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Joumae Versin
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Joumae Versin
by Guest Tue Sep 21, 2010 7:22 pm
CASE FILE: Alchemist {Sergeant Major}
FULL NAME:
→ Joumae Versin
AGE:
→ 19
SEX:
→ Male
BIRTH PLACE:
→ Xing
RACE:
→ Xingese/Ishvallan
DATE OF BIRTH:
→ September 10
HEIGHT:
→ 183
WEIGHT:
→ 73
PICTURE:
→
DESCRIPTION:
→ Pale skin, white hair and red eyes. Versin wears a black vest, black pants and black shoes. Has a slim looking but well built body. Versin wears silver colored gloves with long metal threads. Versin also wears sunglasses to hide his red eyes. Usually has an emotionless look on his face.
Versin also has two other appearances one of them is when Versin dyes his hair black, wears black colored eye contacts, a black business suit, a white under shirt and a black tie. Versin does this so he can look like a normal Xingese male, when Versin is using this appearance he goes by the persona named Hara Hyouga. With Versin’s persona Hara Hyouga he does not do alchemy and hides the fact that he can. In Versin other appearance he wears a black hooded cloak with black shoes and a white fox mask with a voice modifier, this persona is called White Fox. Unlike with his other persona Hara Hyouga, Versin uses alchemy freely with White Fox and works as a mercenary.
PERSONALITY:
→ Hides his real emotions, but can fake emotions to adapt to the situation. Versin can’t stand not being in control over a situation. Versin has a major superiority complex so he can’t stand someone thinking that they are better then him. Versin likes to manipulate people, while keeping facts about himself and his plans secret. He likes to plan every step of what his going to do next.
Likes to read, learn and research. Has a higher level intelligence. Versin can sometimes be cruel and uncaring. He is also a perfectionist when it comes to his strategies. Versin is completely obsessed about completing his true goal.
Versin does not believe in a god or the thing people call a soul. He has heard of “Soul Transmutation” but believes it is nothing more then taking information from the brain and putting it in an object. Versin also does not believe in good or evil. He believes if a person can’t adapt to the situation or to the world then the person is weak and should die, similar to an animal that can’t evolve so it goes extinct. Has a fascination with foxes because when he was a child he would read in stories about how foxes would trick other animals and people in order to get what they wanted, this was one of the main things that made Versin want to become a strategist.
Versin is so careful about making sure that people don’t know about the two personas being him that he give them their own personality that differs far from Versin’s. Hara Hyouga’s personality is that he thinks everything has to do with business. Every time he talks to someone he talks to them as if it was a business negotiation. Hara Hyouga sees people as if they our nothing more then tools to be used for him to get the best deal.
White Fox’s personality is very violent and cruel. White Fox’s personality also has a childish side. White Fox’s favorite thing to do is to trick others for his own amusement. If tricks don’t work White Fox will just destroy anything that gets in his way for his own self-indulgences. Has no loyalty to anyone and will betray even the people his working for.
Versin also takes a shower after every time he smokes his cigarettes so people can’t tell he and his two personas are the same person by the smell, some people would call that paranoid but Versin thinks it’s just being careful.
LOVE:
→ Cigarettes with tobacco from Xing.
→ Books about alchemy and different nations.
→ Making strategies.
→ The colors black and white.
→ Manipulating people.
HATE:
→ Cigarettes with tobacco other then from Xing.
→ Books about romance and comedy.
→ Unknown variables getting in the way of his strategies.
→ Bright colors.
→ Not being in control over a situation.
DEEPEST SECRET:
→ His true goal.
HISTORY:
→ The Joumae Clan is a family that is known for serving the Xing Empire for generations. Underneath this proud clan lays a dark secret, that secret is that the clan has Ishvallan blood mixed in with their Xingese blood line. It had been many generations since the Ishvallan blood originally mixed with the Joumae Clan’s Xingese blood line, so the Ishvallan blood had been greatly diluted over the years. It had been a long time since a Joumae child was born with any Ishvallan characteristics. So because of that the Joumae Clan thought that their secret would be safe, but one day a Joumae child was born with Ishvallan white hair and red eyes named Versin.
