The Heat wave Alchemist

[Guest]

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CASE FILE: Alchemist

I won't give in, not now, not ever!
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FULL NAME:Young,Kara


AGE:14


SEX:Female


BIRTH PLACE:Central


RACE:Human


DATE OF BIRTH:March 19,1996

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HEIGHT:167cm


WEIGHT:46kg


Description:Kara is 5'6 and 102lbs.She has long white hair that looks like Edwards when it's not braided. She has wolf yellow eyes. Kara has a slight tan look to her, making her white hair stand out even more. She wears a leather jacket, white tee, black jeans, sunglasses and biker boots. Her left arm is made of Auto-mail as well as her right leg. Kara tends to walk with a slight swagger due to the auto-mail. She has a voice tinted with honey and oil until you anger her. Then it's straight acid.
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PERSONALITY: Kara is a very tough person. Her parents left for weeks at a time, leaving her with her brother. Due to a horrible mistake in her past Kara tends to be very cautious person when it comes to people. But once you break her tough outer shell she is a very loving, caring, loyal person.

Kara, despite her cold attitude is still a child deep within. Because of aforementioned mistake she found feeling nothing was better than all the pain and sadness. When confronted with new people she is normally very ready for betrayal. Most people have about 20 seconds before she attacks.


LOVE:
Cats
Action movies
Warmth
Leo
Motorcycles.


HATE:
Needles
Winter
Spiders
Pink
Glitter


DEEPEST SECRET:
She lost her limbs due to human Trasmutation. She also lost her brother.

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HISTORY:Kara was born into a family of state alchemists, aka her parents. They left her brother and her alone for weeks at a time. One day they stopped coming home when she was 4. Leo had to use alchemy to survive for another 6 years. Thanks to her brother she learned alchemy and soon became a master at the ice and water element. She also learned advanced hand-to-hand combat, including daggers. All those years her only comfort was her brother, her best friend,Talon, and her "Aunt" Selma and her daughter, Lora.

6 years later her friend, Talon was murdered. Hoping to make things better Leo, now 14, told her about human transmutation. They both thought this the answer for Kara's depression. Unfortunately Kara was stripped of her left arm and Leo lost his body. Trying to save Leo Kara gave up her leg, but she lost Leo never-the-less. Before passing out Kara saw what they had created. She still has nightmares.

Bloody and dying, Kara managed to drag herself to her Aunt's house.. They managed to bandage her up. Stubbornly, Kara demanded for Auto-mail, knowing without it she would never be able to perform alchemy again. Managing to stand the mind-killing pain Kara soon was doing alchemy again. Kara found she could make an easy living off of fighting or fixing things. Now she is on her way to becoming a state alchemist, hoping for info on human transmutation.

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ALCHEMIC ABILITY:
Heat.(Not fire)

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ALIAS:
Kara Young

OTHER CHARACTERS:
My first Char.

CREATOR'S COMMENTS:
I'm pretty new to Fullmetal... I'm not trying to copy the show, so don't accuse me of that.

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[Guest]

Done.

[Aurelius Schwartz]

REVISE

1. Fix the font to normal please. Only the headers are supposed to be courier new.
2. Birth place: Put Amestris next to Central.
3. Race: We know she's human, what you should put here is: Drachman, Xingese, Cretarian, Amestrian, etc.
4. Description: 150 words minimum~ ^^
5. What happened to the section with the picture? Make sure you have that part with the picture in a spoiler. (See the template to copy the right code for this).
6. Personality: 300 words minimum.
7. Deepest secret: You will have to think of a different way she lost her limbs.
8. History: 450 words minimum. And in this case, I cannot accept human transmutation. Also, watch grammar.
9. Alchemic ability: Please elaborate. How does she create the heat? What does it do?

Thank you~ <3

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