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[Guest]

CASE FILE: Transmutation Equipment

Alexia [Yin] Rake
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NAME:
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TYPE:
→ Elemental Fire :: Sub Type - Molecular Decomposition // Advanced Scorching

LEVEL:
→ Level One

FORM:
→ Yin's weapons have been engraved on her right and left arm; resembling a spiraling black blaze with the transmutation inscriptions going down from her elbow to her finger tips.

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BRIEFING:
→ The scorching black blaze of Alexia Rake is one used mostly at an offensive standpoint. Unlike that of regular alchemist; Alexia must have physical contact with either an object or another being to be able to use her transmutation. Even so, this only scratches the surface of its ability, as it is used to superheat molecules to the point of them melting and falling apart. Though originally Alexia attempted to have the results through the Dragon Pulse; she soon found she could do this with regular alchemy. Pursuing the fact that giving an overabundance of energy through an object causes it to fall apart at the seems, was the sole thing that made this transmutation come to be. It gives the appearance of the object or person [their specific limb where touched] melting like thawed out ice cream. Left behind is simply a sludge made of the object's remaining molecules or human tissue. When used on materials such as metal and steel, it will melt a hole through its make up. When used on a liquid surface such as water/ice; it will cause a sudden burst of steam to emit across the air. It is completely useless against heat resistant items and alchemy, however.

It took years for Yin to be able to use this circle without destroying her own arms. Learning as much as she could from the Xing culture and basic principles of the natural flow of energy; she was able to manipulate it to extremes. The Alchemist that uses this transmutation much have learned about the process of hyperactive molecules being sped up to such an extreme to where they begin to fall apart at the seems. Complex understanding of 'decomposition' is needed with the same extent of chemical reactions. For this all to come together, the flow of energy through the living and non living must be known to a high extent. In colder atmospheres, it is harder to over heat an object or being. It takes 7 seconds of physical contact for the results to come into play. If under water, this technique is useless as it can just cause the water to boil and kill the user through the intense heat. It takes a second for an extremely hot climate [Such as a desert with temperatures ranging from 90 degrees up.] In normal circumstances, physical contact must be held for atleast 3 seconds before the reaction begins.

The supercharge can be sent through the ground as a conduit for a ranged attack aswell, as the ground will decompose and burst into flames as it travels towards the target. This works on mostly all surfaces; but the same rules apply when it comes to how fast the reaction will happen. The range of this attack is up to 10 meters [32 feet] before it dies down; and it travels at 2 meters within .50 milliseconds.

PICTURE:
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Spoiler:

→ The complex transmutation circle is embedded upon Yin's arms. Placed here by her former teacher, the circle combines the teachings of Xing refugees and basic alchemist principles. Though it originated in Xing, the product of her circle focused upon Amestrian teachings which makes it a sort of bi-product of both. First starting with the basic Xing teachings and then evolving into Amestrian philosophy to pull it together into what it is today. This transmutation inscription spreads from her elbow down her forearm and to each finger tip. Yin has learned of the Dragon Pulse; though now uses the tectonic shifts and practices manipulation of matter toward scientifically practical ends. The Dragon Pulse is not needed in this form of Alchemy for now and ever more.

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SPECIAL ABILITIES:
→ Decomposition :: The basic ability of Yin's attacks. Supercharging molecules on touch she can melt limbs off of living beings or even cause surfaces and materials to melt aswell. However, it isn't effective vs heat resistant materials. It takes 3 seconds of physical contact to melt a plain surface. 7 seconds for colder surfaces. And a second for an extremely hot climate [Such as a desert with temperatures ranging from 90 degrees up.] It can be used at close range or a 10 meter range. -[The supercharge can be sent through the earth as a conduit for a ranged attack aswell, as the earth will decompose and burst into flames as it travels towards the target. This works on mostly all surfaces; but the same rules apply when it comes to how fast the reaction will happen. The range of this attack is up to 10 meters [32 feet] before it dies down; and it travels at 2 meters within .50 milliseconds.]-

[Aurelius Schwartz]

REVISE

Everything is perfect, but you can't combine alchemy and alkahestry with this ability since there is no need to. This is alchemy and I don't see any reason to bring in alkahestry or the dragon pulse at all.

Also, you should add in a range for your ranged attack--like with a distance of so-and-so feet.

[Guest]

kk I edited. Though I would like to keep a mention of the Dragon Pulse since she originated in Xing and it was the first step for her to become interested in Alchemy in the first place. However I changed it so it doesn't have anything to do with the Alchemy itself now.

[Aurelius Schwartz]

APPROVED

Yeah, that's perfect then. ^_^

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