Motosuwa Chii

[Guest]

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CASE FILE: Alchemist OR Alkahestrist (DELETE THIS MESSAGE AND PICK WHICH ONE YOU ARE GOING TO BE (Note Alkahestrists are medical/body related and Alchemists are NOT)

lyrics or quote here
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FULL NAME:
→ Chii Motosuwa

AGE:
→ 22

SEX:
→ Female

BIRTH PLACE:
→ Xing

RACE:
→ Xingese, Amestrian, Human

DATE OF BIRTH:
→ March 26, 1991

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HEIGHT:
→ 5 ft 5in

WEIGHT:
→ 140 lbs.

PICTURE:
→ [spoiler*]Yes, put it in a spoiler, otherwise I WILL bitch at you. Take out the '*' too, otherwise you must be missing a few screws upstairs.[/spoiler*]

DESCRIPTION:
→ Chii is a curvy and well built young woman. She has two bat tattoos on her shoulder blades, a katana wrapped in thorns and cherry blossoms on her right thigh. She has long blonde hair that falls all the way down her back, sometimes in a ponytail. Her bangs sit just above her blue-green eyes.

Chii dresses depending on her mood and on whatever mission she has to take on. It can be from dressing in a modest summer dress to skimpy biker clothes. She has a soft kind voice when speaking to most people but can quickly change to smooth, seductive, dark when needed.

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PERSONALITY:
→ Chii is a kind and caring woman. She tries to help out anyone when they ask for it. She loves to make people smile and happy if that means she has to suffer.

LOVE:
→ Cats


HATE:
→ Mean people, Hurting people she loves.

DEEPEST SECRET:
→ She might not be 100% human.

IDOL:
→ Roy Mustang

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HISTORY:
→ Chii was born as an only child in Xing. She had a mother who was a Warrior to the Emperor of Xing. Her name was Yumi Motosuwa. Her father, Hideki Motosuwa, was a painter, Alchahistrist in training and a black smith. They lived in a little house on the hillside near the palace. Chii was pretty smart as a young babe, she learned how to walk before she was the age of one. Her mother was killed mysteriously on a mission for the Emperor, which caused Hideki to go into a state of mourning when Chii was about five. Two years later Chii and her father moved to Amestris to start a new life.

Hideki went to start training Chii into martial arts, music, sword making, and a new study called Alchemy. Unfortunately Hideki could not understand the work so he sent his daughter to go find a master to teach her.

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TRIVIA:
→
→ Xingese (Jade) Amestrian (Cyan)

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ALIAS:
→ Your online alias. Just put down ONE name, please, and use this name in the c-box so there's no confusion over who you are.

OTHER CHARACTERS:
→ Who else do you play? If this is your first character, say so.

CREATOR'S COMMENTS:
→ Do you have anything to say yourself? As long as it doesn't sound stupid, you can put anything in here really. Just no autobiographies about your last journey to the toilet, please, because seriously, NO ONE CARES.

FACE CLAIM:

Code:

[b]SERIES[/b] - [i]Character[/i] - Your Character

(Try and keep the formatting the same for simplicity please)

CUSTOM RANK:
→ Insert the customized rank name that you wish for your character here. It can be anything within reason. If you are claiming a canon character (like Head of Central Head Quarters for example) usually 'Head of Central HQ' would be your custom rank. This would replace where is says: 'PENDING'.

OFFICIAL TITLE:
→ Insert your official Alchemist's title here - such as 'Full Metal' or 'Flame' - you do not need to be a State Alchemist to have this title, this is more for instant recognition of abilities, and the like. Also a chance for you to get creative! If you don't create one for yourself, we'll do it for you and believe me, we can come up with some awesome titles... Be sure not to put 'alchemist' or 'alkahestrist' after your title because some people are both and honestly it's too much.

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[Guest]

More to her story: Chii went to find a alchemy teacher, which thankfully she did. She had to admit this teacher knew what they were doing and boy did she almost die a few times trying. A few years had passed as she finally turned 15 before she returned home to nothing. The little house that she and her father built together was broken into, windows smashed in but still standing. She went towards the back to check on her fathers shed, had not been touched.
She breathed a sigh of relief as she turned to go into her house. She quietly crept through the back door, pulling her knife out. She could smell iron in the air, causing her to move a little faster towards the living room. There on the floor was her father...stone cold dead. She couldn't believe what stood before her eyes but she knew that she stayed here someone or something would come back. Chii quickly picked her father up from the floor, dragged his body to the back yard near the thicket of trees. She ran quickly to the back of the shed, grabbed a shovel, a bag of salt, a small bottle of gasoline and a lighter. She began to dig a grave fit to dump her fathers body inside.

Once she got his already decomposing body inside she began to dump the salt on top of his body, then poured the gasoline. She looked to her fathers body and softly began to sing her farewells as she flicked the lighter on, setting what was left of her only family a flame. She knew that he would not suffer any longer of being without his loving wife Yumi, his angel.
A few years have passed and Chii had finally mastered learning alchemy that her master had assigned her to do. She would travel to see her master and stay while helping people around the village. She had saved a few families from raging wild fires in the summer, and dreadful snowfalls in the winter. She wanted to be a protector of the people, hopefully to become a state alchemist one day.


Personality: She is a smart woman who loves to learn. She loves to work on making swords, knifes and needles for anything. She is a huge fan of getting tattoos, it has become a fetish of her.

Triva:
She is a natural blonde, even though her parents both had black hair, she came to this world with blonde.
Chii has a fetish for a man with tattoos and who knows how to fight.

Alias:
Chii Motosuwa.

Other Characters: Freya

Custom Rank: Protecting Angel: Reason because my mother would do anything to protect her family, her Emperor, and country. She looked up to that.

Official Title: The Protecting Alchemist.

[Reila Tsukino]

REVISE

Okay, Chii let's fix some of this.

1. You have a bunch of things that are just blank I'll list them here: The header at the top of your app, your lyric or quote at the top, Alias, Other characters, Creator's comments, Face Claim, Custom rank, and Official title. (I noticed you have some entered in another post below your app. Just move those up to the actual app and enter them in!)
2. Race: Take out human, and are you half Xingese and half Amestrian?
3. Picture: You need to add a picture, using a FC (meaning a character picture from another anime, doesn't have to match exactly). If you don't want to use one, double your description word count to 300 words. Here's a good site to search: http://www.zerochan.net/
4. Description: You need at least 150 words.
5. Personality: You need at least 300 words.
6. History: You need at least 450 words. So add that more to Chii's story part into the history that's already there and just add a few more words to total 450.
7. Don't post another post below your app; add it to your app. You can edit it at the top.
8. Love/Hate: Give me 5 of each please!
9. Deepest Secret: Why wouldn't she be? Unless she's a chimera, wherein she wouldn't be able to use alchemy.
10: History specifics: Her father and mother's names are Aerugese not Xingese.
*alkahestrist
11. Trivia: Actually code the colors for her speech, for example:

Code:

[color=cyan]Amestrian[/color] (cyan)

Your app has a lot of potential. You just need to push yourself and write a little more and she'll be awesome! Trust me, you should keep going with this and develop her into the word counts. Seriously, let me know if you need any help. We can talk it through and stuff. I'm guessing she's going to be an Amestrian Militant?

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