Salane's Transmutation Circle

[Guest]

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CASE FILE: Transmutation Equipment

Salane Rhoana Tenswin
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NAME:
→ Sand storm
TYPE:
→ Sand/elemental

LEVEL:
→1

FORM:
→ The circle is actually tattooed on the left side, near the bottom of the that sides set of her ribs. It is about the size of a dodge ball all together if you were to remove it and place it out in front of you. The colors are the same.

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BRIEFING:
→ Being one who can control fine dirt and rock (sand) as well as slightly larger bits of rock, and sand being like water, She can bend and twist it to her whim. Allowing her(she does not know how yet) to use the sands to make loose and solid objects like ice and water. She can make shields and even entomb herself guard herself and anyone else. She needs to know exactly what she around and where on the map she is at. If she does not know, she will be in the dark when it comes to a fight. But this does come with plenty downsides.

If at anytime it rains it almost renders her abilities almost completely useless. The rain makes the sand mold and connect to others...making mud. And when mud forms it greatly limits her. She can control it, but only to splash it at her enemies, hoping that it will get in their eyes so she can make a run for it. Also since not all sand and rock are the same, the sand's strength itself are varied. For instance, if she was in the desert, she would be untouchable. Since the sand and dust is everywhere. But near a more greener or more rocky area, which has limestone, clay ,and other soft rock and elements. She would have to use more power and more concentration cause it would take more to do more.

PICTURE:
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Spoiler:

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SPECIAL ABILITIES:
→Entomb = Allows her to place a layer of sand on ones skin. Absorbing damage till it breaks and or fracturs

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[Reila Tsukino]

REVISE

1. What you have written right under the picture is what you should have for FORM.

2. BRIEFING: You can only control sand at the moment and that has nothing to do with ice or water so take that out:

"Being one who can control fine dirt and rock (sand) as well as slightly larger bits of rock, and sand being like water, She can bend and twist it to her whim. Allowing her(she does not know how yet) to use the sands to make loose and solid objects like ice and water. She can make shields and even entomb herself guard herself and anyone else. And also like water she can pressurize/compress the sands like water and air in a spray bottle. In which she uses to make sandstorms and to blow and or harm people that wants to harm her. Also she uses this to move around, she shifts the sand and this helps her know where she is going. She needs to know exactly what she around and where on the map she is at. If she does not know, she will be in the dark when it comes to a fight. But this does come with plenty downsides.

If at anytime it rains it almost renders her abilities almost completely useless. The rain makes the sand mold and connect to others...making mud. And when mud forms it greatly limits her. She can control it, but only to splash it at her enemies, hoping that it will get in their eyes so she can make a run for it. Also since not all sand and rock are the same, the sand's strength itself are varied. For instance, if she was in the desert, she would be untouchable. Since the sand and dust is everywhere. But near a more greener or more rocky area, which has limestone, clay ,and other soft rock and elements. She would have to use more power and more concentration cause it would take more to do more."

[Guest]

*Sigh now i know why i was so unsure about making an alchemist. Being a burden >~<. but I will fix.

K how bout now

[Reila Tsukino]

It's good, but this line: "to use the sands to make loose and solid objects like ice and water." You mean you can harden sand like water can harden into ice? Also you cannot manipulate the MOVEMENT of sand because alchemy is all about MAKING something from something else, not moving things. So your alchemic ability of lining your skin with a protective layer of sand is perfect; you just have to explain that and ONLY that in the Briefing section.

I have no idea why I didn't get an email from your reply... I'm so sorry. T_T

[Reila Tsukino]

Bump

[Dai]

Bump.

Archive Date is 16 October.

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