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Post by Guest Tue Nov 23, 2010 12:18 am

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CASE FILE: Homunculus
Vanity 946147
you're not gonna break my soul
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FULL NAME:
Alena ______, her last name is unknown.


AGE:
22 23 years old

SEX:
Female

BIRTH PLACE:
Unknown

SPECIES:
Human-based, Amestrian

SIN:
Vainglory VANITY

DATE OF BIRTH:
April 4th


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HEIGHT:
170.18 Cent (5'7" ft)

WEIGHT:
56.6990 kg (125 lbs)

PICTURE:
Spoiler:

DESCRIPTION:
Alena, a.k.a Vanity, is full of beauty on the inside and out. The young girl has fair skin as soft as silk. She has long, natural wavy aqua locks that reach to her knees if down straight. Long hair is a symbol of beauty, so it's only fitting for her hair to be that long. However, Alena rarely has her hair not styled. She was born with blood red lips, that immediately catches the eye of anyone that takes a glimpse of her. The homunculus has enchanting blue eyes, that can easily search the soul of anyone who takes a glimpse into them. Her body is slim framed, but extremely elegant. Unlike many other women, Alena does not have rather large breast, instead this gives her face it's distinctive nature. The focus is drawn towards her natural beauty of the face, not the body. Alena wears many elaborate dresses, especially those taken from the Victorian style. Each dress worn is completely unique from another, each made of fine delicate patterns. It's important to notice, that none of her dress come higher than her breast, revealing her collar bone completely. The vanity nature within her body, loves to show of her collar bone, unlike other seductive body parts by most women.
Alena was raised by Father with prestige mannerisms, and she is able to hold her own in any given situation. She is a rather confident young lady, always holding her chin high as she walks.

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PERSONALITY:
Alena is naturally confident in any given situation. Even during the darkest of times, Alena is able to keep her self cool and think of a way to turn the situation to her favor. However, she strives for the attention of those around. When she enters a room, her desire is to catch the eye of everyone in the room, and most of the time she is able to do that. On the outside, she comes across as an extremely generous and understanding person. However on the inside, she is deeply ingrained with conceit. Alena rarely helps out a person, unless there is something she can manipulate to benefit her. Now this is not saying she does not help those around, she does, but it is most likely a facade to her true intention. Unlike many of the other homunculi, Vanity loves people’s attention. She throws herself out to people, striving for their adoration and praise.
With the sin of vanity, comes deceit. Alena can easily deceive anyone, due to her strong ability to connect with people. Her words can be intoxicating, drawing in anyone she nearly wishes. The homunculus can tend to be a control freak, keeping the focus on herself rather than those around. Whenever she walks into a room with a mirror, she cannot help but to take a quick glance at her flawless figure.
Alena has a strong desire in life to connect with her brother, for some reason she has an unbelievable sense of love for a man she's never met. She has hundreds of letters secretly tucked away that she wrote to her brother, those letters have her heart and soul in them, because they were written before she was Vanity. Only her brother would be able to understand the letters, and the connection she has with him through them.


LOVE:
~Make up, primarily lip stick.
~Fashion, especially high heels.
~Strawberries and apples.
~The color purple.
~Peacocks are the main symbol for vanity, so unsurprisingly she has a strong draw to the creature.
~Mirrors.
~Strategy games.
~Politics.
~Drachma.
~Making Deals.
~RIOTE!


HATE:
~Critics.
~Failed Plans.
~Broken mirrors.
~Wasting valuable time.
~Seclusiveness.
~Dai.
~Red Ribbon Resistances.
~Other women.

DEEPEST SECRET:
→ Aside from the fact that she is Vanity, which she WILL reveal eventually, but at first, she'll probably only tell the other homunculi.
Vanity has a great sense of vulnerability, especially when she is completely alone and out of contact of people for a long time.
Finally, the hundreds of letters she wrote before becoming Vanity. They might a key reason to unlocking her mind from Fathers control.

IDOL:
Herself


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HISTORY:
"Mirror, mirror, on the wall, whose the fairest of them all?" Sure, it's a classic line that everyone has heard, but it's the only constant line that has been in Alena's mind since childhood.

All that she remembers of that lurking day, was the amount of rain that fell from the damper sky. The streets were vacant that afternoon, mainly because people were desperately attempting to stay dry. Puddle after puddle Alena splashes around joyously. She couldn't have been more than eight, when -He- found her enjoying the shower storm.

