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Post by Guest Sun Sep 02, 2012 8:15 pm

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CASE FILE: Alkahestrist
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Fighting is a great way for friends to strengthen their bonds.
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FULL NAME:
→ Renshu Drago

AGE:
→ 18

SEX:
→ Male

BIRTH PLACE:
→ Xing

RACE:
→ Half Xingese, 1/4 Aerugese and 1/4 Amestrian

DATE OF BIRTH:
→ July 7th, 1994


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HEIGHT:
→ 5'10"

WEIGHT:
→ 149 lbs

PICTURE:
Spoiler:

DESCRIPTION:
→ When it comes to looks Renshu takes much after his mother. He has her rose colored hair and her brown eyes. Even in the face Renshu looks more like his mother than he does his father. This doesn't bother Renshu much as he honestly likes his hair color. His hair seems to be naturally spiky but when it gets wet enough his hair droops down a bit. Renshu doesn't like to style his hair or anything as he feels there's no point in it. His hair comes down to his ears and Renshu cuts it if it begins to become to long. Renshu stands 5'10" and weighs 149lbs and is expected to grow at least to 6' before he stop growing according to his mother who said that's when men on her side of the family normally stopped growing. His body is well-built and he likes to make sure to keep it in the best shape he possibly can.

When it comes to clothing Renshu prefers to wear an outfit that was given to him by his mother. The outfit consisted of a black vest with gold trimmings that Renshu wore over his chest with nothing underneath it. There's also a pair of white knee length trousers and another piece of clothing, which could be called a waist cape, over it that's black with gold trimming much like the coat and is held up by a brown belt along with the white trousers. At the end of the trousers Renshu has to tie them so that they are tighter on his legs and aren't all baggy and loose. Renshu also wears a pair of black open toe sandals and a black wrist guard on his left. You will always see him wear a white lined scarf around his neck, he will almost never take this off unless it's either knocked off or taken from him. The scarf is extremely important to him and he never takes it off even if it's not around his neck he's wearing it on some part of his body.

Renshu prefers to wear the outfit mention before but there's another outfit that he likes to wear. It consists of a blue long sleeve shirt with gold trimming and other gold designs on it. A pair of orange pants and blue boots with gold trimming and design on it. There's also a white cloth wrapped and tied around his waist, Renshu of course wears his scarf in this outfit. Not only does Renshu wear the scarf because it's important to him he also wears it to cover up a scar that he has. Besides enjoying wearing those two outfits Renshu will wear whatever but anything he wears will have the scarf go with it.


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PERSONALITY:
→ Outgoing, rowdy and hard headed are a few words to describe Renshu. He has been taught to always keep your chin up and achieve your dreams no matter what. The rose haired teen loves to make friends and have fun, normally the one to try and keep people smiling. Renshu can be a bit hard headed at times and a bit foolish getting himself in trouble. When it comes to improving himself and getting stronger giving up isn't an option. He'll try his best to prove himself to others around him but doesn't do it to boast. He's quite bad at relationships has he's oblivious to signs one might give him that's not straight up telling him they like him. Renshu himself has a hard time expressing his feelings and will often get a bit nervous around someone he likes, this only happens if he is deeply cares for this person. Trying to wow Renshu with your looks is kind of hard to do as he is oblivious to that kind of stuff and finds it a bit annoying if your looks are the only thing you care about. Renshu can be a bit selfish at times keeping things for himself but tries not to act this way but sometimes he just acts that way.

Believing in giving people second chances is something he was taught and could be a downfall. Renshu is a bit too forgiving and trusting and will sometimes believe in a person despite whatever they might be doing.If a person though is obviously just a evil person, Renshu will most likely want to pick a fight with them and teach them the error of their ways. Speaking of fights, Renshu enjoys a good fight and will pick a fight with those he deems are his rivals and will jump into a fight that's going on around him. Friends are extremely important to Renshu has he himself is a very loyal friend. He will come to any friends aid when they call him and harming his friends is a big mistake on your end. Renshu gets extremely upset if you hurt his friends and will release these anger through his fist in your face. Renshu has a bad habit of losing his temper and freaking out. When this happens it doesn't matter who you are he will take his anger out on you if your near him. He won't try and go on a killing spree or anything he'll just become very aggressive and violent and hard to reason with. Renshu hates it when he gets like that and tries his best to stay calm and happy. After he goes through one of his out lashes Renshu will keep his distance away from people so he and they can cool off before speaking to them again. Due to his father never being around and his teacher leaving Renshu has a bit of an abandonment issue and feels that if he's not friendly to everyone the will eventually leave him. He keeps people at an emotional distance so he can't get close enough to people to where if they leave him he won't be too hurt by it. Renshu also does this so no one can use his feelings against him.

Renshu enjoys food and loves to eat but is can get extremely lazy and rather useless if he's hungry. This has got him in trouble before when he's lazying about when he's supposed to be doing work. Though he says and acts like he enjoys making friends and such Renshu prefers to handle things on his own. He dislikes it when someone tries to help him do something when he hasn't asked for help himself. If he's on a mission or something he prefers to do things solo and will try his best to not get into a team. Though if he's stuck with a team even if he's the leader he won't cooperate with the others and will often try to ditch them. Family is quite important to Renshu and he wants to make a name for himself so that everyone around the world knows him. His mother is probably the most important person in his life next to his friends. Renshu would do anything for her and is sometimes overprotective of her. Renshu is terrible when it comes to formal speaking and will speak his mind despite who he's talking to. He believes that everyone should be honest as that way you can tell what kind of person someone is.



