The whole computer tech stuff isn't even nearly possible in MDA reality (or in real reality for that matter (while we can make small computers nowadays, their capacity would be far below what ie necessary for such complex tasking), again we point towards war engineers from Creta.

Face plate monitor, again highly contradictory to the earlier description of light and tight. For one thing, all the mentioned stuff wouldn't easily fit, and secondly, that would weigh a while lot, making it more than just uncomfortable to wear.

Sensors for all the random things you could think of, again the cramming problem. Where would they even go? And, there are hardly any non-intrusive or highly elaborate measuring systems for the human body that yield practical data like the mentioned one. (take a look at medial sensory equipment nowadays, most of that isn't small enough to be used in this fashion)

Energy levels, what's this? People aren't batteries, why an energy level? Doesn't work, because people don't have generalized, esoteric 'energy levels'.

More random computer stuff? How would that connect to anything? Does it have a built-in modem? Or via mobile phone networking (which would be too slow in transmission rates for the intended purpose)? Or is it based on hoping that free wireless LAN is available?

Also, random hacking of security systems by just picking the right way out of a database? If it were that easy, again, it would already be done. It's also cyber-logistically very complicated. And then uploading stuff like viruses? Where do these come from? How are they uploaded? Again hoping for free wireless connection to be available, and the security system being connected to it too? Or hoping every electronic doorlock has an ethernet/USB port to plug into?

Multiple visions as well – besides the old space problem, how would all that even be established to be used? Deployed? Also, especially the optical aspect is important, as it would need to be set up so it exactly presents an image just like the actual eyes would pick it up, perspective and relation etc. otherwise there will be much headache and puking.

Upgrades like any computer? Like what if you may enlighten? (also a hardware cannot surpass it's physically given limits, regardless of software).

Also knows all languages? Again, the computer could most likely not handle it with all those other functions around (besides the metaknowledge of knowing all languages).

Weapons as well? That AGAIN contradicts with earlier statements of lightness, flexibility and everything, looking at the weapons to come.

Reading the whole last fluffy paragraph, that, yet again – how unexpected, contradicts half of the description with all it's gadgets and things, yet still somehow being light and not hindering for the movements etc.
also, the second something like that would be known to exist, it would be seized, for multiple reasons, one being laws against not-authorized personnel owning or even using military grade equipment.

All in all, you may want to fix the contradictions, flaws, impossible technologies, it's not going to work. I request kindly that you change many of those aspects and tone them down drastically to acceptable levels with those criticisms in mind, they are not meant to deride you but to give out pointers.



- Car:

The car cannot be too light as a feather when considering top speeds, and traction, especially when it could fly off, at least going by your inference of "top speed and light as a feather" analogy. If you turn, what's to say it'll just flip over into a cycle and start crashing around?

Regenerative temperature property is too futuristic and too overpowered, punt that bit out. Doesn't help the car has SUPER BULLETPROOF PROPERTIES, with even explosive resistance to require special weapons just to destroy it, or even damage it at all. That being heavy explosive ordinance which is to say that the car is a tank-hybrid. Typical bulletproof cars aren't light but heavy thanks to the extra thickness to actually make it bulletproof. It's contradictory in the sense that it's far too reactive to be reliable, since one can't just mix materials or metals and obtain a new material that has all the traits of the multiple ingredients and so supposedly only parts of it are made out of that, making it redundant for a self-repairing feature.

Putting this much bulletproof capacity and making it extremely light won't work, since it'll be heavily armored, and quite heavy to say the least. To become a tank in all forms, or thick anyways considering the amount of protection it requires. Carbon is great for being used in a mix, but not as a stand alone material. Aluminum as soda cans can be crushed easily, so it isn't really a useful metal to have for durability in that regard outside of alloying. Also lighter cylinders, if those were made to actually make the car go faster, it would be done, and if it would be done, it would be incorporated into high power motors already. Also 230 MPH isn't that much for a race car. Remember to LESSEN and account for the bulletproof tendencies, it does not resist explosions, and it cannot go that fast if it is bulletproofed.

