Arthas Tier Romario's Transmutation cirle

[Guest]

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CASE FILE: Transmutation Equipment

Arthas Tier Romario
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NAME:
→ Maelstrom

TYPE:
→ Alchemy: Elemental

LEVEL:
→ one

FORM:
→ The seal he has is implanted in the middle of his right eye and it is big enough to lay over the color of his eye. He also has one on both of the fullers of his weapons.

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BRIEFING:
→ His air attacks are offensive based.How it works, is that when he uses his seal and or abilities, the air around him compresses and at times may bend to his will. Think of "The Force" From Star Wars ^^ .He uses the air around him to both use as an attack but also help use the full range of the chained daggers he carries. To both propel forward and to bring back, like a Yo-Yo. There are not many problems with his abilities. He cant stay in high altitude if he is fighting. Since the air is thinner it will be more difficult to fight or to use his alchemy in general. If in very cold temperatures, it works with him as well as against him. If he uses his circle in very frigged conditions, it will probably give him frostbite.

PICTURE:
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Spoiler:

→ The seal blares white in the middle of his pupil, as well as on the blades he carries.

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SPECIAL ABILITIES:
→ Rupture- What he does is compressed the surrounding sir in the center of his palm, and when enough has been compacted, he forces it towards whatever he is attacking. It does not come in a wave however. I actually goes towards its targets in individual strands, moving a very high rate of speed, targeting the softer parts of it target. Like ones eyes.

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[Guest]

{REVISE}

Um... I think you just need to update this to match what you changed his alchemy to in the app.

[Guest]

Did some tweaking. Is this good enough?

[Guest]

Not quite I'm afraid.

• The Special abilities is where you would copy and paste the Alchemical ability section in your charries app and post it there.
  
• That being said, it should, obviously, match up with what you have typed up in your characters app.
  
• The Briefing section is more for the scientific explanation for how your alchemy works. Is it offensive or defensive, how does it work, stuff like that. What you've got sort of works, but more could be added to it to make it better. The more we can understand about it, the better. ^^
  
• When listing what objects contain the seal, please be clear where they are upon the things. Its a bit confusing right now to be honest.

I'm sorry I'm so picky! I'm just trying to keep things making sense.

[Guest]

you are killing me......tweaked...>.<

[Guest]

{APPROVED}

Sorry! It's good now. ^^;;

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