"Are you enjoying yourself there?" His voice was calming and inviting as he knelt down to eye level of the young girl. There was a sincerity behind his stern eyes, that only she could see. "You know what they say about rain right?"

Alena stands still in the middle of a puddle that swirls around her ankles. Who was this man? Why was he talking to her? "I, I um... I don't know?" Her voice meekly replies to his question he just asked. "Plants?" It was the only thing she could think of on the spot like that.

The man couldn't help but laugh a deep laughter from his belly as he watches her. "True, but that's not what I'm looking for..." He pulls his head close to her ear and whispers faintly. "It's the tears from heaven, restoring the filth and grunge of this wicked place." As he spoke into her ear, the man winces his eyes.

"Oh? Really?!" Alena squeals from excitement. That means what had happen weeks ago was finally erasing itself.

Ever since that day of splashing around, Alena's life was drastically changed. That man, who told her the secret, took her under his wing. Provided her a place to sleep, to eat, and most importantly, safety. The man always remained a mystery to her, he never opened up and revealed anything about himself. But there was always something there should couldn't pin-point. That curiosity about the man caused eventually her to find something she was never intended to see. The homunculi.

One evening, Alena's managed to follow Father into a dark lair, deep underneath the surface of the earth. Step by step she went down the darkening staircase, not knowing what was a head of her. Chills jump up her arm as she approaches an opening just head. There she stumbled upon several of the homunculus, with their father. Her eyes widen when she sees the different men and women staring at her daringly.

"Oh, can I eat her?" One of the creatures ask approaching her slim figure anxiously.

That was all she could remember before completely blanking out. When she awoke, Alena's was in her bed sweating profusely. "A dream? Yes, it must of been!" She sat up starring at her reflection in the mirror. Inhale after inhale she took to catch her breath from the terrifying nightmare.

"My dear." His voice calls to her from the corner of her room. Her father steps out from the shadows of the room, gazing into her eyes. He had been there since the moment she had awoken from her slumber. "There is something I want to talk to you about, it's something I've kept hidden from you for most of your life."

"What was that?" Alena's insist as she shuffles out of her bed sheets nervously awaiting his response.

"Well, one day you'll have several brothers and sisters my dear." The man ignores her question, and attempts to divert her attention to the shocking news but before she could question it even further, he was gone and out the door.

Days turned into weeks, and weeks turned into months since Alena spoke or even saw her father. However, during those times of secludedness, the young girl wrote journal after journal to her brother, hopelessly sharing her feelings. As the days grow long, and the nights grow cold, Alena continues to write letter after letter. She kept them all of course, tucked hidden underneath a box in the closet. In secret, just how she remained in secret.

She was only sixteen, and in her prime years before she was given the curse of 'Vanity'. Boys were crazy about her and she was the star. Life was handed to her on a silver platter, and she would spend all nights partying. After all, Father never put hard restrictions on Alena and the only rule was not to go into his 'laboratory'. The foolish girl use to sneak out late at night, looking for a taste of real life. Older men would honk their horns and whistle as she walks down the vacant streets in her heels, swaying in the wind.

Eventually she would spend the nights dancing at the local bar, men cheering her name in the pink spotlights, making the money she desperately desired. Her looks got her far in life. She was the prettiest in a crowd, ribbons in her hair and eyes that gleamed with desire. A beauty queen that walked the streets, desperately searching for a reality to her lonely life.

More months had passed, until finally her father appears in her room once again during the night. "My dear, I don't have much time." He whispers under his breath, fearing he wasn't alone. "Something's going to happen in the future, and I need you to find your brother and kill him." With that, the man touches her lips before completely disappearing.

Somehow later that week, Alena heard of a raging war that was causing many people their life. It was all confusing to the girl, but she tried her best to ignore whatever it was. One morning, during the fall, when the leaves where changing and the air crew crisper, her lips soon began to tingle. The chilling sensation was growing from the inside out. The tingle soon turned into pain, causing the young girl to fall to her knees, shrieking out in agony.

"Ah, finally, the time has come Vanity!" A voice fills her mind, haunting her every thought. "Get up girl, we've got work to do!" Her body quickly got up on it's own, without her control. The woman attempts to resist her body's urge to move, but it was failure. There in the middle of the room she stood, staring deeply at her own reflection, gazing at how wonderfully beautiful she truly was. "Now, look at this. 'Mirror, mirror, on the wall, whose the fairest of them all?'" The young girl's laughter fills the room before walking closer to her own reflection. "Me."

