Nico Serpente

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CASE FILE:Ciel Militant

In wine, there's truth.
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        FULL NAME:
        → Nico Serpente

        AGE:
        → 21

      SEX:
        → Male

        BIRTH PLACE:
        → Melagranna, Isle of La Cerise

        RACE:
        → 1/2 Cerisian, 1/2 Rouenian

      DEPARTMENT:
        → Ciel Intelligence

        DATE OF BIRTH:
        → 04/05/1991

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        HEIGHT:
        → 5'11"

        WEIGHT:
        → 152lbs

        PICTURE:
        →

Spoiler:

      DESCRIPTION:
        → A average height man with an average weight. His dark skin is colored of olives and would usually be garnished with thick hair, however he keeps it trimmed and short. He keeps his black wavy hair cropped short, his face is graced with a thick mustache and a soul patch of hair stuck under his lip. He is generally wearing fine suits, even when working. Along with carrying his waist tall cane around where ever he goes, folding it up when need be. His eyes hide behind his dark eyebrows, light green and misty. His nose wide, long, and straight. His hands are rough and callused compared to the rest of his body. Hard and leathery from working in the vineyards. His hands are perhaps the roughest part of his body while the rest is well groomed.

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        PERSONALITY:
        → Nico is highly intellectual, spending most of his time with his nose in a book. He cares high for his ability to think, and is very distraught when he is outwitted. He has a high regard for money, but only as a source of information. He prefers to keep things cleanly and organized, his belongs are usually kept tidy and perfect, and if anything is disorganized he becomes quite anal. He has a fondness for reptiles, and keeps a boa constrictor as a pet, having raised various reptiles he had captured in his family's vineyard. He finds them very curious and similar to how he thinks.

        LOVE:
        → Reptiles.
His mother's cooking.
Books.
Organization.
Wine.


        HATE:
        → Dirt.
Being outwitted.
Spiders.
Beer.
Being on a boat.

        DEEPEST SECRET:
        → Talks to his snakes like they are his children. It gets pretty weird.

      IDOL:
        → His Grandfather who was a very studious man, but built his family's business with blood sweat and tears.

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        HISTORY:
        → Born into a family that is somewhat wealthy and famous. The Serpente Family owns large vineyards and produce grade A quality wines that are spread across the country, their name being "Snake Wine". Nico's family was able to educate their son with a high education, in which his extremely detailed photographic memory was noticed. Nico easily got through his education being near the top of his grade. An Alchemy teacher looking for possible students picked the most intelligent of the crop from Nico's school. Nico was the only one to succeed greatly in the art of alchemy, his memory a key. He enjoyed the alchemy of metals, especially copper for it's golden and orange luster. Though his family had hoped Nico would go on too do something richer in life, however he was interested in joining the Military, for the opportunity to be able to study more into anything he wished. This is where his life has taken him, joining the intelligence organization in order to get an opportunity to take the State Alchemist exam.

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      TRIVIA:
      → Carry's his cane everywhere.
      → Cerisian, Rouenian (Gelemortian Dialect), Amestrian (Standard Dialect), Xingese (Mandarin Dialect)

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        ALIAS:
        → Elijah

        OTHER CHARACTERS:
        → First character for the site.

      CREATOR'S COMMENTS:
        → Ey deed nawt heet her! I deed nawt!

      CUSTOM RANK:
        → Copperhead Alchemist

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[Iris]

Is this done and ready for review

[Guest]

It certainly is~

[Iris]

REVISE

Okay a few notes here

CASE FILE: You need to add /Alchemist in the Case file header
Description: You're at 137 words, you need 150
Personality: You are at 106 words you need at least 250. Maybe expand a bit on his beliefs or mannerisms? Or maybe how he acts around people and any pet peeves?
History: You are at 175 words, you need 450 at least.
Custom rank: This is something to describe your character (You don't HAVE to change this, just letting you know, because I can pick something else for you if you'd like XD

Extra:

Code:

[size=18][font=courier new]OFFICIAL TITLE:[/font][/size]
        → Insert your official Alchemist's title here - such as 'Full Metal' or 'Flame' - you do not need to be a State Alchemist to have this title, this is more for instant recognition of abilities, and the like. Also a chance for you to get creative! If you don't create one for yourself, we'll do it for you and believe me, we can come up with some awesome titles... Be sure not to put 'alchemist' or 'alkahestrist' after your title because some people are both and honestly it's too much.

You need to add this in below custom rank <3 THIS is where you could be Copperhead Alchemist

Fix these up and let me know when you're done <3

[Reila Tsukino]

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