The members of the Joumae Clan talked long time among themselves about what to do about the child born with Ishvallan characteristics named Versin. The members of the Joumae Clan feared so mush about their secret being exposed that they even considered killing the child in order to keep their secret safe. In the end they decided to let the child live, but there were conditions to this. Those conditions were all the documents about the child named Versin being a Joumae had to be destroyed, the child would never be given the last name Joumae, the child would always have to cover his eyes, the child would always be a servant to the Joumae Clan and that child could never step a foot outside of the Joumae Clan’s mansion. So Versin grew up with these conditions knowing that if he did not fallow them, then he would be killed.
In the Joumae Clan’s mansion Versin lived in its underground basement and the members of the Joumae Clan would not let him out of the basement unless he had chores to do. His chores were washing, dusting, cooking and serving meals. He would have to do this till morning to night everyday. With a hate for humanity and a fear of death, Versin had no chose but to live a life without aspiration, joy, hope and meaning. The only thing that gave Versin a little bit of joy was when he would dust the books in the mansion’s library, as he did that he would then read the books about alchemy, different nations and martial arts.
Versin loved learning new thinks like different nations’ languages, their type of alchemy and their martial arts. For years Versin was obsessed about learning new things. After some time had pasted Versin became more and more intelligent. He became so intelligent that he learned how to speak in Amestrian, Auregese, Creterian and Drachman just by reading about their nations over and over again.
One day Versin was going over the books in the mansion’s library after he was done dusting like he always did. While he was looking through the books he found a hidden lever behind some of the books, so Versin pulled down the lever revealing a secret door the lead to a hidden room. Versin then went through the door into the room; inside the room were old books in Ishvallan. Versin did not know if the Ishvallan side of the family hid the books from the Joumae Clan or if the Joumae Clan hid the Ishvallan books themselves so they could keep their secret safe, but Verisn was just excited to learn something new about a nation. So Versin put all of his energy in to learning the Ishvallan language.
Once Versin had learned the Ishvallan language he went into the hidden room again to read the old books in Ishvallan. It was when Versin was reading the Ishvallan books he read something that changed his life forever. Versin now had a goal in his life and he knew he would ever accomplish that goal if he was trapped in the Joumae Clan’s mansion. So Versin dug a tunnel in the hidden room to make sure the Joumae family would not find out about his plans of escape. When Versin was done with his escape he took on the persona White Fox, he then hid in the underground crime world working as a mercenary.
After a couple of years of hiding in the shadows of the underground crime world, Versin came back to the normal world using his connections with the underground crime world he got with his persona White Fox. He used those connections to forge documents so he could have a fake identity named Hara Hyouga. After years of waiting Versin is now setting in motion his plan to complete his true goal.
ALCHEMIC/ALKAHESTRIC ABILITY:
→ The ability to control bodies or parts of bodies with electric impulses.
TRIVIA:
→ Xingese, Ishvallan Amestrian, Auregese, Creterian and Drachman.
ALIAS:
→ Versin
OTHER CHARACTERS:
→ First character.
CREATOR'S COMMENTS:
→ The reason why this character took so long to complete is because I kept getting new ideas for him and sometimes I would change the whole detraction of what I was originally planning for him, but in the end I’m pretty happy about how he turned out.
CUSTOM RANK:
→ White Fox
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
...........................................................................
“Whose to say what’s good or evil the thing we have never seen with our eyes called god or our humanity, the same humanity that judges a person by the color of their skin, gender and the family they are born into. I personally couldn’t give less of a damn. All I see is a world full of tools called people, some that are somewhat useful and others that are completely useless.”
...........................................................................
“Whose to say what’s good or evil the thing we have never seen with our eyes called god or our humanity, the same humanity that judges a person by the color of their skin, gender and the family they are born into. I personally couldn’t give less of a damn. All I see is a world full of tools called people, some that are somewhat useful and others that are completely useless.”
...........................................................................
FULL NAME:
→ Joumae Versin
AGE:
→ 19
SEX:
→ Male
BIRTH PLACE:
RACE:
→ Xingese/Ishvallan
DATE OF BIRTH:
→ September 10
...........................................................................
HEIGHT:
→ 183
WEIGHT:
→ 73
PICTURE:
→
- Spoiler:
DESCRIPTION:
→ Pale skin, white hair and red eyes. Versin wears a black vest, black pants and black shoes. Has a slim looking but well built body. Versin wears silver colored gloves with long metal threads. Versin also wears sunglasses to hide his red eyes. Usually has an emotionless look on his face.
