Wires of despair

[Guest]

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CASE FILE: Transmutation Equipment

Alice La'Crow
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NAME:
→ Alice La'Crows wires of despair

TYPE:
→ Basic-Wire made from a durable and sharp metal.

LEVEL:
→ One

FORM:
→ These wires are special wires which she keeps in two separate pouches on either side of her waist. When she performs her alchemy and does the requirements of her transmutation circle, she will then stick her cuffed fingers into the pouches and the wires will stick to the cuffs with magnetism.

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BRIEFING:
→Alice's circle is engraved in both her hands. It is a circle with the star of David in the middle of it, over lapping most of the circle as it sits on top. Inside the star is a small circle, and inside the middle of that circle is a dot--a small dot. There are half circles that go around the inside of the main circle of her transmutation, and there are only three of them. the upside down triangle of the start of David's edges are a thicker color than the other triangle. Around the edges of the circle, are inscriptions along with the edges of the other circle and the star. The circle allows Alice to use her wires as whips one moment, and like a sword the next. Without them, alice wouldn't be able to use alchemy.

This is an offensive, and somewhat defensive ability. Alice must know the break down of the metallic material her wires are made from and how to make it more dense by compression the carbon inside of it.


PICTURE:
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Spoiler:

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SPECIAL ABILITIES:
→The wires are made out of metal which she then connects to the tips of her fingers using these special magnets embedded in finger cuffs located on each individual finger. Each magnet has a signature wire which automatically connects to its...well lets just say 'soulmate'. With these threads, she can use them as offensive whips which can inflict damage, fatal or not fatal. Even though threads are supposedly dull and can't really cut through anything, once she uses her alchemy, it allows her to make those wires straight and as sharp as any blade. She can control a single wire if she wants to or she can just control them all at once, her choice.

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[Guest]

Hows this?

[Guest]

Sorry, but you're going to have to change your Alchemic ability. It is too godmode for it's own good.

[Aurelius Schwartz]

Okay, let me explain. First of all we are currently rping in a world based solely on science, thus spiritual energy taking form is impossible. Why don't you use real wire made out of metal instead? You can make it work scientifically using a plausible form that isn't 'spiritual,' you know? I'll help you with it, just ask. ^-^

[Guest]

I hope that is less godmode. I tried my best, how is that?

[Aurelius Schwartz]

Better. This is what you need to fix:
1. Form: The wires cannot be magnetic with human skin (her fingers), so they can't automatically attach themselves to her. You have to either have magnets on her fingers to begin with or find a different way to get them to stay (for example, having finger cuffs with the wires attached).
2. Here's an idea. Instead of saying that the wires pass through her body, she can use them as whips straight from her fingertips. Right before they are about to hit her opponent, she can use alchemy to make them stiff like swords, and cut through the person. They cannot cut through rock or metal though, seeing as nothing as light as wire can do so with or without alchemy.
3. You keep mentioning the lightning element, but it's not like naruto where she can simply control and summon lightning when she desires. You cannot create something from nothing, that's what science and alchemy are about.

^_^ Hope that helps you. Let me know if you have any questions. <3

[Guest]

The dreadful Naruto reference. AKi is that alright, if it isn't can you help to make it sound uber awesome.

[Aurelius Schwartz]

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Hehe ^~^ yeah, sorry to torment you with that terrible reference. -shudder-
Since you gave me permission, I'm going to go make it amazing. -cracks fingers-
I'm posting everything here that I deleted in case you want it:

BRIEFING:
→Alice's circle is engraved in both her hands. It is a cirlce with the star of david in the middle of hit over lapping most of the circle as it sits on top. Inisde the star is a small circle and inside that crile in the middle is a dot, a small dot. There are half circles that go around the inside of the main circle of her transmuation, and there are only three of them. the upside down triangle of the start of david's edges are a thicker color than the other triangle. Around the egdes of the circle are inscriptions along with the egdes of the other cirle and the star. The circle allows Alice to use her wires and have them pass through her skin. without them alice wouldn't be able to use alchemy. the only drawback is alices fingers will start to bleed alot. This is an offensive, and somewhat defensive abiltiy. Alice must know the scientic equation for photosynthesis which is 6H2O + 6CO2 ----------> C6H12O6+ 6O2.(six molecules of water plus six molecules of carbon dioxide produce one molecule of sugar plus six molecules of oxygen). Against elements like air and water, these wires are the perfect match but fire lightning and lightning, they don't stand a chance. They can cut through earth however.

Okay, finished. I'm moving over. PM me if you find something to your disliking. <3

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