Estenial, Kit

[Kit Estenial]

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CASE FILE: Chimerae/Homunculus

So, I'll give you a swift death and me a meal. Live? You would be selfish enough to deprive ME of sustenance?
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FULL NAME:
→ Kit Vesper Estenial

AGE:
→ 22

SEX:
→ Male

BIRTH PLACE:
→ Aiguille, Le Cerise

RACE/SPECIES:
→ Human based
→ Half Ishvalian, half Ciel
→ Kamahen Vampire Bat/Crieg Pit Viper/Drachman White Tiger

GENERATION:
→ 6th Generation

SIN:
→ Gluttony

DATE OF BIRTH:
→ August 15, 1990

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HEIGHT:
→ 5' 9"

WEIGHT:
→ 152 lb

PICTURE:
→

Spoiler:

DESCRIPTION:
→ Among Kit's slight muscled tone and cream colored skin, he has 4 outstanding features. His large, white cat ears; his bushy tail, his piercing, emerald, snake eyes, and his large fangs. He often wears white dress shirt and black dress pants, accented with a loose, rose colored tie. He often has the shirt sleeves rolled up to his elbows and the shirt buttoned up to the center of his chest. He has wispy and light snow colored hair that drapes over his forehead and neck. He wears a choker with a bell he got from a childhood friend, and he never takes it off. Inside his shirt, strapped around his abdomen with leather sheaths, are two kukri knives. He often has his hands in his pockets at most times, and usually has a smile on at all times, barely ever frowns. Even if he does and it's genuine anger, his eyes will make him look as if he's ready for murder. He has a gland in his mouth, one of poison, closed off unless it needs to be used. He doesn't have human ears, but his hair covers up those spaces on his head. He has a very soothing and eerie voice, like a voice you'd hear calling out to you from an angel of death, and whenever he walks, his tail swishes in unison.

Kit's appearance since the envelopment of his stone has changed some. It seems that melding of the stone to his body had altered his DNA, though only slightly. Kit's once green serpent eyes are now rose-red slits similar to a depiction of a devil's. As is expected as Kit has not cut his hair in literally year and the stone seemed to affect his follicle growth during metamorphosis, his hair has grown long and straight to his waist. His nails and fangs have grown another half inch in normal length and his flat, feline tongue has been stamped by an Ouroburous tattoo, spanning across the width of his tongue. Another gland has appeared in his mouth that can mix with his poison to create a natural caustic substance, similar to acid that can be spat or envelop what he's eating to better digest and quickly dispose of impurities. His fashion tastes have somewhat expanded since he has found some source of income, mostly orient kimonos or suits, and pant and t-shirt casual wear.

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PERSONALITY:
→ Kit is very quiet and never announces himself, his appearance does that for him. He is a very sociable person, and is often left alone by those who do not know him. He moves as he wants to, staying and going as he pleases. He acts very friendly and smiles often. He loves to look at the different architecture and landscape of countries, loving the man made and natural beauty of the world. He feels comfortable in a crowd, trying to strike up conversation anywhere possible. He likes learning about people and their problems, and is glad to help anyone who needs it, whether it's working in a soup kitchen to stopping a burglar. He loves knowing that he's different and the power that comes with it but also fears the power. He loves the company of women, and his icebreaker often is an offering of a painting. He is gentlemanly yet swave and wouldn't raise a hand against a woman without an extremely good reason. A good example is trying to kill him.

Then there's his other half: his second voice. He keeps all his ugly traits away by keeping control of it with keeping full on food and blood, since he will snap and enter a trance like state if his hunger grows enough and the secondary personality will take control but even then he's consiberibly weaker due to being wracked with hunger. He hides a vampire's daily diet of blood, the kill anything that moves mentality of the pit viper, and a tiger's rage. He needs to stay fed, mostly on blood, feeding on it every day to keep the voice satisfied, almost able to distinguish blood type by taste alone. His 'trances' are brought up by a combination of his hunger and his second voice that appeared during his first one, the phsycological second being that tells him to feed and kill, and other immoral things. He never likes to show that side of himself, but sometimes he just can't hold it in. When the hunger weakens his will enough, the voice hits him and takes over; he goes on a killing spree, first luring in prey with a weak and emanciated form in his trance state and using their blood to restore him then murdering everything in sight, not caring of who or what it is, feeding like a deranged homeless person. When the situation calls upon, he always asks the voice to give him advice and allow him to take bodily control of him to give him the ability to kill without mercy. He becomes a unfeeling killer. No nonsense, no mercy, just kill. He instantly loves the kill, the hunt, the pain he causes, and the blood of his enemies when it's all over. Filling his stomach is the only thing that can snap him out of it, but usually a couple bodies' worth will do.

