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Post by Tokemaru Ishida Fri Jul 06, 2012 7:48 pm


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CASE FILE: Transmutation Equipment
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Cluskio, Kryn Mefris
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NAME:
→ Quick draw

TYPE:
→ Alchemy: Basic

LEVEL:
→ 1

FORM:
→ the circle is sewn into Kryns white gloves in black thread
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BRIEFING:
→ Using the gloves Kryn can change the shape of stone. He only needs to touch the object or something connected to that object and hold the circle in the same spot until the shape he wants is created. This can be use offensively but is mostly defensively especially against fast opponents. Using his speed he can quickly transmute a spike or wall (usual transmutations) whenever he wants. Being moderately acrobatic, he can send a barrage of stone spires your way in an almost ‘C’ shape. Though, being a heads-on guy he doesn’t use these gloves ingeniously but can, if told how. He can also make simple tunnels with them for a quick escape. He doesn't need to know much, only the path and shape he wants the object to take and the original form of the object. This being the case he cannot use his gloves if he cannot see. Other cases he cannot use his gloves are as follows: the gloves are dirty to an extent that the circles cannot be seen, the threads on the circle are loose (the old lady who’d sewn them had done a great job) or the circle is drawn over with maker or even pencil.

PICTURE:
Spoiler:
Spoiler:

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SPECIAL ABILITIES:


→ The gloves can be use to transmute stone. The user can create spires, walls and tunnels as long as they touch the object and know its original form and the shape they want to make it into.


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Last edited by Kryn Cluskio on Sat Jul 07, 2012 6:57 pm; edited 1 time in total
Tokemaru Ishida
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Posts : 35
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-Case File-
Level: 1
Rank: Kajiya Kenkyū
Writer: Kryn

http://krynnymuffin.forumotion.com

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Post by Tokemaru Ishida Fri Jul 06, 2012 8:12 pm

I think i am done.
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Posts : 35
Points : 28

-Case File-
Level: 1
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Writer: Kryn

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Post by Guest Sat Jul 07, 2012 8:36 am

REVISE

1] You REALLY need a transmutation circle image unless told otherwise.

2] All solids is a bit much. Tone it down to one class, for level one - metals OR stone OR plastics, just one of them.

3] Try and work on your grammar <_> I'm not going to ask you to revise specifically for that, but this thing is riddled with errors and anomalies that should be fixed. Provided you tie up the two points aboce, I won't mind.

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Post by Tokemaru Ishida Sat Jul 07, 2012 6:57 pm

edited. Aboce?
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Rank: Kajiya Kenkyū
Writer: Kryn

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Post by Guest Sat Jul 07, 2012 7:37 pm

Above, even. Sorry, typo.

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Post by Guest Sat Jul 07, 2012 10:08 pm

APPROVED

Ensure the shapes are primitive - and don't go overboard.

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