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Axis Marie Enduro [Work In Progress]
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Axis Marie Enduro [Work In Progress]
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CASE FILE: Alchemist
I'm not afraid, to take a stand.
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CASE FILE: Alchemist
I'm not afraid, to take a stand.
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FULL NAME:
→ Axis Marie Enduro
AGE:
→ 19
SEX:
→ Female
BIRTH PLACE:
→ Central City
RACE:
→ Amestrian
DATE OF BIRTH:
→ October 23, 1991
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HEIGHT:
→ 5' 4"
WEIGHT:
→ 77 kg
PICTURE:
→
- Spoiler:
DESCRIPTION:
→ For her age Axis is vertically challenged, standing at a total of 5' 4". She weighs a total of 160 pounds which is 77 kg's in conversion. Her completion used to be lightly tanned but over time had faded to a slightly more pale color. The original color of her hair was a beautiful crimson red that was long and flowing but since then she had cut it down short to her neck line and deep dyed it onyx black. Unlike before where they used to hang to the right of her face, Axis' bangs now part and stand up on edge at each side of her face. They are often held up this way by her emerald green goggles which take their usual place just above her forhead. These goggles are made of a hardened plastice and ar timmed by a gold metal. The thick band which wraps around her head to keep them in place is a golden color that matches the matel trim and nose piece. Although no one would be able to tell as it is usual hidden under her hair in some way. The hue of her eyes are a deep but vibrant shade of emerald green.
Axis body figure is a rather small and thin, giving her a look that makes it seem she is a lot younger than she actually is. Her bust size is an average one for most girls. As for her overal bodily shape, even though it doesn't seem like it at first glance, Axis has a rather built body. Muscles can be acounted for if she were to take off her jacket. Although rather small she does prove strong in most hand to hand battles. Axis sports a unique and rather odd looking attire of clothing. Starting from the top; the dominent feature of her upper ensemble is the dual colored, high collared jacket. Made of a breathable but sturdy material this jacket is a solid emerald green and onyx black mix. The neck of the jacket could easily hide the lower half of axis' face if it were to be closed but more often than not it is left open so her lower face it visible. Much like the bottom of her jacket which is also left open and unzipped. The single silver zipper, lined in the middle of the jacket, is zipped between the distance of Axis neck and the middle of her bust. This is where an upside down green triangle stop the zipper and allows it to remain open on the bottom. There is one rounded silver pull piece to this zipper. On each corner of the bottom of the jacket is a golden metal piece each with a small circle in the middle of them. This circle reveals the emerald fabric of te jacket itself. Connected to each side of the jacket is two black full length sleeves which slightly bulge out at the bottom. On the upper right sleeve is a white arm band, decorated with vertical black lines all the way around. Underneath this jacket is a black cotten tank top which stops right underneath the bust line. When she is not using her alchmist gloves Axis wear a pair of close fitting, solid green, fingerless gloves. To hold them gloves on a solid black wrist band is connected to the gloves.
On the lower body Axis wears a pair of spacious onyx black pants, made of breathable cotton much like the rest of her outfit. The reason for this being, she needed an outfit that was comfotable but to her style as well. These pants reach down to the length of her ankles but are usually tucked into her high boots. Which causes the bottom of the legs to bulge out slightly. These pants are not overly spacious but has enough that is provides adequte comfort but while hugging Axis' curves nicely. On the upper part of the right leg is a set of three green, slanted bars. Each bar slants outward at the end on both the back and front. However each bar is bigger than the next and is equally spaced one on top of the other. Just above this set, is a set of three small pouches which are connected to the right hip. Each hold different alchemic items as well as some money. One of these pouches is solely for the purpose of holding her alchemist gloves. On the uper part of the left leg is a wrap made of bandages. This is there to cover a rather big rip in the leg. This rip was caused to a street side brawl, which in the end Axis didn't win unfortunately. So originally the bandages were there to cover the cut she had recieved on her leg. Now that it's healed it's just there to cover the rip. Because she it too lazy to get it fixed. That and she thinks it accents the outfit nicely.
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PERSONALITY:
→ Two paragraph minimum of your character's personality. Do not list traits. Be simple and concise when describing how your characters thinks and acts and tell me WHY they act or think this way. Must be at least 300 words.
LOVE:
→ The rain, drawing, iced tea, extreme sports, friendly sparring
HATE:
→ Death and loss, spiders, people who think they are better then others, judgemental people, string beans
DEEPEST SECRET:
→ She perferes both men and women. Has yet to come out that she is bisexual.
IDOL:
→ Roy Mustang
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HISTORY:
→ Three paragraphs minimum of your character's background. Be sure to include how your character became a ALCHEMIST etc. Try to steer clear of extreme drama and trauma. It is WAY too popular and rarely played out well. Once in a while, I'll accept a well written tragedy, but most of the time... no. Characters don't need horrific histories in order to be interesting. Keep the child abuse, rape, family deaths, etc out of here. They get old fast. Must be at least 450 words.
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ALCHEMIC/ALKAHESTRIC ABILITY:
→ Axis's style of alchemy is made possible by her gifted alchemist gloves. Made of "pyrotex/ignition cloth" and embroidered with unique flame alchemy Transmutation Circles, these gloves create a spark when Axis rubs her fingers together. This allows her to manipulate the concentration of oxygen in the air surrounding her target, raising its density to a level at which it becomes combustible and creating narrow pathways of oxygen through which she can direct the flame birthed by the spark. Using the transmutation circles on her alchemist gloves, Axis is able to separate oxygen atoms from the hydrogen atoms in water molecules, isolating the two combustible gases. Though this method can only be used when a large quantity of water is present in a relatively closed-off space (and not in the rain where the air is open and separating hydrogen and oxygen for the purpose of combustion would pose far too much danger to anyone in the immediate area), with an outside source of ignition such as a cigarette lighter or a match, Axis can produce powerful localized explosions.
It has also been revealed that Axis is trying to delegate each hand to a different flame effect, using a difference in hand dexterity. The right hand will allow for large explosive attacks. While the left will allow for smaller, but strong and very accurate pinpoint flame attacks. Although she has yet to be able to come anywhere close to this without proper training and technique. So it is still out of her reach and use.
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TRIVIA:
→ Fluent in Amestrian
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ALIAS:
→ Axis or Axy
OTHER CHARACTERS:
→ This is my first character, ever made, on this forum.
CREATOR'S COMMENTS:
→ Sorry it took me so long to finish this, and for my disappearance when I first joined. I wanted to make sure everything went right and that I did a good job. Especially since this is such a pro site. Again, forgive me.
CUSTOM RANK:
→ The Crimson Rage
OFFICIAL TITLE:
→ The Crimson Rage Alchemist
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Last edited by Axis Enduro on Thu Aug 25, 2011 8:01 pm; edited 6 times in total
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