The second voice, that voice of evil has been utterly assimilated since the stone's appearance as well as most of every good nerve in his body leaving behind a strengthened emotional drive from his evil half as well as the personalities that leak from the stone, all of which in essence are evil. Kit's language has become more grandiloquent as his more bestial desires are locked away until such time enticing food is present. The little, innocent kitten that once had control of the equally kitten like exterior has been replaced with a new, world-wise Kit. He seems to know of the flaws in humans now and the air around him is best described as conniving, cunning with a hint of smart-ass. He's equipped now with a silver tongue along with the courage to use it but not stupid enough to use it against his commanding officer or his daughter for that matter, or at least not obviously.


LOVE:
Drawing, Playing his ocarina, Helping Eating people, Blood usually dashed with exotic spices, Traveling, Red wine, Indulging in excess, Screams of those he's caused pain

HATE:
Being stared at, People yelling into his ears, Yanking his tail, Being made fun of, Biting his tongue, Small spaces, Being told not to eat something

DEEPEST SECRET:
→ Kit pretends to have no memory of his trances, when in fact he does. Kit does have some inkling of who he used to be, usually brought out by strong connections to his better side, such as a person or object.

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HISTORY:
→ Kit was a product of something that wasn't suppose to happen. A agricultural alchemist on business in Le Cerise, as a token of appreciation for the food he provided in the province, a woman offered herself to him. He wasted no time and accepted it on the spot. After the business had been done, Kit had been created. The woman's husband, a eccentric chimerae creator, learned of this betrayel and decided to use him as his first try at Generation 6 chimera creation. He took the DNA of the the 3 natural killers of the world, the Kamahen Vampire Bat, the Crieg Pit Viper, and the Drachman White Tiger, and injected it into his wife's womb, mixing the baby in a scientific cocktail. When he was born, the scientist looked him over, looking for any signs that the bonding was a success and he found four, the ears and tail, the fangs, andd the eyes. He ran several tests and realized what power his 'son' had gained. He then let his masterpiece live as a regular human would, keeping his hunger at bay with blood tablets that he took as medication.

He was as happy as any child would be, but knew several people didn't understand and feared him. This continued through pre school, grade school, and middle school, not without good reason. He was very easily angered and was found after several fights trying to bite the student. During his time, he made one friend, a kind and loving girl who always played with Kit. He remembered everything about her; her tan skin, her blonde hair, green eyes as striking as his were. She gave him a large leather collar with a bell and said, "This way I can always know you're around." Then came the day when this scientist binged Kit from his blood tablets and kept all food away from him. He felt more hungry and weaker as the days passed, which passed into a week. He could feel himself slipping, inhuman thoughts seeping into his his mind. The more his hunger grew, he felt a voice in his mind coaxing him, feeling himself get more despreate, then felt his body move on its own. His emanciated wrists slipped out of his restraints has he shambled through his home, barely able to stand let alone walk. He then saw the extent of his depravity, as for in the middle of the night, the voice told him to feed. He approached him in his sleep, looking at him like a gourmet meal. He sank in his fangs and his poison, using what was left of his strength to violently suck the blood from his soon to be corpse, then took to the streets, killing three more people in his refreshed state, the voice not letting up its control just yet. His stomach filled with blood, tasting to him of fresh born Eden. That feeling stayed every time he fed, like bliss covered in ambrosia. He fed and fed, and as he did, he felt an almost strange presence in his mind, the same feeling he had felt since he'd slipped out of his restraints. It spoke to him, telling him to keep killing and feeding, it said he'd make him stronger, but as he drank and filled his stomach, the voice used his body and his revitilized state to hunt and kill 3 more victims. All this at age 9.

