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Post by Guest Mon Nov 22, 2010 10:05 pm

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CASE FILE: Alchemist {Sergeant}
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The Glass Alchemist
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FULL NAME:
→ Kor Telso

AGE:
→ 19

SEX:
→ Male

BIRTH PLACE:
→ Eastern Central

RACE:
→ Aerugese

DATE OF BIRTH:
→ December 6


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HEIGHT:
→ 174 Cm

WEIGHT:
→ 80 Kg

PICTURE:
Spoiler:

DESCRIPTION:
→ Kor Telso stands out enough for a nineteen year old man his age; with the height and weight described above, he is of a fair build, flexible and toned enough to be varied in a physical fight. His head is adorned with a sky-blue spiky hair standing about four inches from his head, accompanied by pale-blue eyes nearly matching the color of his hair. His expression is usually cold, very level and calculated despite the vibrance of his eyes.

His military suit fits the description for someone at east headquarters, with a few liberties due to his specific 'art'. He adorns gloves on both hands bearing the transmutation circle described below, accompanied with pure white and mark-less shoes at his feet. On each side affixed to a reinforced belt on his uniform, Kor has a canteen, each holding a-liter-and-a-half of liquid water. Aside from that... hello typical blue uniform. I know thy comfort well.


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PERSONALITY:
→ As a relatively sane alchemic member of the military, Kor has a couple predictable personality traits. He has little worry of what other people think of him, regardless of rank but especially of those outside the military. He is taking the advantages that he can get, and finds absolutely nothing wrong with that circumstance, though such an up-front attitude gets him in moderate trouble with his superiors at times. Still, he is wholly devoted to his alchemy, to the point where he considers it a tangible art, much like a novel or making a painting; as seen above, he sees less joy in that of the 'permanent' art of photography.

And this turns us to the obsessive part of his personality. Within battle or in simple everyday life, Kor is obsessed with ice sculpting, with or without alchemy. He sees beauty in everything that he creates, and can't stand to see it be destroyed by anything other than the hands of nature. In short, the quickest ways to get on Kor's bad side is to insult his battling style, or to physically destroy his artwork. Trust me. HE. WILL. KILL. YOU. IF. HE. CAN.

If you are an artist and not a photographer, or you can impress him in the military art of battle, you will more than likely gain Kor's respect, if not trust. He likes a straight up fight, and as such often overextends himself taking targets he can't possibly take on his own one on one. Ironically, the greatest fire from his soul comes from having an even battle with ice; he's been known to cast away his coat in battle simply because the heat of the moment became too much for it to be of use. Of course, his passion still lies with the ice. Don't mess with his art.

LOVE:
→ Alchemy/Ice/Literature/Battle/Silence


HATE:
→ Fire/Noise/Ignorant People/His art being destroyed/Photos


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HISTORY:
→ Well, there isn't TOO much of note to say here. Kor was born and raised in East Central to civilian parents, who were both at work a fair part of each day, leaving Kor with much time alone at home, even as a child. His first true fascination, around the age of five, was playing around with ice cubes, carefully and delicately melting parts of it away with his hands to create pretty shapes which he occasionally showed off to his parents, who would think it was the cutest thing ever at that age. When he was seven, he began investigating into the basics of alchemy, and found that, with practice, he could keep ice cold or even freeze water to make larger masses of ice.

At the age of twelve, Kor had a fair handle on the art of alchemy, and, with much discussion with his parents, was eventually enrolled into a military academy to perfect this art on a scholarship provided by East HQ, a sort of fast-track program to becoming an alchemist in the military, certified or otherwise. For the next several years of his life, his skills rapidly increased, both in alchemy and in close-range combat, until, by the age of seventeen, he could bring down an armed man using solely a quart of water, a single glove, and his own skills in combat.

For a short time in this training, Kor spent a month out in Briggs to 'find himself', a month of combined endurance, wilderness, and alchemy training by, oddly enough, not using alchemy. Yes, this is the typical test that dedicated alchemists take who want to heavily research their art. 'The snow falls to the land and returns to the earth, then up to the heavens once more... all is one, one is all.' It was a relatively quick realization, and when he was found on his return trip, he was lugging behind a hand-carved statue of a tree, which fell from his cart just short of the road. Yes. Yelling, screaming, and broken stuff.

His loose cannon attitude yet passion for alchemy got him noticed even at the young age of eighteen, after the training. He hasn't had much contact at home, but yet again, neither party really tried that much...

This was enough to grant him a place in HQ, not of the highest rank, but enough to give him the resources to expand his research, so that he may eventually test as a state alchemist. Still, he has a ways to go in showing that he is worth the cause, as his everlasting distraction with art has raised some concern with his capabilities to serve in the military... though there are worse examples of distraction. Like Armstrong. *Shivers*.... Ugh....

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ALCHEMIC ABILITY:
→ Ice Alchemy, involving the freezing, shaping, and propulsion of water. To perform this alchemy, heat is drawn away from the mass of water and taken throughout Kor's body, dispelled relatively harmlessly over the wide surface area of his back, providing the basis for equivalent exchange. Truly, the reaction is merely the simple movement from liquid to solid.

This can be used on offense or defense, and its use is dependent on the amount of water available. Obviously, only so much water can be transmuted at once, and there is a cool-down between maximum uses as Kor would need to dispel the heat from his body. At current level, this is simply the shaping and utilizing of solid ice as a shield or weapon.



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TRIVIA:
Arugese, Amestrian, Cretarian


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ALIAS:
→ Kor

OTHER CHARACTERS:
→ First!

CUSTOM RANK:
→ The Glass Alchemist

OFFICIAL TITLE:
→ Glass
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Post by Aurelius Schwartz Tue Nov 23, 2010 1:48 am

REVISE

1. Picture: you're going to hate me, but I have to require a picture... ^^;

2. Personality: at least 300 words. You just need 100 more~

3. History: at least 450 words. You need 150 more. Try using more details, that will probably help out with the word count.

4. Alchemic Ability: I don't understand. Are you trying to say that he can manipulate temperature by taking heat upon his body? Basically you're going for a general use of making liquid into a solid? I honestly feel that this is too general for a special ability.
--Also, your title "ice alchemist" is too general. Your custom rank is what your pending will turn into, so it's not like I can hold off naming it until you become a State Alchemist.

You're going to East HQ right? Make sure you let Tataki know and post in the thread under Classifieds (if you haven't already)

<3 Your character seems extremely interesting!

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Post by Guest Tue Nov 23, 2010 2:10 am

That should just about cover everything...

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Post by Aurelius Schwartz Tue Nov 23, 2010 2:15 am

APPROVED

Dai will give you your rank. =3
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Post by Dai Tue Nov 23, 2010 7:58 pm

Sorry about the wait. Rolling Rank...
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Post by Guest Tue Nov 23, 2010 7:58 pm

The member 'Dai' has done the following action : Rank Roll

'Lieutenant Roll' : 6

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