Castor's "A Key to the Gods"(Complete)

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CASE FILE: Custom Weapon

Character's name here
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NAME:
→ A Key To the Gods

TYPE:
→ Long-Sword/Rapier (Light weight, Easy to maneuver, but long edged blade)

FORM:
→ Sword

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BRIEFING:
→ A Custom-made sword. A one of a kind. Virtually unbreakable, the blade is about Four feet tall, while the handle is another foot. On the bottom of the handle is a keychain that is 3 pendants and at the end of the pendants is a flatter pendant that looks like half a spiderweb. The hand looks like something from a science-fiction movie, with a blood red hand-guard. the blade is a silver and bronze colour, with a red line on the upper edge. At the top is a glowing heart connected to small black spires connected to another blade that looks more rugged. The swords key-chain can be stretched out into a strap for carrying.

PICTURE:
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Spoiler:

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SPECIAL ABILITIES:
→ Love's Glow: The heart at the end of the blade charges energy from self powering motors in the hilt that runs up through the back edge up the blade. Once fully charged it can shoot an explosive blast out of the black spires facing outward. This move is extremely dangerous and was not recommended in use by the smith who made the sword. The explosion has a diameter of about 5ft, and can be shot up to 20 feet. Because the motors in the hilt power themselves and the blast, it takes over an hour to charge up fully.

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REVISE

1] Virtually unbreakable - yeah... no. Give me some description of the material it's made from.

2] A five foot blade would be long and unwieldy. You're talking claymore size. It would be pretty fucking hefty, you're going to want to be careful.

3]

The hand looks like something from a science-fiction movie

This is really bad description. Don't use analogies. What if the person who reads this has never watched a sci-fi movie? Highly unlikely, but the principle stands. Give individual description, don't compare.

4] Explain to me how this thing is so long, yet so light, and so strong all at the same time. It's contradictory. Something long and lightweight would be flimsy as all fuck, but yet you give it unnatural strength for no reason.

5] What material is it made out of?

6] For the special ability: self-powering? How do they power? Do they spin when he swings the blade?

7] If it's not recommended for use by the smith... why the hell did he include it?

8] Explosive blast of what? Magical energy? Fire? Gunpowder? You can't just launch ethereal magic blasts. Science. Use it.

9] I'm seriously going to recommend you stop trying to apply KH logic and KH weaponry to a site founded on science. There are millions of cool-looking sci-fi swords out there which don't seem like a blatant Nomura rip-off... a sense of being unique is... nice. I find it to be, at least.

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Archive date is the 30th.

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