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Post by Bronze Degan Mon Mar 12, 2012 7:44 pm


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CASE FILE: Transmutation Equipment
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NAME:
→ Will o' the wisp
→Baldur's Wrath
→Center of the Storm

→ The hold of Loiza
TYPE:
→ Alchemy: Basic and Elemental (Alchemy)

→ Alchemy: Basic and elemental (Alchemy)

→ Alchemy: Basic

→ Alchemy: Basic and elemental (Alchemy)
LEVEL:
3

FORM:
→Located on the back of all his different gloves.
→Uses the same transmutation circle, but now has them tattooed on ether wrist.
→ Located on the Speakers he carrys
→Uses the same transmutation circle, but now has them tattooed on ether wrist.

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BRIEFING:
→ Primarily used for distractions and entertainment, Bronzes technique is almost completely useless for any offensive purpose and this is its major weakness. His circle(as seen below) are placed on the backs of most of all of his gloves, but he prefers those seen below. To activate his alchemy he rubes his hand together and using the friction this creates to ionize/ ignite the gasses in the air.

→ His first(and hopefully only) offensive technique, Baldur's Wrath is an extremely destructive attack that can causes massive damage on a singularly massive scale. Its main weakness is the blooming effect which can cause its range to plummet. This effect is increased by snow, dust, thick mist and any other sort of debris in the air. It uses the same circle as the power above. To activate it he has to be with in 5 paces of a powerful light source(examples being, powerful mag lights, stadium lights. Anything with at least 1000 candle wats of power).

→So this is basically a spy's best friend, and has a myriad of uses both defensively and offensively if only indirectly.Its circle(Seen below) In engraved on two tiny portable battery powered speakers. ITs main weakness is the fact that he cant hear what cant be heard....And that can be a significant draw back in given certain situations.


→ The greatest hero Doe'an was a man named Loiza, a man who protected his people with out slaying a single enemy on the field of battle and its this alchemy that may have made it possible. Both an offensive and defensive technique, The hold of Loiza(Also called the Guardians light) is an alchemy that allows the user to hold, restrain, lift, and protect any being with in his line of sight. When manifested it appears as if walls of ambient light surround the user and his targets, this also creates its greatest weakness, there is no way to hide the effects of this alchemy. This technique like the vast majority of Bronzes techniques is stronger or weaker depending on the amount of light available.

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SPECIAL ABILITIES:

→ Using Alchemy Bronze can make odd shapes or flashes of bright light in the area near him(near being used to describe the area roughly 100 meters around him), this is a purely defensive form of alchemy at this point with little to no offensive capability. He achieves this by first ionizing/igniting some of the more colorful gasses found in the atmosphere(like neon which when ionized can turn anywhere from bright red to orange or methane for the bluish tints) and then bending the resulting light into shape using water vapor as a prism to separate the different wavelengths . This has little practical use and is mostly used to put on interesting light shows and to send encoded messages, using a code devised by him.

Directed light energy Alchemy(aka Lasers)"Baldur's Wrath": So what exactly is light? Its electromagnetic radiation visible to the human eye, but most of all its a form of energy that can power homes, cars,planes, and nations. So why cant it be harnessed as a weapon? Well it can and after extensive research Bronze has weaponized the vary thing that gives life(Much to his own horror). Now if he has a source of light powerful enough(Such as a high intensity mag light) he can use the atmosphere to create a prism that separates, condenses and directs a single color of light with high intensity and even higher energy output(Nearly equal to one megajoulel) this extra power out put is achieved be transferring and transmuting the remain light energy from the other wave lengths into the desired wavelength. This transmutation causes a high intensity laser light pulse that causes rapid and explosive evaporation, equivalent to 200 grams of high explosive(Or less depending on the amount of energy created by the transmutation process)this explosion is caused by the rapid evaporation of organic and none organic material when the beam hits. The sudden evaporation causes the heated air and gas partials to expand out words violently. Because of the fact it is a laser, this pulse travels at the speed of light making in nearly impossible to doge over short distances. Thankfully the range of this attack is some what limited thanks to the blooming effect which causes the laser to defocus and disperse energy into the atmosphere as it travels. Blooming can be more severe if there is fog, smoke, or dust in the air. Now with out this blooming effect the distance on a beam of concentrated electromagnetic energy has a nearly unlimited range (Depending on the power behind the beam), sadly we do not live in a vacuum and our atmosphere causes blooming, this being the case the max range at its minimum power(One megajoulel or thousand candle wats) is two hundred yards, of course more power behind the transmutation, the greater the range and explosive power(two megajoulel's=400 grams of high explosive and 600 yards in range baring outside environmental factors). For clarification this is a pulsed energy Projectile, not a continues laser beam.