The next day, the media was all over the story, people found murdered the next day, killed in the middle of the night with little to no witnesses, and what witnesses there were were rambling old homeless who no one believed. Kit remained with his mother, who loved him no matter what. She understood that he had no control over what he did, then told Kit about his real father, and his name: Verlo Estenial. After a week of sick leave, he returned to school, his classmates in tears. He was told that, 'The monster ate her last night, she was eaten!' The shame, guilt and sorrow hit him in an instant, but the voice was pleased, laughing in fact. Kit was so enthralled in his killing that he took no time to identify, only to feed. He killed four people that night, and as much to his shame, he loved every second of it, and had done what the voice told him. His schooling afterward was accompanied by worse treatment from his peers, calling him a monster and saying that they 'knew' he killed her.

His mother knew nothing of how to make the blood tablets, and the supply was limited, but lasted for 3 more years. Then his next fit of hunger hit after another month, his body emanciated, depraved, barely keeping up, moving as the voice commanded, barely able to kill the first of the 5 people with all the desperation and depravity of his first feeding frenzy, and the voice was pleased with the quota again and again gave Kit control. After he suprised the first victim, poisoned him, then sucked him dry, his strength was refreshed, but the voice didn't stop at one. He started packing up the next day, taking all of his savings with him to get him started. He had become a danger to everyone he loved, it was time to leave before he hurt anyone else. He kissed his mother goodbye and walked out the door, taking along his the rest of his father's research funds down through the dirt roads to the harbor, producing a fistful of bills to for a ticket wherever.

His traveling began, and his knowledge grew. In the many different countries he visited, he learned of history, art, and music, absorbing it all like a sponge. He met many kind people on his journeys, and collected momentos from these friends. He used his knowledge of the arts and music to perform daily in the streets for money, saving up for the boat ticket to his next destination. He learned from their kindness, and learned to give kindness wherever he went. But he also saw the evil in the world, the ugly side of life. He knew that he would not gain forgiveness of his crimes, but that never stopped him from asking for it every day. His mother told him about his real father and his half-sister. He was scouring the globe for them, not knowing who they were or what they looked like, but it didn't stop him. That was his second priority. First and formost was this: His peers told him he was a monster that no one wanted him. He was hell bent on proving them wrong. But the monster never left, staying with him through all his years alone, taking his body at his times of weakness and lending advice when needed.

What an incredibly strange journey Kit had been through, all the sin he'd been introduced to. Due to the aid of one Ms. Valeria Diablos, Kit was introduced to the sins of the flesh. It had never left his memory and after a certain trip to New Optain, Kit had become, to put it bluntly, a prostitute and made a fine mess of his moral system, introduced to an entire sin that had almost snapped his innocent child psyche in two. Kit had stayed with Ms. Valeria Diablos and her ill-tempered, jealous body-guard for a month before an incident with her brother on his first time visiting Drachma, when the woman had put a 9mm into his foot. He still has the scar.

From there, Kit did more time wasting wandering from more countries and meeting several...interesting characters. Kit had made acquaintance with the Pirates where he learned an old Crieg friend of his, Katayuun, was one of them. The last trip he had taken before his transformation was to Esparia to try and procure a stable job of a fashion designer. What he thought to be a meeting with his employer's assistance turned into a meeting with his muse, Tanadra Collier which then almost made his body shut down from a nervous overload. Fortunately, she was impressed with his first few works but asked for a portfolio of at least 20 designs. Kit's solution to discover muse? Travelling, of course!~ This leads us to the fall of a kind soul and the rise of a ravenous sin.

In the snowy streets of Drachma this story unfolds, the sky as grey as his inspiration as music flowed from his being as passersby threw money into his bag. Then...he strolled up, quiet, unassuming yet to Kit and his animal instincts, this man could have just been the words 'bad news' with legs for all he cared, but that damned voice planted him (as well as his fear). The man introduced himself as "Aurelius", the known King of Drachma and the leader of the RIOTE. He offered Kit a tiny trinket for his playing ability, or a 'gamble' rather. He felt it in his hands, the tiny red teardrop filled with pain and suffering. It called so strong that he had no choice in what came next. It seeped into cuts in his hand and changed him completely. He became gluttony, which as he is known as the 'Bloodluster' in Gelemorte, it fit to a poetic point. Aurelius was about to stalk away as he collected this new information before matching his stride, willing to repay this new power any way he could to this...rather interesting man.

