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Post by Guest Fri Jan 11, 2013 2:24 am

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CASE FILE: Amestrian Militant
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All war is based on deception
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FULL NAME:
→ Imperious Graylock

AGE:
→ 37

SEX:
→ Male

BIRTH PLACE:
→ Small village on the outskirts of North City, Amestris

RACE:
→ Amestrian

DATE OF BIRTH:
→ September 13, 1975


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HEIGHT:
→ 6'8"

WEIGHT:
→ 231lb

PICTURE:
Spoiler:

DESCRIPTION:
→ Imperious is a muscular brute, having very short black hair. He is a towering man, standing at 6’8” he dwarfs most people around him, not to mention he is fairly large in size seeming more like a bear then a human. He has a dull gray/silver colour to his eyes, making him appear blind at times though he is not. Imperious lacks behind greatly when it comes to clothing or stand out features, he appears an ordinary giant. He may be a cold individual but knows his place and when to speak he treats people with respect expecting the same in return.

A fierce and alert stance, Imperious seems always prepared for the unexpected. Approaching every situation with caution and care, he walks at a more of an easier pace, and keeps his head held high. Having been born in Amestris he has white fluffy skin, which aids in camouflage in the rough winter season. He carries a lonesome sword at his side, not requiring any other weapons, he makes up for it by having incredible speed and agility. He has trained all of his life to become stronger with the sword.

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PERSONALITY:
→ A commanding and intimidating presence, Imperious is a force to be reckoned with. Cold and merciless he does not forgive and does not forget. He does not enjoy the company of others, preferring solitary moments, he finds people are always causing problems and are not worth the time and effort. Raised by a brutal swordsman, Imperious employs his father’s philosophy of “Survival of the fittest”, giving no room for coward, timid and spineless individuals. With this mindset Imperious has been labeled a cold hearted bastard that shows no affection or compassion to the weak. A fierce aggressive attitude, Imperious is always prepared for combat.

A natural born strategist, Imperious is adaptive and insightful able to overcome difficult situations with relative ease, finding the best route to take. Knowing all of this Imperious is aware of his limitations as an individual, taking it into account when facing foes. While seemingly a heartless beast, Imperious respects and admires valor and courage from individuals when faced against enemies. In the heart of a battle when an individual is faced with fear, and learns to overcome that fear this is the meaning of true bravery to Imperious. Once Imperious has made an ally, he can trust and understand they will have earned his undying loyalty which is not easily gained.

Imperious does not care much for love or affection of individuals, seeking only to maintain his honour and pride. Having fortitude and endurance, Imperious sets not only himself but every individual he meets up with steep standards to achieve and maintain, seeking the very best from everybody. Throughout all of this Imperious loves to read anything whenever he can, he finds the best way to improve yourself is by obtaining more knowledge and information regarding everything. The best way to win wars and battle is to understand the limitations of yourself and limitations of your enemies. If you are able to find your enemies weakness and exploit it, then you are able to become victorious.


LOVE:
→ Sea salt ice cream, His sword, Valour, Courage, Fearlessness, Bravery

HATE:
→ Weak individuals, Cruelty, Disloyalty, Extreme heat, Ignorance, Loud noises


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HISTORY:
Imperious Graylock was born in Amestris, specifically a small village near North City. Born in a long winter, Imperious did not enjoy the warm summer glow for many months. Raised and trained ferociously at a young age, Imperious quickly learned that he must become stronger or die at the hands of the fierce winter winds that ripped his skin apart slowly. Experienced and skilled in the art of the sword, his father would let him sleep for a few hours at a time only if he had finished the required tasks that were set for him. Having very high standards, his father was prepared to let Imperious die if he did not improve. Not willing to give up so easily, Imperious practiced with his sword everyday out in the cold, dark days wearing nothing but a tattered shirt and pants.

It was white, quick and cruel. “The winter winds of the North city are not a place for the weak” Imperious thought as he swung his long silver sword against the practice doll that was placed before him. As he took another strike, applying too much pressure on the sword and not being able to feel his fingers properly, his right hand slipped off of the hilt and towards the freshly sharpened edge of the sword. Only able to watch in horror as he sliced open the palm of his hand, looking towards the open gash, he did not see blood pour out only a frozen slight across his hand. As white fluffy snowflakes fell down onto his palm, he stared in disbelief. Then he heard a sound through the loud winds, and turned around to see his father standing behind him. His father stared down at Imperious’ open slit, his faced flushed red with anger raising his right hand he slapped Imperious across the face and shouted “BACK TO TRAINING! YOU DISGRACE ME CHILD.” Imperious managed to grasp the hilt of the sword with what little feelings he had left in his hands and began training once more.

After years of this torturous training at the hands of his father, Imperious had grown into a vigorous, muscular man. Nearing the end, Imperious was given one final task, to defeat his father in combat. Prepared for this battle, Imperious was aware that he would need a different strategy to defeat his father, he who taught him everything he knew. Imperious defeated his father with a stroke of luck by blinding him with the glare of the rare winter sun. His father accepted the defeat proudly and had given the title of Master of the sword to his son, afterwards he presented Imperious the family heirloom which was a specially made sword that was passed down generation to generation within his family.

Afterwards Imperious went to fulfill his father’s role and duty in the army as Major General. Throughout his entire family history, there has always been a Graylock serving in the Amestris army and on the infamous Briggs wall. Proud of his father's teaching and ensuring to uphold his families honour and pride, Imperious ventured forth to serve in the army.



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TRIVIA:
→ Speaks Amestrian, Drachman, CRETAN
→ He obtained his nick name "The Imp" from his full name Imperious Graylock, people use it ironically because of how tall he is.
→ Craves to obtain more knowledge and enhance his information about the world and everything within it.
→ He is skilled with the sword
→ He enjoys learning about history
→ He loves winter
→ He is very analytical


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ALIAS:
→ Imperious

OTHER CHARACTERS:
→ First Character

CREATOR'S COMMENTS:
→ Good job!

CUSTOM RANK:
→ The Imp

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Last edited by Imperious on Sat Jan 12, 2013 4:18 am; edited 3 times in total (Reason for editing : Requested to change mistakes within original post!)

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Post by Reila Tsukino Sat Jan 12, 2013 2:46 am

REVISE

Dude, awesome we'll be working together at Briggs (once I finish Arte)! 8D Welcome to MDA!

1. Can I ask you not to color the headers orange? I admit it adds a nice flare, but for consistency's sake, please.
2. Picture! Or double description.
3. History: I don't know if it's a wording issue, but know that you cannot start as a Major General or really become one unless you run a Central, Briggs, or South (which all are taken atm).
4. Trivia: Can you just use '→' instead of '-'? Thanks!
5. You've got some strange code at the bottom so remove that.

Overall, AWESOME. I'm PSYCHED to have someone new to Briggs!!!


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Post by Guest Sat Jan 12, 2013 4:13 am

Fixed all the problems!

A quick note with the history, I simple meant to say Imperious's father was ranked as a Major General before retiring. Imperious is striving to achieve the same ranking as his father. I understand the ranking system and how you must start!

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Post by Reila Tsukino Sat Jan 12, 2013 2:58 pm

APPROVED

I figured that was the case! LOL at the picture! XDDDD
Don't forget to post in the classifieds.
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