Thorn Darkrose

[Guest]

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CASE FILE: Militant

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FULL NAME:
→ Thorn Darkrose

AGE:
→ 18

SEX:
→ Female.

BIRTH PLACE:
→ Central City

RACE:
→ Xingese

DEPARTMENT:
→ SECURITY DEPARTMENT

DATE OF BIRTH:
→ November 28, 1991

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HEIGHT:
→ 165.1 cm

WEIGHT:
→ 47kg

PICTURE:
→

Spoiler:

(it's the same picher as my avatar)

DEscriptION:
→ she has ruby red hair that is long and wavy with plats from both sides of her face to the back of her head, she has dark blue eyes like the dark sea, quite dark red and pale skin that is like fresh snow, she wears a short dark sea blue top with a few pockets, short dark sea blue skirt, dark sea blue boots with silver buttons on them and dark sea blue fingerless gloves with padding in them (look at avatar for a picture).

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PERSONALITY:
→ she is shy, kind, caring and friendly, she's shy because she was bullied most her life, she's kind and caring because she went to a girl group called Guides and she's friendly because she likes making new friends.

she thinks rash-only and can be quick to think of ideas or answers to problems, she's emotionaliy-unstable, she's fast at thinking because she knows when problems come your way you need to figher out a way to solve them fast and she's emotionaily-unstable because she was bullied so much and her emotions got played with by her father
LOVE:
→ she likes to make friends and hang out with them and her other friends
→ she likes to keep as many people safe as she can
→ she likes to read books of train
→ she likes having fun
→ she likes animals

HATE:
→ she hates seeing her friends sad and hurting the ones close to her
→ she hates killing for no reason or killing some one innocent
→ she hates being alone other then when she's reading a book
→ she hates being hurt
→ she hates being used

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HISTORY:
→ she was born in Central City, her father used to make her feel really down by teasing her, her father favored her big brother and when she was 5 years old he left her and her mother, he toke Thorn's big brother with him but she was allowed to visit them from time to time, she went to a girl group called Guides (a girl grup of advenchers around the world ((it's real the queen of england was in it when she was younger))) to make friends and learn more about camping, noes, making fire, cooking and even a simple defends move called sing (stomach, in-step, nose, groin((these are the places you hit (it's a pleas move to get out of a head lock, works best on boys)))).

when she was 6 years old she went to gymnastics and then the bulling in school started, they made fun of her hair because it was red and when she was younger it was short like a boys hair cut, she ignored them and tried her hardest in school from time to time it got on her nerves and one day she ended up braking a boys nose in front of a teacher,but she wasn't punished, she was parsed for sticking up for her self and she carried on as the bully's started to back off of her.

when she was 16 two years before she join the millinery her big broth had knee problems, he was going to join the millinery but he couldn't because of his knee, one day she told him she'd join the millinery so she could try to pay for him to get his knee fix but her brother, family and friends just laughed saying she was too weak so she stopped going to gymnastics and used the money from that to start her traning, after her 2 years hard training she went and join the millinery.

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ALIAS:
→ Thorn

OTHER CHARACTERS:
→ this is my first charcter

CREATOR'S COMMENTS:
→ it's hard for me to right lots and spell good because i'm dxlsic (it's a learning disablity, means it's hard for me to right and read)

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[Aurelius Schwartz]

REVISE

I'm guessing you're finished since W.I.P isn't written anywhere ^^

1. Race: We know she's human. What you put here is: Amestrian, Drachman, Xingese, Cretarian, etc.
2. Date of Birth: 100 years from the date of the anime, which makes it current time. So it'd be 1991 I think. (I suck at math)
3. Picture: the spoiler isn't working for me... I don't get a picture in it. Try fixing that~
4. Description: 150 words minimum!
5. Personality: 300 words minimum!
6. History: 450 words minimum! Pleaseeee check your spelling; you have a ton of half words. And it's also really confusing... Guides, Sing, ...what?

[Guest]

i expland them more and i can't do much about the spelling mistacks, i have tried to caract them but my reason is in the caritor comments...

[Aurelius Schwartz]

Okay, I understand that. Do you have Microsoft Word? If you do, copy the sections and paste them into a document. That way you can spell check what you can and also you can see you word count. You still need to write more before I can approve you. ^_^ <3

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