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Natsu Leiol
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Natsu Leiol
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CASE FILE: Alchemist (Sergeant}
" I'll Fight! and Fight!! and Fight!!! and If I can't Fight than I'll Fight That too "
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CASE FILE: Alchemist (Sergeant}
" I'll Fight! and Fight!! and Fight!!! and If I can't Fight than I'll Fight That too "
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FULL NAME:
→ Natsu Leiol
AGE:
→ 17
SEX:
→ Male
BIRTH PLACE:
→ Creta
RACE:
→ Creta
DATE OF BIRTH:
→ June 17
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HEIGHT:
→ 170.18 cm
WEIGHT:
→ 58.059
PICTURE:
→
- Spoiler:
- Casual Wear Mission Wear
DESCRIPTION:
→ Natsu stands around 5'9 in height and weights around 148lbs. His skin tone is a little tan which brings out his violent eyes more than usual. He usually wears a cold expression on his face, which can sometimes drive girls away from him. His dark brown spiked hair slants towards the back and lays and frames his face. His slim physique is the result of vigorous training he did in preparation for the alchemist test. When not on mission's he usually would wear a plain white-t shirt and some pants. When on mission's he wears a gray shirt thats open down the middle, collar raised. His bottom consists of black pants with a nylon material wrapped and tied up acting as a belt. Most of the belt covers his lower stomach and upper thighs. He has various accessories and ornaments on his attire. He wear three differently made necklaces, one with small chains, another laced, and the other beaded. He also wears an metallic gauntlet on his left arm and various wrist bands on his right.
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PERSONALITY:
→ Natsu is usually a complicated individual, his present attitude can and most likely will change. His persona is usually happy-go-lucky and comical. Though most wouldn't realize through his composure most of the time. He makes friends rather easily and would prefer not to fight if can be avoided. He has a tendency to hang with older company, most forgetting his only 17. He usually go's back home on his own around 9:00 or so, this is his choice and really it's become a habit for him.
In combat it's noticeable that his personality changes dramatically. His calm composure is erased and replaced with seriousness. He tries his best to think before he acts , but ends up rushing in anyway. He swings and kicks, almost like a street fighter. His determination is key to his survival in battle and though most only see it as punching and kicking. He sees it as blows determining his dreams and goals. He can be quite stubborn at times a trait that he gives thanks to his father for and he has an undying sense of kindness. The kindness can sometimes go a little overboard with, giving those mercy who doesn't deserve it, and he does it all with the same serious look.
Unfortunate for him, he never had time to warm up to girls, with school and helping the family out that is. So he tends to seem cold or ignorant when it comes to girls. When really he was never told or taught to be gentler with them. Though he can sometimes sense this and react to their situation and feelings. He cares for the Earth more than he would like to emit. That's why he has modified his alchemy to the construction and rotting of plant's. The other reason was so that his family could prevail through the times.
LOVE:
→
* Sweet Treats
* Little Kids
* The Moon
* Dreams
* The book endless rose.
HATE:
→
* Chocolate
* Cats
* The smell of gas
* Pizza
* Unfair people
DEEPEST SECRET:
→ Natsu's deepest secret is the fact that a certain type of plant from the creta area has the ability to make him ill. The plant called the Cielo llama (Sky Flame)
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HISTORY:
→ Natsu a young Cretian born into the Leiol family. The Leiol family was once a noble name, a name that when spoken would send whispers through crowds. But then the war started, the noble family sent countless sons and money payments into the war, thinking that they could end it with that. But they had soon become bankrupt and left the next generation with nothing, but shame and in old property. Natsu born to the current Leiol head, Hiro and his wife Suzu, at the age 7 he was put in school. His studies brought about the beginning of his alchemical practices, he was a natural at it. It wasn't long before he learn the basic principles and properties behind it and later adapting those properties to his own specialty.
Six years later he had graduated the school top of his class and had gained a little brother years before that. His little brother Diaku is only six right and his entering the school, Natsu had entered and soon the family was beginning to benefit off of Natsu's alchemy. The family was finally beginning to recover it's name. But that all ended sooner than expected. During one of their random attacks, The Leiol's estate was blown away. This was a devastating blow to them, considering that was all they had left of their once proud name. The civil war that Creta was in, was short lived. Though it caused more damage then expected. They pretty much considered it more or less then a flea bite and tossed it aside. To the Leiol family though it took away it's most valuable possession.
