Inari wip

[Guest]

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CASE FILE: Alchemist

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FULL NAME:
→ Inari E. Harston
AGE:
→ 29
SEX:
→ female

BIRTH PLACE:
→ Great desert.

RACE:
→half ishvalan half Amestrian

DATE OF BIRTH:
→ 1982 march 26.

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HEIGHT:
→ 177.80

WEIGHT:
→ 70kg.

PICTURE:
→

Spoiler:

DESCRIPTION:
→ having long white hair, commonly worn in a pony tail he has shoulder length side bangs her front bangs tend to a tad messy. Her red eyes show she is half ishvalen. Normal clothing is a shirt vest with detached sleeves that hide her transmutation circles. The shirt barely covered her torso. Its also low cut and opened to show cleavage. She wears a tie thats thats loose. Her black soft fabric pants are held up with a belt. If she was to bend over they would look rather tight. Her skin is soft and quite squishy in some areas. The foot wear she uses are white and have purple tread. Shes always going commando. Her mannerisms are random and her movements are always different. She tries to keeps to different beat every time she gos out.

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PERSONALITY:
→ While being rather self centered, she is more out to achieve her own goals or to get some thing she wants. Often she will be nice seductive and all over a man but really all shes after is just to leave him hanging. While also being rather laid back she tend to keep a messy room but a clean house, this is a odd habit of hers. Not one of the brightest bulbs in a pack shes a really good automail mechanic and a even better alchemist. Her personalities can change in moments notice this tends to get her in deeper trouble.

Her favorite food is chocolate covered éclairs. She had no idea why she loves those vanilla flavored creamy tasting chocolaty goodness so much, but shes been known to do a automail work for 12 dozen. If some one tries to touch one she growls like a kitten protecting its food and moves them out of there reach while giving them a death stare.


LOVE:
→ chocolate eclairs. dressing up, dancing in the rain in high fasion clothing. silk worms and spiders. metals. automail
HATE:
→ very very touchy feely people. having to use public restrooms. not taking a shower. having people stair at her like shes a retard.
DEEPEST SECRET:
→ Her deepest secret is she secretly wants to be tied up with her own hair to a chair. then teased with a chocolate éclair.

IDOL:
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HISTORY:
→ Inari was born in a car in the middle of the great desert. It seems she wasn't going to wait to come out. Her mother knew she was coming but when she saw her water break all over the back of the car she told her husband to stop the car and get ready. Inari wasn't much later born and they continued there drive to central where they registered her in at a hospital.

Inari grew up having a nice child hood. Her mother would always brush her hair and let her help her fix her bed up with silk Inari always loved silk, but her true love would be the day she had her first chocolate éclair. As this young girl grew up she wanted to make a silk like no other. But she also wanted to do auto mail. And as she grew up the army was looking for alchemists.

She went an saw all the alchemists at central and actually she was well know. Cause she would always stop by central and talk with alchemists about how to become one. One women who was a alchemist handed Inari a book to learn alchemy. “Inari learn it your self so you can show these guys what a real women can do.” Inari nodded and from that day she started learning alchemy. The women was a librarian and also a good cook. She acted like a second mother to Inari she always gave her éclairs and books for study.


Later in her teens Inari began to work on her own alchemy. She wanted it to be with silk. Boy you wouldn't think you seen a girl work so hard. But another thing she learned was to be a boy tease. She would often do it to take there guard off and then knee them in the nuts. Boy was she a tease.

As she grew she learn of a mystical metal the was light as a feather but stronger then steel. She made that her goal. When she was 22 she made a cloth that was hard as steel and had done it with alchemy. Ever since that day she bee perfecting that alchemy. She called her self the mithril maiden even though she has yet to make mithril. As she studied alchemy she dos dabble in auto mail but its more of a habit for hers.

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ALCHEMIC/ALKAHESTRIC ABILITY:
→ the ability to combinded cloth with metals.

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TRIVIA:
→ can speak Amestrian (this is normal color) and Ishvalan but is very bad at ishvalan so she hardly speaks it.
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ALIAS:
→ Inari
OTHER CHARACTERS:
→ first
CREATOR'S COMMENTS:
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FACE CLAIM:[*code]vocaloid/(i can not find her name any where.)[/code]
CUSTOM RANK:
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[Guest]

Hihihi! Just letting you know that your archive date is this Thursday!

[Guest]

what dos that mean D8 i been working on it slowly but also how dos this look am i missing any thing...

[Dai]

That means that on Thursday, your app gets moved out of the Pending section and moved to archives.

[Guest]

DONE!!!!!!!!!!!!! i hope

[Guest]

Revise

Bad News: Your personality and history are both too short, as is your description.

Description minimum = 150 Words Minimum

Personality minimum = 300 Words minimum

History minimum = 450 Words minimum.

Good News: You don't have to worry about the Archive Date! So just fix that stuff and I'll take another look.

[Guest]

Sorry, just popping in here.

Besides from Lyte's comments, I've got a few of my own problems that I'd like you to take a look at, if you will. ^_^

• Deepest Secret: No way. Nu-uh. Change it. If I may, I'd like to quote the rules.
  

  Mild sexual themes are allowed here, but keep any graphic sexual content away from the boards.

  While what you have put here isn't that graphic, it's still rather... inappropriate. I'd appreciate it if you would be able to change it, please.
  
  
• Date of Birth - Just a date of birth, please? Not a place. That goes in your history only.
  
  
• Can you please use a font colour for Amestrian too? Just makes life easier.
  
  
• Change the title to WIP while you're still working on this app. So we know not to check it.
  

That's all, thanks. Just add these to what Lyte's asked of you. ^_^

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