LOVE:
→ Food
→ Fighting
→ Friends
→ Scarf
→ Getting better at Alkahestry
→ Animals
→ Making people happy
→ ICE CREAM
→ Music

HATE:
→ Bullies
→ Extremely sour food
→ His scarf getting damaged
→ Seeing people cry
→ Getting sick

DEEPEST SECRET:
→ Renshu is afraid of not being able to become stronger and protect others he cares about. He is also afraid to tell anyone how he got his scar.
IDOL:
→ His teacher Garith (Who he views as a father)


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HISTORY:
→ Renshu's life wasn't exactly all that exciting. He was born an only child to a mother that cared for him deeply and a father that was never around much. Sure his father would pop up sometimes when it was Renshu's birthday but those visits never lasted long. Renshu never liked his father, when he was around Renshu would try to avoid him his best. He grew to hate him over time as the man pretty much left the mother of his child alone to take care of their son. The town Renshu lived in was a friendly one. Everyone knew everyone and they were all rather nice to each other. Renshu himself was known for getting into trouble and starting fights with other kids. Often Renshu was dragged home by some adult and they'd bark at his mother for getting into trouble or starting a fight. His mother would often scold Renshu whenever he came home under those circumstances but the rose haired boy continued to act up. Most people figured that Renshu acting this way because his father was never around and he was upset about that, even his mother that it was because of this.

At school Renshu's attitude was just as bad. He'd still get into fights and goofed on in class not paying attention in class at all. Thing were probably going to get worse for Renshu when his father completely disappeared without leaving a note or anything he was just gone. Now Renshu went from barely seeing his father to not seeing him at all. This infuriated the boy, why would he just leave his family like that? His attitude got even worse but changed when he met Garith. The man had met Renshu one day while Renshu was walking through the town and accidentally. The older male looked down to the young boy and put a big smile on his face and patted Renshu's head. He then told the rose colored teen that he should turn that grumpy frown into a big smile. At first Renshu looked up at Garith with a puzzled look and figured this guy was probably some deadbeat homeless loser. Renshu decided to ignore the guy and carried on his way.

Renshu ran into the man again as he got into a fight with some older kids who were beating him pretty bad. Garith had stepped in a broke it up, after it was all over Garith introduced himself to Renshu and said that he could teach Renshu how to fight much better. What Renshu didn't know was that Garith was a friend of his mother who had known about Renshu's acting up. He had come to teach Renshu some discipline as a favor to his Renshu's seeing as what ever she did Renshu didn't listen to her. After that day Garith came around to Renshu's home everyday after school and taught Renshu Alkahestry. The Alkahestrist figured teach Renshu the Alkahestry school of Qi Assualt would be perfect for the way Renshu was. Renshu at first was totally against learning Alkahestry as he didn't care for it but his mother didn't much care for his input on the subject. Garith trained Renshu long and hard and shaped the boy into who he is now. As time passed on Renshu had a bit of trouble dealing with school work and Garith's training but he managed. Over time Renshu's old crabby personality disappeared and the one he has now arrived. Now people knew Renshu as that little kid who was always filled with joy and happiness. One day when Renshu had went over to Garith's house to find him he was gone. Renshu found a note that said to Renshu that he had to leave for some important business and that he should find someone else to train him. The rose haired teen didn't want anyone else to train him but Garith. With that in mind Renshu spent of his time dealing with school until he was old enough to leave on his own. He now travels the world looking for Garith and also wanting to hone his skills as a Alkahestrist.


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TRIVIA:
→ Renshu enjoys listening to music while he's going to sleep and often hums a tone of a song his mother sang to him while he tried to go to sleep.
→ Fluent in Xingese, Amestrian, Aerugese, Cretan


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ALIAS:
→ GKBlazer

OTHER CHARACTERS:
→ First character

CREATOR'S COMMENTS:
→ Thanks for looking at my app! I'm really excited to start rping here
FACE CLAIM:
Code:
[b]Fairy Tail[/b]/[i]Natsu Dragneel[/i]

CUSTOM RANK:
→ Iron Fist

OFFICIAL TITLE:
→ Wandering Dragon

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Last edited by Renshu Drago on Sun Sep 02, 2012 11:44 pm; edited 2 times in total

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Post by Guest Sun Sep 02, 2012 10:10 pm

Is this ready? If so, you need to fill in the Birthplace field.

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Post by Guest Sun Sep 02, 2012 10:35 pm

Oops sorry about that I forgot to fill that out and what languages he speaks. Fixed all that now so it's ready now.

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Post by Guest Sun Sep 02, 2012 10:51 pm

REVISE


1] You need to upload your images to a hosting site like Photobucket or Tinypic instead of linking from Zerochan, otherwise you get splash images like that.

2] No need to put Non-Militant in the title, just Alkahestrist will do.

3] Spacing around the loves-hates section is a little bit skewed.

4] As a note; I hear that this app bears a lot of similarities to your FC in history, personality, and the one trivia item. Now I don't watch/read Fairy Tail myself, but just copying a character from it is STRICTLY out of the question. I can't really do anything as there are some differences, but you should very much watch yourself and possibly include some edits, maybe even change his FC, to change the character a tad and make sure he does stand out from the faceclaim. Just a warning is all.

Otherwise, looks good.

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Post by Guest Sun Sep 02, 2012 11:44 pm

Alright fixed things around hope everything's better now.

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Post by Guest Mon Sep 03, 2012 9:08 am

APPROVED

Remember:

- Make a trans app.
- Languages in signature.
- Post in the activity check!

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