Hacking meanwhile is not something that can be done INSTANTLY, it takes a long time to learn more and more about a specific computer in question, to know about IP Addresses, to observe and stake it out in general before even attempting to break in. Stealing from military grade secrets easily doesn't work like that, not when they are also encrypted always and tend to have very complex algorithms to break.



Fujin Airplane:

How does the company overlook such huge gaps of budget such as this? And how is it that benefactors don't notice any deficiencies in their funding disappearing just like that when they often benefact to see some plausible return in their investment? It would be next to impossible to make it a secret if it is manufactured within the company, since there will always be people who will see the schematics, and an accounting for the missing materials around if it was merely pulled out. There would probably be accounting for everything for tax purposes in general for corporate practices.

And being hit by a missile... the amount of protection the airplane requires it to be thick, quite thick to withstand such destructive force, sacrificing speed for protection basically, but even then, it won't be able to maintain flight speeds enough to keep it afloat if that were the case.

If the surface is reflective and angular, how is it stealthy? And making it reflective won't exactly stem away the thermal readings, unless the exhausts are plugged in which is counter-productive. The reflection will give the airplane away by the blinking.

Also, how does the gravity make the person comfortable? Unless the centrifugal force is being used, which influences gravity to a degree, gravity can't even be artificially controlled in any way. There will always be a feeling of the pressure, G-force build up and whichever factors come in with the airplane to be felt. The gear the pilot wear are often specialized, so as point goes to the suit, can't be a jack-of-all-trades type given overpowering nature.

Electromagnetic shielding is not recommended given airplanes navigation rely on electromagnetism. Isolating the airplane would make many instruments such as the compass not work at all, as well as wireless communications.

Also, having a cargo-bay in this airplane would defeat the purpose of it trying to play the role of an SR-71's spy-plane like capabilities, which by the way, is designed for recon rather than to deliver any explosive ordinance or even transport anything. Unless the airplane is supposed to land somewhere, it would no doubt find very hard time even landing in a country given it is an unauthorized airplane flying on airspace that would no doubt have such an air vehicle tracked.


TheBeretta M93R machine pistol: Proper term is suppressor, and unless the gun is to be made truly silent by use of sub-sonic ammo, all the "silencer" would do is just make the gun sound like a smaller caliber firearm.

Tsukuyomi: What's the point of adding a recoil compensator if the grenade launcher is a single shot weapon anyways? Also get rid of the whole computerized super AI deal with the weapon, far too expensive to make much of a tactical application, and also a civilian shouldn't be running around with such heavy ordinance.

Sniper rifle: Scope shouldn't be a super scope of that manner, get rid of it.

RPG-7: Same deal with the grenade launcher, no distinct Ghost Recon Future Soldier technology of that level, and heat-seeking missiles need specialized rocket launchers of entirely differing designs. The RPG-7 is a Rocket Propelled Grenade Launcher.


All GUNS: Making those guns lightweight is NOT a good idea, it requires sturdiness, robustness, and in general, that's for the guns with high recoil like the sniper rifle Taka has, besides, some guns are redundantly reduced in weight anyways when there was no need given they are already fine as they were. Anyways, these are all MILITARY-GRADE weapons, something a civilian shouldn't have, even if he is a CEO of an arms making company. Lessen the amounts of weapons Taka has, and keep them under civilian regulation level (some secreted weapons here and there are fine long as they are within reasonable bounds). Going vigilante is a good way to actually get arrested or even have the company shut down by a government for possession of such dangerous firearms, and would be quite hazardous to your character too.


Aizen Myoo: Having wheel pairs does NOT make a bike maneuverable, rather the standing surface is wider, making it hard to go around corners by leaning if not improbable. Quad bikes have this problem. Being light-weight and fast is not going to work with a wide bulky bike. 250 MPH with such a steamroller is already a far fetch.

Also same deal with above, punt out the AI.

Also steering a vehicle like this is impossible when there are no throttles or handlebars considering it does not share the same sleek designs of a normal bike. It can't leak with such a wide design. Steering like that requires a foothold rather, which contradicts the design of the bike.

