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Post by Guest Tue Aug 23, 2011 12:31 am

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CASE FILE: Transmutation Equipment
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Goken Drakan Strife
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NAME:
→ Falling Hell

TYPE:
→ Elemental

LEVEL:
→ Level 1

FORM:
→ It is in the form of a pendant, Shaped like a cross that hangs from the wrist

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BRIEFING:
→ The circle has the appearance of that of a cross, With zig zags going up and down. Then making a cross over that, Its ability is that it can clone the person, From using basic lessons of what makes up a body, what matter is used in the body, The circulatory system, The brain, And the perfectly semetrical body itself.

PICTURE:
→ The circle has the appearance of that of a cross, With zig zags going up and down. Then making a cross over that, Looking as if a 2x2 inch pendant
→ A small ring, going around the basic wrist

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SPECIAL ABILITIES:

→Cloning

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Post by Guest Wed Aug 24, 2011 11:50 pm

{REVISE}

  • I would also consider this a basic ability as opposed to elemental.
  • Your briefing could be more descriptive. Is it defensive or offensive? Does it have a drawback? Etc. Also, you should note that this clone should only be a meat dummy, unable at moving, speaking, or anything. Otherwise I would consider it OP at level one. If thats what you had in mind already, awesome!
  • He should have all the materials on hand in order to make this clone dummy, so that should be noted somewhere. Either in the briefing or special abilities section, or both. Go for both. After all, something can't be made from nothing.
  • Could you also include more of a description of his special ability than simply "cloning?" Straight to the point is normally safe, but it also doesn't say very much and leaves us wondering the specifics of the ability.

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Post by Reila Tsukino Thu Aug 25, 2011 12:37 am

Also if the clone is made out of any kind of human flesh or whatnot, it's alkahestry, not alchemy.
For the Special Abilities, this is where you put the paragraph/s from your character app. I want three or more sentences..that is NOT a paragraph. XD
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