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Valentino's Alchemy (Re-submission)
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Valentino's Alchemy (Re-submission)
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CASE FILE: Transmutation Equipment
Valentino Farese
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→ Permafrost
TYPE:
→ Alchemy:Elemental
LEVEL:
→ 1.
FORM:
→ The transmutation circles are tattooed in black on the back of his hands.
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BRIEFING:
→ The transmutation circle is a larger circle that has diamonds going through the line of it constantly, within that circle is a smaller circle that contains an upside down pentagram. By utilizing the transmutation circles that are located on his hands, Valentino is able to freeze things eventually to a chilling -15 degrees Celsius. This applies to solids. Valentino must be in contact with the object or substance to initiate the chain. Fire cannot be frozen.
PICTURE:
→
- Spoiler:
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SPECIAL ABILITIES:
→ Valentino is able to freeze any substance that comes into contact with his body. Lowering it's temperature and freezing it to a chilling -15 degrees Celsius. When the substance freezes it starts a chain reaction by stealing neighboring heat energy in an attempt to revert back to equilibrium, in turn, freezing them down to the cellular level. The chain reaction can only go 10m. The warmer something is, the longer it takes for the substance to freeze completely. Anything above 45 degrees Celsius cannot be frozen, the gap in temperatures is too great and would cause an instant explosion if attempted. The substance must be a solid to start the chain.
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Re: Valentino's Alchemy (Re-submission)
REVISE
1. Briefing: "This applies to solids." -- Freezing solids is not scientifically possible unless a liquid is involved around it. Cooling a solid is a different situation.
2. Your briefing is a lot of copy and paste work. Break down what you do. I want details. What does he need to know? What does he have to do to perform this alchemy?
1. Briefing: "This applies to solids." -- Freezing solids is not scientifically possible unless a liquid is involved around it. Cooling a solid is a different situation.
2. Your briefing is a lot of copy and paste work. Break down what you do. I want details. What does he need to know? What does he have to do to perform this alchemy?
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28th is your archive date!
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