[Reila Tsukino]

You hit your archive date by a long shot.

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Pulled out of archives as per user's requests. Archive date is now 4th August.

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EDITED! A lot was removed and simplified !

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{REVISE}

- Susanoo MK I: Typically a jacket works out in arctic conditions and all that. Anyways, as it goes, elaborate upon the protective capacity of the "exoskeleton", and the exterior armoring, a full body diving suit tends not to retain elasticity if it were vouching for protection, and tends to be bigger for it in conventional armoring otherwise as a side note, but I am confident you know of that. The impression I am getting that it is protective is the fact it "is a light armor" which is what I am otherwise wondering more unto about. But as a side note, diving suits are more ideal for underwater operatives than infantry, on a logistical things. Perhaps you should invest in SCUBA gears or the like? But that's just a suggestion out there.

- Beretta M93R: Might be a fart on your part... but carbon steel isn't a polymer, since you can't exactly turn it into one, polymer is a long molecule plastic and all that, and it's sort of contradictory to have those two at one. Carbon polymer sure, but not steel polymer as those two don't mix. Also is that long barrels with the squared designs, are they the silencers you had in mind or do you have a longer attachment in mind for them? On a side note, just know that it won't entirely silence the weapon if the suppressor is used, but rather only lower the bang as to make it harder to discern where you shot it from rather than the fact you actually shot it.

- Saiga 12: Mind elaborating which metal is used? Also are you sure it's a good idea to use a carbon-carbon insert? Carbon-carbon is great for heat resistance but isn't actually robust, also here is a note for Graphite just in case if you were planning on using it in any aluminum containing firearms as it was taken from the wikipedia.

[The use of graphite is limited by its tendency to facilitate pitting corrosion in some stainless steel, and to promote galvanic corrosion between dissimilar metals (due to its electrical conductivity). It is also corrosive to aluminium in the presence of moisture. For this reason, the US Air Force banned its use as a lubricant in aluminium aircraft, and discouraged its use in aluminium-containing automatic weapons. Even graphite pencil marks on aluminium parts may facilitate corrosion.]

- B&T GL-06: Are you sure you can't just fold the stock and bend the grip to hug the barrel? That's just better than disassembling the whole gun, and re-assembling it which takes time, whereas you can just pull down the grip and unfold the stock with a quick deployment, which is better than to disassemble the whole thing. Anyways, name the specific ammunition he carries with him for the grenade launcher specifically.

- L115A3: Aperture sights are used as "iron sights" rather than magnifications for a scope, and increase accuracy, but not the zooming of the scope, the zooming of the scope typically comes from the "magnification dial".

- RPG-7: Do you REALLY want aluminum for an RPG-7? That's the material they use for fake RPG-7's in film sets rather than the real deal, and aluminum IS a "soft" metal, and is a metal one can bend, as shown by aluminum piping. Steel is used in the typical RPG-7 for ruggedness and long a more lasting role as a robust weapon instead of iron.

- Aizen-myo: Describe what material is used since the Amaterasu isn't there. Also if weapons are stored on the Aizen-myo, lower the speed to justify the output and payload being carried rather than to almost reach peak capacity almost up to one of the higher tiers of motorcycle speeds achievable despite the handicap of weapons weight and tools that comes with it as well as ammunition which aren't modified to have "super light metal bodies" as to hamper the bike even further, especially given it has a bulky design which the wheels no doubt seem to profess in, a very contradictory thing as to prevent the "light as a feather" design by default. Recommended you change the bike designs, bikes are supposed to have good aerodynamic flow, and adding the bulk of things ON the front where it is on the steering axle would no doubt lower the speed if not make it a very turbulent experience riding the motorcycle inspired by Final Fantasy (bikes don't steer with the backwheel to boot), not to mention those things that are on the bike aren't tight OR complimentary form fitting to the bike, a car does a better job for that of carrying things. Aerodynamics is meant to make the bike slip through the air, not be an obstacle that is trying to bulldoze through it, that's why sports car have a sleek and curvy design rather than a fat front trucks and the likes have.


Once you take care of these details, I'll take another gander at the sheet.

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