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Reila's Arsenal
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Reila's Arsenal
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CASE FILE: Custom Weapon
Tsukino Reila
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→ No name
TYPE:
→ Sword, Dagger/Knife, & Pole-arm variations
FORM:
→ Rapier, Lionheart, Sabre, Rapier Spear (with varying blades), Scythe, Pike, Lance, etc.
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BRIEFING:
→ Reila's primary weapon has transitioned from a tachi into a spear due to preference. Although she can change its form at any given time, she prefers this over the others due to her small physical size. Her entirely metal spear folds up into a leather pouch at her left side usually by a hook clipped to a chain around her waist. At the tip of the spear is a stretched spade shape coming to a strong tip, but leading down into an opened, circular fixture much like a clutch to connect the blade to the pole.
Reila likes using longer weapons that are more curved because it suits her short reach and strangely unpredictable combat style. It also positively effects her wind alchemy when she uses the momentum of her swing to generate it. Her spear in it's original state is thicker in metal than most others. This makes the weapon weigh more and forces Reila to be stronger in order to wield it. The reason for this is because the extra metal is needed in order for it to take on its other forms.
PICTURE:
→ Main Weapon:
- Spoiler:
→ Variations:
- Spoiler:
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SPECIAL ABILITIES:
→ Using her alchemy, Reila is able to change the form of her weapon into any of those listed above.
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Last edited by Reila Tsukino on Sat Sep 29, 2012 7:03 pm; edited 2 times in total
Reila TsukinoPENDING - Posts : 2269
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Re: Reila's Arsenal
REVISE
1) First off id like to point out that Lionheart, as cool as it sounds, is not a type of weapon. If thats the name put it under name, if not please remove it.
2) You got some redundancies going on in your type/form area so lets see if we can clean that up. A spear is in fact a type of poll arm(A poll arm being any weapon with a long shaft). Rapier should be listed under form only and not type, change rapier under type to sword. You dont list the scythe under type, just form. You have spear with varying blades listed in form, no need to have pike and lance listed with that as well.
3) Briefing is for a description of the weapons, not for what she does with them. But seeing as yours is variable, just describe 2-3 of them to give us a general idea of what she likes to make.
4) You have some abilities mixed into your briefing, if you could kindly remove those and put them into the abilities i will give them a look.
After all this is done let me know and ill come back for another look and see whats up.^^
Brendon EtheridgePENDING - Posts : 54
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Re: Reila's Arsenal
You posted on the wrong account.
1. Lionheart is the name of a TYPE of sword, yes?
2. Okay, I took out spear then. And rapier is a type of sword, got it. Scythe was never under type. XD I want pike and lance listed there too because they have different lengths not just tips
3. I described what her main weapon is. I wouldn't typically need to describe the others since it varies so much. But I added more description since you requested it.
4. Abilities? No?
1. Lionheart is the name of a TYPE of sword, yes?
2. Okay, I took out spear then. And rapier is a type of sword, got it. Scythe was never under type. XD I want pike and lance listed there too because they have different lengths not just tips
3. I described what her main weapon is. I wouldn't typically need to describe the others since it varies so much. But I added more description since you requested it.
4. Abilities? No?
Reila TsukinoPENDING - Posts : 2269
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Re: Reila's Arsenal
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Well it looks like I've learned something today, Lionheart is in fact a type of sword in real life and not just in ff8 XDD Looks like I've learned something today! LEVEL UP!! On another note, and after doing a little reading, the increased weight and the wind alchemy boost seem to fit, considering the nature of the weapon.
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