With that her mind was completely controlled, and it wasn't long until Alena, who she knew herself to be, was lost in a forgotten dream somewhere far away.

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With Vanity completely taken control over Alena's body, she has a new found desire to appeal to everyone and anyone. With this, Vanity plans on reuniting Alena with her brother, not for a genuine reason, but strictly a political reason. Primarily it's the image of that comes with the position, along with gaining valuable information necessary to take control of the country.

Since storming the grand city of Central, Vanity has made many "friends" with whom she twirls around her fingers as needed. The first being Nero, a solider for the military and a sucker for good looks and stunning legs. Alena used her beauty to acquire certain information regarding Amestrain military. Along with several other MALE soldiers, Alena manages to gather a few strings of relationships with some of the homunculi. In a shocking dinner date, Alena revealed to Greed the confidential information about being the eighth homunculus. Greed had been one Vanity was attracted to the most physically, however his sadistic nature quickly turned the seductress off. Vanity decided to take advantage of the situation and offer her services to Greed, especially since it would lead her up higher in the chain of command. Along with Greed, Vanity manages to have a brief encounter with Envy and Lust. Both very sort, but crucial in gaining a base of a relation with either. With her exquisiteness, Alena manages to slip inches away from the Fuhrer’s office, but decided to take another route and wait for her moment to attack. During that brief moment, Alena lures in another sucker for love. Ryuichhi. His hopeless dreams were crushed by her tempting lips, as she was able to snatch a military uniform from his grips and leave without giving out any information what so ever.

Alena is currently progressing towards Central, storming the HQ’s with her grace and beauty.


With many of the previous homunculi dying, philosopher stones were become available, and fortunately for herself she had one. Vanity used it at a prime moment to seal the sin of Greed into a man she found pleasing to her eyes. Toss was a pilot, and someone that Alena cannot help but swoon for. He's been pretty loyal to her thus far, and she plans to keep it that way. For some strange reason she cannot break away from the man, as if she took a bite of his poison apple and is unable to resist him.

A lot has happen in little over a year, and it just so happens that Vanity is now one of the great World Leaders. The beautiful woman is the ruler over Drachma, thanks to RIOTES! help. She made the pack once she came into contact with Aurelius and Hild, and they offered her a deal that she couldn't refuse. After all, it's unlike her character to not take something as prestige. The last war that broke out, was primarily her cause. The woman killed the former Leader of Drachma, Loki, and contacted RIOTE so they would have a safe haven. Vanity took the code name of Aphrodite, and became the third strongest member of RIOTE.

After the war slowed down, Toss managed to get himself into a mess and landed in Fort Briggs. Vanity, being completely and utterly lovestruck by the sin, went after him. With her charm and irresistible personality, she was able to sneak her way into the most powerful stronghold, and was inches away from getting what she wanted before being stopped rudely by Dai. The two had an investing conversation, which sent a message into her mind. Was she just a puppet for Aurelius and Hild? At that moment she didn't want to admit it, but the facts were lining up. Greed came out and reassured Vanity that he was okay, even kissing her and taking a deep dosage of her poison before letting her go.


What will the future hold? The ticking hands of the clock will tell...







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POWERS:
Level 1:
Like most Homunculi, Vanity has a unique power that specifically her own. Poison. The tips of her fingers have tiny particles that allow deadly toxins seep out of her pours whenever she comes in contact with another person. With this ability, Vanity is able to manipulate which kind of poison is released. Depending on the toxic, it could cause a person to become paralyzed, intoxicated, or even dying.

One of her most common attacks is the Kiss of Death. Vanity blows a kiss into the air that scatters throughout the area, causing those around to be temporarily paralyzed. (15 feet max)

Finally, depending on which type of intoxicating substance Vanity uses, she is able to control the rate at which the person becomes inflicted with the poison. (i.e Poison A might take 30 seconds to affect the person upon contact, while Poison B might take 2 hours after contact to affect the person.)

Level 2:

Vanity’s Kiss of Death has a much larger radius. (25 feet max)

Along with a new specialty attack in which she causes poison to extract from her palms. With this, Vanity is able to manipulate the poison into tiny balls that she can throw and upon release, causes a person to see hallucinations if they come in contact or inhale the toxic gas.