Versin also has two other appearances one of them is when Versin dyes his hair black, wears black colored eye contacts, a black business suit, a white under shirt and a black tie. Versin does this so he can look like a normal Xingese male, when Versin is using this appearance he goes by the persona named Hara Hyouga. With Versin’s persona Hara Hyouga he does not do alchemy and hides the fact that he can. In Versin other appearance he wears a black hooded cloak with black shoes and a white fox mask with a voice modifier, this persona is called White Fox. Unlike with his other persona Hara Hyouga, Versin uses alchemy freely with White Fox and works as a mercenary.
...........................................................................
PERSONALITY:
→ Hides his real emotions, but can fake emotions to adapt to the situation. Versin can’t stand not being in control over a situation. Versin has a major superiority complex so he can’t stand someone thinking that they are better then him. Versin likes to manipulate people, while keeping facts about himself and his plans secret. He likes to plan every step of what his going to do next.
Likes to read, learn and research. Has a higher level intelligence. Versin can sometimes be cruel and uncaring. He is also a perfectionist when it comes to his strategies. Versin is completely obsessed about completing his true goal.
Versin does not believe in a god or the thing people call a soul. He has heard of “Soul Transmutation” but believes it is nothing more then taking information from the brain and putting it in an object. Versin also does not believe in good or evil. He believes if a person can’t adapt to the situation or to the world then the person is weak and should die, similar to an animal that can’t evolve so it goes extinct. Has a fascination with foxes because when he was a child he would read in stories about how foxes would trick other animals and people in order to get what they wanted, this was one of the main things that made Versin want to become a strategist.
Versin is so careful about making sure that people don’t know about the two personas being him that he give them their own personality that differs far from Versin’s. Hara Hyouga’s personality is that he thinks everything has to do with business. Every time he talks to someone he talks to them as if it was a business negotiation. Hara Hyouga sees people as if they our nothing more then tools to be used for him to get the best deal.
White Fox’s personality is very violent and cruel. White Fox’s personality also has a childish side. White Fox’s favorite thing to do is to trick others for his own amusement. If tricks don’t work White Fox will just destroy anything that gets in his way for his own self-indulgences. Has no loyalty to anyone and will betray even the people his working for.
Versin also takes a shower after every time he smokes his cigarettes so people can’t tell he and his two personas are the same person by the smell, some people would call that paranoid but Versin thinks it’s just being careful.
LOVE:
→ Cigarettes with tobacco from Xing.
→ Books about alchemy and different nations.
→ Making strategies.
→ The colors black and white.
→ Manipulating people.
HATE:
→ Cigarettes with tobacco other then from Xing.
→ Books about romance and comedy.
→ Unknown variables getting in the way of his strategies.
→ Bright colors.
→ Not being in control over a situation.
DEEPEST SECRET:
→ His true goal.
...........................................................................
HISTORY:
→ The Joumae Clan is a family that is known for serving the Xing Empire for generations. Underneath this proud clan lays a dark secret, that secret is that the clan has Ishvallan blood mixed in with their Xingese blood line. It had been many generations since the Ishvallan blood originally mixed with the Joumae Clan’s Xingese blood line, so the Ishvallan blood had been greatly diluted over the years. It had been a long time since a Joumae child was born with any Ishvallan characteristics. So because of that the Joumae Clan thought that their secret would be safe, but one day a Joumae child was born with Ishvallan white hair and red eyes named Versin.
The members of the Joumae Clan talked long time among themselves about what to do about the child born with Ishvallan characteristics named Versin. The members of the Joumae Clan feared so mush about their secret being exposed that they even considered killing the child in order to keep their secret safe. In the end they decided to let the child live, but there were conditions to this. Those conditions were all the documents about the child named Versin being a Joumae had to be destroyed, the child would never be given the last name Joumae, the child would always have to cover his eyes, the child would always be a servant to the Joumae Clan and that child could never step a foot outside of the Joumae Clan’s mansion. So Versin grew up with these conditions knowing that if he did not fallow them, then he would be killed.
In the Joumae Clan’s mansion Versin lived in its underground basement and the members of the Joumae Clan would not let him out of the basement unless he had chores to do. His chores were washing, dusting, cooking and serving meals. He would have to do this till morning to night everyday. With a hate for humanity and a fear of death, Versin had no chose but to live a life without aspiration, joy, hope and meaning. The only thing that gave Versin a little bit of joy was when he would dust the books in the mansion’s library, as he did that he would then read the books about alchemy, different nations and martial arts.