The family begin to squabble among each other more often than before. Natsu made the decision that if the war cause the fall of his family, then maybe it could cause the revival too. Natsu discussed with his family and soon found they disagreed with his plan. Though they disagreed he had no choice. The family seem like it was going to fall and crumble taking anybody in it with them. One year and two months later Natsu packed his stuff and decided that the time was right and this would be the start of his plans. Unfortunate for him, plans didn't go so smoothly. His parents just so happen to catch him leaving.
(Below is a short RP sample through the act of the History.)
With bags in hand and determination strong Natsu prepared to leave his home in search of an answer to solve his problems. He grabbed the door nob and turned to leave, but then felt the turning of it opening his way as well. His eyes widen as he let go and backed up. His fathers large stature appear in the door way. His expression shocked as he glanced at the packed bags. His voice stern and clear " Where do you think your heading Natsu ? " Natsu gulped and begin to speak " I'm leaving father. I really think my plan can solve our problems. " Suddenly a petite voice came from behind the large men " Natsu...Why do you insist on disobeying us ? " A slim woman stepped from behind him. Natsu stepped up and frown " Disobeying you!!. I'm trying to help this family!! " Natsu was soon interrupted by his father, who at the moment was intimidating Natsu greatly " So you want to join the enemy to fix this family " Natsu couldn't help but be surprised at his father calm attitude " how will that solve anything Natsu. If you can tell me that then you may leave. " Natsu scratched his brain for the reason and soon thought he had found it " Well dad Im'a see if I can't find a solution at the source....This war has gone on for to long it needs to end. " Hiro eyes squinted as he looked for any uncertainty in his son's words.
" Oh My God!! Hiro are you seriously thinking about this ? He's not going anywhere. " Natsu grimaced " Think about it mom. This could solve our problems.......and what about Diaku. Do you really want him growing up here in this ragged cottage! " Natsu tone calmed seeing his mom had begin to doubt her answer " Plus if i'm lucky enough, I can become a State Alchemist and start sending money to you guys. I know it's tight around here "
Hiro blew out his nose and walked towards the stairs " Natsu you seem absolute in your words. If you sure then the doors open. " the giant walked up the stairs, passing the young Diaku on his way. Diaku must of woken from the yelling as he looked like he had just woken up. Suzu approached Natsu, seeing he was taller than her she spoke " I hadn't realize you had grown so big. I feel like it was only yesterday I had to hold your hand to cross the street. " her eyes swelled with tears and soon they fell. Natsu hugged his mother " Mom it's gonna be ok. I'll be back before you know it. " Diaku's face full of confusion walked down towards Natsu. Natsu released his mom and held her shoulders " OK mom. You should go up there with dad. " Natsu slightly smiled as she wiped her tears " You better write mister or else I'm coming down there to get you. " Diaku walked pass his mother and up to Natsu. His voice still a little groogy from the nap " Where you going ? " Natsu looked down at his brother and rubbed his hair. Diaku immediately swiped his hand away " I told....I don't like that. " Natsu grinned and bent down " Diaku, do me a favor. " Diaku turned his body and begin to pick his nose " Depends. What is it ? " " Look after mom and dad for me."Natsu stood up as Diaku looked at him " That's a weird request...." Natsu walked towards the door and opened it. Daiku turned in watched him leave " You should head up to bed....It's getting late, you have school tomorrow. " Diaku just stared at him as he left " Yea....I hear ya bro "
(END)
A couple of months later Natsu had arrived in the city of Reseembol. Where he made a life and started to train for the State's Alchemist test.
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ALCHEMIC ABILITY:
→ Through understanding the properties of Alchemy. Natsu has learn to control the earth's protons and molecules. Through alchemy he is capable of controlling greenery of earth(vines and leaves)
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TRIVIA:
→ He has a rare illness and which a flower from his home has the ability to make him extremely weak and can cause death if not treated.
→ He is able to speak Cretarian,Amestrian.