Lastly, Vanity now controls a Rose Whip. The long whip is embedded with hundreds of thorns that are intoxicated with a poison to cause paralysis. Upon contact with a person, the thorns are able to penetrate through the skin.


Level 3

Vanity has an intense overdose of plant and animal based toxins into her blood stream that makes her touch deadly and allows her to boost her immunity to all poisons, viruses, bacteria, and fungi in the modern world. With the single touch of her hand onto human flesh, she can release viruses, fungi, or even flesh eating bacteria onto the individual.

Vanity's Kiss of Death can now expand up to 50 feet and can cause death for those who inhale the substances.

Her ability to seduce men and women is much stronger at this point, because she uses the help of pheromones that are released from her pours to do so.

When the seducing occurs with the help of pheromones, Vanity can cause the person to go into a dream like state, where they fall unconscious until the poison wears off. The weaker the enemy, the longer they stay in the dream like state.

(This is the part of her ability that will lead into the level four mind control Aki, Ayden, and I were talking about.)






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TRIVIA:
→ Vanity is fluent in almost all languages, due to the long amount of time alone from anyone else.
Fluent in Amestrain, Aerugese, Cretarian, Xingese, and Drachman


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ALIAS:
→ Vanity

OTHER CHARACTERS:
→ Grimm and Tristao

CREATOR'S COMMENTS:
→ She will be the queen bitch.

FACE CLAIM:
Code:
[b]Vocaloid[/b]/[i]Hatsune Miku[/i]



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Post by Aurelius Schwartz Tue Nov 23, 2010 2:06 am

A WIP REVISE <3

1. Personality: At least 300 words!

2. Name: Just a random pointer...Miyuki is a Japanese (Aerugese) name and Aurelius' name is horribly German (Amestrian). So, if they are from the same parents, they would have the same style of name. But, if you think about it, she could also have been named Miyuki by Father.

3. Deepest Secret: So she isn't going to let ANYONE know that she is Vanity or that she is Aurel's REAL sister?

4. History: *Aurelius Anddd... interesting twist. It's like Father knows he's going to die. I like it actually.

5. Powers: We need to change the lips part. Gluttony's power is actually that right now, except she sucks people's souls out... XD
How about something crazy like if someone looks at her she has the power to make them feel sick, and if she concentrates really hard, she can kill them? (Have to run it by Dai also)

6. Trivia: Can you stick all the languages she speaks and their colors here like you have in your signature? Thanks~~


Note: There needs to be some strong connection between Aurel and Miyuki. Like maybe she really loves his personality or enjoys tormenting him as a form of sisterly love or something of the sort.

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Post by Aurelius Schwartz Tue Nov 23, 2010 2:40 pm

APPROVED

I see nothing wrong with it. We need Dai to approve it now and give his opinion. (Sorry in these cases, I can't be the sole authority, I'm sure you understand) <3
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Post by Dai Tue Nov 23, 2010 8:06 pm

APPROVED

Hope you don't mind me using this account... Can't be bothered switching out right now.
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Post by Guest Tue Jan 18, 2011 2:08 am

Request for Level Two~

I added some new effects for Vanity <3

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Post by Aurelius Schwartz Tue Jan 18, 2011 8:13 am

REVISE

For level two it's required to add at least 150 words to your history. In those words, you say what your character has done on the site so far and all that jazz.
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Post by Aurelius Schwartz Sun Jan 30, 2011 1:47 am

APPROVED

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Post by Aurelius Schwartz Sun May 22, 2011 6:37 pm

Bump

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Post by Guest Sat Jun 04, 2011 7:14 pm

I edited the pink part under her ability. I think that's good enough~

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Post by Aurelius Schwartz Sun Jun 05, 2011 2:48 am

Picture...description?
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Post by Reila Tsukino Thu Jun 09, 2011 7:23 pm

APPROVED

<3
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Post by Reila Tsukino Fri Feb 24, 2012 9:31 pm

Why do you need to chat with me!? Technically that isn't good enough, but...I haven't been around really so that's a plausible excuse I guess. Why didn't you PM me?

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<3 Good job!!!
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Post by Guest Wed May 23, 2012 9:13 am

As per new revamps rules, this profile is being archived. Vani, ask me, and I'll pull it back out and stamp a new date on it.

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Post by Guest Thu Jul 05, 2012 5:26 pm

APPROVED

Changes to history all seem acceptable, and, even if they weren't, I'm pretty much 90% sure you've done this with Aki anyway XD probably the safest approval I've ever made.

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