Versin loved learning new thinks like different nations’ languages, their type of alchemy and their martial arts. For years Versin was obsessed about learning new things. After some time had pasted Versin became more and more intelligent. He became so intelligent that he learned how to speak in Amestrian, Auregese, Creterian and Drachman just by reading about their nations over and over again.
One day Versin was going over the books in the mansion’s library after he was done dusting like he always did. While he was looking through the books he found a hidden lever behind some of the books, so Versin pulled down the lever revealing a secret door the lead to a hidden room. Versin then went through the door into the room; inside the room were old books in Ishvallan. Versin did not know if the Ishvallan side of the family hid the books from the Joumae Clan or if the Joumae Clan hid the Ishvallan books themselves so they could keep their secret safe, but Verisn was just excited to learn something new about a nation. So Versin put all of his energy in to learning the Ishvallan language.
Once Versin had learned the Ishvallan language he went into the hidden room again to read the old books in Ishvallan. It was when Versin was reading the Ishvallan books he read something that changed his life forever. Versin now had a goal in his life and he knew he would ever accomplish that goal if he was trapped in the Joumae Clan’s mansion. So Versin dug a tunnel in the hidden room to make sure the Joumae family would not find out about his plans of escape. When Versin was done with his escape he took on the persona White Fox, he then hid in the underground crime world working as a mercenary.
After a couple of years of hiding in the shadows of the underground crime world, Versin came back to the normal world using his connections with the underground crime world he got with his persona White Fox. He used those connections to forge documents so he could have a fake identity named Hara Hyouga. After years of waiting Versin is now setting in motion his plan to complete his true goal.
...........................................................................
ALCHEMIC/ALKAHESTRIC ABILITY:
→ The ability to control bodies or parts of bodies with electric impulses.
...........................................................................
TRIVIA:
→ Xingese, Ishvallan Amestrian, Auregese, Creterian and Drachman.
...........................................................................
ALIAS:
→ Versin
OTHER CHARACTERS:
→ First character.
CREATOR'S COMMENTS:
→ The reason why this character took so long to complete is because I kept getting new ideas for him and sometimes I would change the whole detraction of what I was originally planning for him, but in the end I’m pretty happy about how he turned out.
CUSTOM RANK:
→ White Fox
...........................................................................
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Last edited by Versin on Wed Sep 22, 2010 3:47 am; edited 5 times in total
Guest- Guest
Re: Joumae Versin
by Guest Wed Sep 22, 2010 3:09 am
Alright, just because of a couple of things, I'll be adding my two cents in here.
It's a brilliant app, save for a few grammatical and spelling errors here and there.
Your image at the top of the app is a bit sizey. I can recommend that you fix it, so that it's smaller. To put it in code:
Don't forget to enter a lyric or quote that would come from your character in the italicized area...
And you've removed a huge part of the top section when you've put the image in there... Simply edit this in above the image, and you should be fine.
And... I believe that is everything. Just make the directed edits, and it'll be at an acceptable level.
^_^ And try not to get into any more fights with Aki - Or I might just step in myself. And Aki's nicer than I am. ;P
It's a brilliant app, save for a few grammatical and spelling errors here and there.
No. I'll allow "higher" intelligence, but genius-level is quite over-used, and we really don't need heaps and heaps of manipulative geniuses running around the site.Has a genius level intelligence.
Your image at the top of the app is a bit sizey. I can recommend that you fix it, so that it's smaller. To put it in code:
- Code:
<img src="http://i961.photobucket.com/albums/ae93/Ninstruck/lunapic_128323994265636_2.gif" width="300px">
Don't forget to enter a lyric or quote that would come from your character in the italicized area...
And you've removed a huge part of the top section when you've put the image in there... Simply edit this in above the image, and you should be fine.
- Code:
[size=24][font=courier new]CASE FILE: Alchemist[/font][/size]
And... I believe that is everything. Just make the directed edits, and it'll be at an acceptable level.
^_^ And try not to get into any more fights with Aki - Or I might just step in myself. And Aki's nicer than I am. ;P
Guest- Guest
Re: Joumae Versin
by Guest Wed Sep 22, 2010 3:52 am
Ok, I’ve made the changes. Thanks for the complement and yea I don’t want to fight with Aki.
Guest- Guest
Re: Joumae Versin
by Guest Sun Nov 14, 2010 12:37 am
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