Deidrich, Castor

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CASE FILE: Alchemist


"You won't know if you've made something of your life until you die, look down at the people, and see them crying or laughing." - "Waiting for tomorrow, Wishing for yesterday."
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FULL NAME:
→ Castor Deidrich

AGE:
→ 18

SEX:
→ Male

BIRTH PLACE:
→ Amestris, Youswell

RACE:
→ Amestrian

DATE OF BIRTH:
→ April 15th 1994

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HEIGHT:
→ 5'11"

WEIGHT:
→ 134lbs

PICTURE:
→

Spoiler:

DESCRIPTION:
→ I have Medium length, shaggy greyish brown hair. My eyes change color from green, blue, brown, and grey(Yes this is real, my eyes are like this). At the moment they are a brownish grey. I wear multi-shade grey hat and a blood red bandanna underneath, a brown collared vest and I have necklace that looks like as though it were military dogtags, quite a few men in the town I lived in resented me for it. I got them from my father. I wear dark brown, leather, Steal toed boots with transmutation circles on the underside of both boots for quick transmutations. I also wear two sterling silver chains inscribed with the same transmutation circle on my right wrist. My left arm has been replaced with the best automail money can buy. It may look like a regular human arm, but it is much stronger. My jeans are a faded dark-blue with a pistol holster holding a small colt .45 and one clip. When I walk, I walk with a slow medium length stride.

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PERSONALITY:
→ "A quiet young man who always thinks of others before himself. I'm so *coughcough* proud of my son"(Reis Deidrich). Standing up for what is right is his first thought. Ever since his father died his sense of justice has been extremely large. He has no ego even though he was raised in a very wealthy home. He is rather mature for his age and would rather study and read, then "hang-out" with other teenagers his age. This has gotten him insulted many times and is often the subject of bullying by others his age. Although he is abused physically and mentally by others he is a very kind young man still learning the ropes of the world. Any way he could help others is how he achieves happiness. He can be quite sadistic at times. An example of this is when he realized what his mother was planning for him. When he realized they were trying to force marry him he used his alchemy on a rampage and almost destroyed the Deidrich mansion.
He loves to make others happy, even at the cost of his own happiness. He often misreads what others are saying for something negative and often is in a state of depression. Getting out of this state is very easy for him. One positive thing could make his day, or break it. Music is one of his passions. His moods change with the music he is listening to. Slow music = Neutral mood, Thrashy = Restless mood, and anything in-between. Whenever it rains he seems to get rather... sad and depressed. We believe it has something to do with his past but no-one knows of any trauma in his life that has anything to do with rain. Even so, he chooses to stand outside every time it rains.


LOVE:
→ Rain
→ Alchemy
→ Storms
→ Music
→ Books

HATE:
→ Fire
→ Power-Hungry men
→ Military
→ Father
→ Commitment

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HISTORY:
→ (In the words of an old military report made of the whole family) Born into the family of the Deidrich, One of the wealthier families of Youswell. The father Reis Deidrich and the mother Aliss(A-Lees) Deidrich were brilliant alchemists. At the age of one they enlisted Castor into a private boarding school for the gifted. At age five he was considered a prodigy, already creating small beam-like structures out of stone. After four more years of being away from home, on the date of March 27th 2003, his father called him home from his training. On April 7th 2003 he arrived home to find his father on his deathbed from a severe case of influenza.
On May 1st, Reis Deidrich passed away leaving his entire fortune to his son, Castor Deidrich. Everyday we recieve trash thrown away by each member of the household labeled as such. Today we found Castor's journal. I will record some of his entries.

Entry #483: My father is dying. I really don't know what to do. He gave me a necklace he said was given to him by his father... but it looks military. I don't understand, I thought he hated the military. He told me even after he died, we would be well off. I don't really get what he meant.

Only at the age of eleven, already one of this most wealthy in the small town of Youswell. With this mass amount of money, Many people sought to arrange a marriage with the young boy.

Entry #510: Today a girl I liked from my old school came to my house today... The parents told us to go and play outside so we did, but she kept going on about how we were going to be so happy, and how she would be soooooo~ rich and how she would buy lots of candy and horses. I didn't know what she was talking about so I ignored it.

His mother, now a widow, sought for the proposals but Castor refused. Holding himself in his private study, Castor studied alchemy more and more.

Entry #532 The me and the girl have been having "Playdates" for a while now. She keeps talking about marriage. Whenever I ask mom about it she tell me not to worry about it... I think I get what is going on here. Next time there's a playdate i'm not going to go.

With the money his father left him he built a small home with a gigantic underground library underneath.

Entry #1042 While we were building the library we dug into a cave... It was full of creatures... they attacked me and the other workers. They took my arm and scarred my face. Even though, I used my alchemy to collapse the cave. Only half the workers got out alive.

He often lived there slightly outside the city alone to keep away from the ruckus of the townspeople.

Entry #2034 I'm going to leave this wretched place... Father would not have wanted this, I don't want to get married to some girl I don't love. I'm leaving behind everything. I'm taking my fathers colt, the chains, a pair of clothes, and a small book on alchemy that can fit in my back pocket. I leave all our money to my beloved.

On the night of April 15th 2012, after the "party" his mother threw for his birthday, he left his secluded home with everything he knew behind him. We do not know who he meant by "my beloved" so the money has been given to the mother. It seems as though he is heading towards central. END OF REPORT - FOLLOW-UP REPORT DUE

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TRIVIA:
→ Fluent in Creten, and Amestrian. Can speak Drachman, but not fluently.

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ALIAS:
→ Castor

OTHER CHARACTERS:
→ My one and only character.

CREATOR'S COMMENTS:
→ I have rp'ed quite a bit just nothing this big, so please have a little tolerance for my mistakes for I will soon learn.

CUSTOM RANK:
→ Relinquo Opulentia - Abandon Wealth

OFFICIAL TITLE:
→ Rising Spire - The Rising Spire Alchemist

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REVISE

1.) The quote at the top's... a bit big. I think the typical size is 17, font's georgia, maybe scale the size down a tad?

2.) Specify which country you're a militant for.

3.) Amestris, not Amestria.

4.) Picture appears to be broken. Fix this, please.

5.) Description needs to be 150 words, yours is 118.

6.) Personality needs to be 300 words, yours is 53.

7.) History needs to be 450 words, yours is 269.

8.) Custom Rank is too long. For an example; it's the bold, blue, linked text beneath your avatar.

9.) Official Title is a little wordy, I'd advise changing it.

10.) Need to make a transmutation app.

There's potential, here, Castor - you just need to build on it. Read the guidelines in the application template. You can do this, man.

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