With increased use and study bronze has managed to double the effective power and half the needed resources in one fell swoop. Now with but one megajoul of energy he can create pulses of destructive force equaling 400 grams of high explosive with a range equal to 600 yards. With increased power comes increased efficiency so with ever additional megajewl they fire with three times the explosive force and three times the distance.

Center of the storm(Sound Based alchemy): Sound like light travels in waves that are at both times remarkably smiler, and incredibly different. But thanks to his already detailed research into light wavelengths he had a basic jumping off point for this rather unique alchemy. By manipulating both the sound energy density and the sound intensity he can effectively control which sounds enter and leave his immediate vicinity.This effectively creates a barrier of thickened air particle's that wont allow sound energy waves to pass. This allows him to cancel out any sound he or others may make, creating a pocket of space where nothing inside can be heard(example: A man shoots his fire arm while inside the bubble of "Null sound" the firing of the gun cant be heard, but if the bullet strikes out side the effected area the resulting impact can be). This is most often employed to muffle his steps and movements but could be used for any number of other purposes. He can effect anyone or thing within 15 feet of his position or the entire area.

Light Weight/pressure Alchemy(The Hold of Loiza): Light, like all things has weight but whats more it exerts pressure on everything it shines on. Now the actual amount of weight exerted is minimal considering that 99% of the total light energy is instead focused in the actual light output. By converting the unseen wave lengths of light energy/ radiation into actual ambient light one can not only use this to to create a light show like none other, but can use the newly generated light pressure to affect and effect anything with in line of sight. This can have many uses from enveloping and containing a target or targets, to forming walls of almost physical light that can reduce the velocity and speed of small arms fire as well as push or pull objects with nothing but the directed pressure exerted by the newly gathered and transmuted light.

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Post by Reila Tsukino Mon Mar 12, 2012 9:07 pm

REVISE

Okay so what you have under Briefing is supposed to go under Special Abilities. And Briefing is supposed to be more like weaknesses, how you do it, what it's good against, describe the circle and where it is.

Also, can you make your pictures not links please? You can upload them on photobucket if they are hotlinks.

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Post by Bronze Degan Mon Mar 12, 2012 10:56 pm

Ok fixed
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Post by Guest Sat May 12, 2012 2:49 pm

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Baldur's Wrath:

1) See if you can't define a maximum range for this, to give a decent bearing on it all.

2) You might also want to make it clearer that this is a single burst of energy as opposed to a concentrated, continuous laser which causes multiple explosions.

Center of the Storm

3) Because Baldur's Wrath primarily functions on the same sort of alchemy as your first sort of branch, manipulation of light, then you don't really have to have a new transmutation circle - however, considering this is sound-based alchemy, you really sort of need a new circle for it.

4) I'm not sure you can create a radial sphere here without use of alkahestry, unless the alchemy manipulates a thin bubble of air to actually ACT as the barrier, so it has some form of tangible form - thicken the oxygen atoms to stop sound waves from escaping.

The other option, of course, is to manipulate a projection device, such as a tiny radial speaker - using a battery and engraving the speaker with the transmutation circle. I dunno about you, but I think that's a little cooler =P

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Post by Bronze Degan Sat May 12, 2012 3:21 pm

Finished with the revisions!! Thanks for the good ideas!! XD
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Post by Guest Sat May 12, 2012 4:13 pm

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Post by Bronze Degan Thu Sep 13, 2012 4:26 am

Ready yet again~
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Post by Guest Thu Sep 13, 2012 2:06 pm

REVISE

Your logic is as solid as can be when working with light, and I understand that like anything else, it has density. It's not tangible as such, and I understand you're manipulating it via proxy, which is no problem... but... increasing the density of light to the point that it can block small arms fire is increasing its density possibly a billion times over, considering the actual density of light is at best, negligible.

I'm not sure quite how feasible this is... physics really isn't my specialty.

So...

1] I'm going to ask for a stronger and longer explanation.

2] I'm going to ask that you severely tone down the radius in which that this can be used, and provide a limit for the size of the barriers.

3] I'm also going to ask you tone down the strength considerably. Converting something with such a low density to the point that its density actually overwhelms BULLETS... yeah, that isn't really happening. It's too much of a theoretical leap - the principle is solid, just not the jump.

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Post by Reila Tsukino Fri Sep 28, 2012 11:57 am

Fix the colors at the top.

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Post by Bronze Degan Tue Apr 09, 2013 10:24 pm

Okay ready.
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Post by Csilla Angelis Thu Apr 11, 2013 6:32 pm

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Level three ability sounds good, Bronze! Be careful with it~

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