Maxine; Skylar Greden

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CODE:

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CASE FILE: Custom Weapon

Specialist: Skylar Greden
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NAME:
→ Maxine

TYPE:
→ Semi-automatic pistol

FORM:
→ H&K USP .45

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BRIEFING:
→ Maxine isn't really a vary unique looking weapon . The frame of the pistol itself is really just your standard blackened steel with chromed inner workings to prevent rust. The handle is made of and old reddish cross-hashed polymer that keeps the weapon firmly in Sky's hand. The weapon type itself is actually rather old (the design coming about in the 1980's) and the weight of the weapon reflects that. It is much heavier than modern pistols and is also surprisingly durable. The only real way to tell Maxine from any other basic weapon of the same type is to look at the engravings on the slide of the weapon. On the right side, near the breach is the name of the weapon in block letters. Exactly opposite of that is the date that Sky's first brother died, serving as a constant reminder. The trigger of the weapon has also been replaced by a super light hair trigger and the trigger guard has been expanded to allow for effective firing while wearing gloves. It also includes a threaded barrel so that a silencer may be fitted.

PICTURE:
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Spoiler:

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SPECIAL ABILITIES:
→ None really, just an old pistol that Sky uses.
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[Guest]

REVISE

- All of this should be in one sheet. Means no two duplicate templates for each distinct weapons. Less confusing this way and also a requirement. Also paragraphs with arrows for each weapon entry so we can differentiate between the two, for all entries.

- Your special ability should be something unique to your character, rather than a training that gives you passive capabilities of being able to handle a weapon proficiently, since after all, it is your preferred weapon, it goes without saying. It is special after all, and you are unique, not your average run of the mill soldier.

- Weapon weight shouldn't be a special ability either, considering most weapons considered for an army are made to be light anyways, durable, and reliable. Anyways, grenade launcher capability can be seen as a function of the weapon, but is also acceptable for special ability.

Handle those and I'll take another gander.

[Guest]

Did a fixer-upper. Hopefully we are good.

[Guest]

REVISE

1) What Niko specifically meant, I think, was that this:

This weapon is very light and highly maneuverable. Smiley allows Sky to use it for long periods of time without becoming very fatigued from it's weight.

Is entirely redundant in the 'Special Abilities' section.

2) Grenade launcher or re-assembling. Pick one of the two. Grenade launcher can be swapped out and placed in the main body of the text itself, without having to be a special ability, as can the re-assembling feature, or 'system weapon', whatever you've called it.

3) I've told people this before and I will tell them again: unless Skylar can number-crunch like crazy, and understand absolutely everything about trajectory and angling in any of the millions of possible positions he could be in, there is NO way whatsoever that the ricochet round would do ANYTHING without immense amounts of both luck and statistical know-how. It's implausible and on a whole infeasible. Please change this to make it a little more realistic and logical.

4) Niko told you to put both weapons in one sheet. That means that they should be listed at the top. Not 'Maxine & Smiley', one list entry for Maxine, and another for Smiley. Make sense?

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