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ALIAS:
→ Narku
OTHER CHARACTERS:
→ Only character
CREATOR'S COMMENTS:
→ N/A
FACE CLAIM:
- Code:
[b]Naruto/Masashi Kishimoto[/b]/[i]Sasuke[/i]
CUSTOM RANK:
→ The Earth's Host
OFFICIAL TITLE:
→ Biennial
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Last edited by Natsu Leiol on Sat Oct 23, 2010 9:59 pm; edited 3 times in total
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Re: Natsu Leiol
REVISE
Welcome to MDA! You will be approved as soon as you make a few subtle changes. Looks awesome so far. My comments:
1. Change your user name (under profile) to "Natsu", "Hero", or "Natsu Hero"
2. Your header pictures are HUGE so just make them 100x100 in photoshop or something. I can always do it for you if you don't know how to do it. ('Cause I really like that picture...it's awesome).
3. Avatar: You icon is of Bleach, but you're character is Sasuke's face claim so that kind of throws people off. This is a suggestion, but I think it'd be cooler if you changed it to your header fanart. Again, I can make the icon if need be.
4. Personality: At least 300 words~ Just add a little more to what you have. I like it so far!
5. Deepest Secrets: So damn cool! Nice idea. And I totally have that plant growing by my mailbox ;P
6. History: What war...? Are you inventing a Cretan war that went on while Amestris was at peace? You might want to explain this a little further so we know what they were fighting over and so we can work it into the plot. Your dialogue is great! I really feel the family connection.
7. Alchemic ability: I like this. I'm going "FINALLY!" So just explain photosynthesis in relation to alchemy in your transmutation application.
8. Age: Remember, you have to be at least 17 years old in order to be a State Alchemist.
Everything else = Perfect~
Welcome to MDA! You will be approved as soon as you make a few subtle changes. Looks awesome so far. My comments:
1. Change your user name (under profile) to "Natsu", "Hero", or "Natsu Hero"
2. Your header pictures are HUGE so just make them 100x100 in photoshop or something. I can always do it for you if you don't know how to do it. ('Cause I really like that picture...it's awesome).
3. Avatar: You icon is of Bleach, but you're character is Sasuke's face claim so that kind of throws people off. This is a suggestion, but I think it'd be cooler if you changed it to your header fanart. Again, I can make the icon if need be.
4. Personality: At least 300 words~ Just add a little more to what you have. I like it so far!
5. Deepest Secrets: So damn cool! Nice idea. And I totally have that plant growing by my mailbox ;P
6. History: What war...? Are you inventing a Cretan war that went on while Amestris was at peace? You might want to explain this a little further so we know what they were fighting over and so we can work it into the plot. Your dialogue is great! I really feel the family connection.
7. Alchemic ability: I like this. I'm going "FINALLY!" So just explain photosynthesis in relation to alchemy in your transmutation application.
8. Age: Remember, you have to be at least 17 years old in order to be a State Alchemist.
Everything else = Perfect~
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Re: Natsu Leiol
Ok forgive the message I sent you lol
But if you wouldn't mind doing that, the avatar and picture on top that is. I'll get to work on those other improvements right now.
But if you wouldn't mind doing that, the avatar and picture on top that is. I'll get to work on those other improvements right now.
Last edited by Natsu Leiol on Sat Oct 23, 2010 11:43 pm; edited 1 time in total
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Re: Natsu Leiol
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What message...?
Ah! I like that last name better~ >D
And here you are (it took me like 5 minutes so don't worry):
(I used the kanji for summer [Natsu])
I couldn't decide which one looked cooler, so I left it up to you.
Post here for your station: https://mdalchemist.rpg-board.net/classifieds-f15/
Since I'm guessing you want to be a Military Alchemist.
What message...?
Ah! I like that last name better~ >D
And here you are (it took me like 5 minutes so don't worry):
(I used the kanji for summer [Natsu])
I couldn't decide which one looked cooler, so I left it up to you.
Post here for your station: https://mdalchemist.rpg-board.net/classifieds-f15/
Since I'm guessing you want to be a Military Alchemist.
Aurelius Schwartz- SWEAT MY RUST
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Points : 9
Location : Rouen
-Case File-
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Rank: King of RIOTE
Writer: Aki
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