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POWERS:
→ Thanks to a newly created gland that has grown inside of Kit's mouth, he now has the ability to turn his saliva into a caustic substance by mixing it with his poison. This substance has a strong effect on materials like flesh and bones as well as stone but has a very slow reaction with things like metals. Kit often uses this to break down food or to add some spice to a kiss to an enemy target. This one gland can usually be replenished by the consumption of flesh as it is broken down to create the catalyst nutrients.

→ Kit's other ability is that of an extendable tongue. Kit can not only break down flesh for replenishment of his new gland, but to sort of transmute it at the base of his throat in a rapid tissue growth to allow his tongue to grow. He can fit his tongue, now matter how long, down his throat to better conceal it and to coat it in acidic saliva. At this point in his skill, this power has two downsides: with the more tongue he creates, the less reservoir of flesh he can draw from for nutrients and he can only grow it to a measly 3 1/2 feet (a rough estimate, Kit's got better things to do than measure his tongue).

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TRIVIA:
→ Kit's special abilities of his animals are:
→ Passive viper ability: Extreme flexibilty, poison glands,
→ Passive tiger ability: Enhanced reflex and strength
→ Passive bat ability: Enhance hearing, fangs, hematophagy
→ During hunger trance, acts as the voice commands or as the voice controls his body to do, but enhanced strength and reflex are close to non-exsistant until he's revitalized by filling his stomach, since he is consideribly weaker in his trance.
→Street performer: Talented in painting, acrobatics, singing, and playing an assortment of instrument, his favorite is the ocarina and violin
→ Dual Survivalist: Knows of ways to survive both in the streets and in the wild.
→'Good' cook: Knows several traditional dishes of the island nations
→Traveler and Linguist: After eight years of travel between the island nations, he's learned their history, music, art, and their languages, along with great social skills.
→Uses his two kukri for combat and hunting, talented in both.
→The voice is always present in Kit's mind, not always speaking. If his will is weakened by hunger, the voice will take control of his body and do as it sees fit with his body not able to use his enhanced strength and reflex. The voice will occasionally give advice or suggestions to Kit, and Kit always speaks internally with it. Even when the voice gains control during trances and revitalizes the body, he doens't nessesarily give back control right away.

Fluent in Amestrian, Cretan, Crieg, Esparian, Cerisian, Aerugese (Kansaiben dialect), in the process of learning Drachman

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ALIAS:
→ Kume

OTHER CHARACTERS:
→ Kumero Ayashizu[color=crimson], Nevski Petrenko, Jean Markathis

CREATOR'S COMMENTS:
→ A vampire cat...it has now been done. Now we've got the new Gluttony. May people tremble at his growling stomach. Level 2 Revamp


CUSTOM RANK:
→ Bloodluster Voracious Bandersnatch

FACE CLAIM:

Code:

[b]Kamisama Hajimemashita/ARTIST[/b]/[i]Tomoe[/i]

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[Kit Estenial]

Alright, I'm ready. Have at it!

[Reila Tsukino]

REVISE

1. Age/Date of Birth: He'd be 21 if he was born in 1990.
2. Race: ...what the hell is: "Ishvalian/Ciel|" Actually, just make this entire section more clear and organized. I only care what HUMAN race he is and what SPECIES of animal he is.
3. Description: This bothers me slightly. The plural of knife is knives.
4. Personality: *suave Check your grammar!!!! Spell check is your friend!
5. Personality: "He keeps up his personality while also internally fighting a vampire's bloodlust" --Research Vampire Bats please.
6. Love/Hate: Can you not space them so much? Thanks~
7. Deepest Secret: Soo....his deepest secret is that it's a lie when he says he doesn't remember it? Make that more clear.
8. History: "The next day, the media was all over the story" --How did he not get caught? He was nine.
9. Trivia: Since he didn't have much schooling, how did he learn so many languages??
10. Trivia: Can you, again, not space them out so much? Like maybe use the arrows as bullets.

Not bad, not bad. It's fairly interesting considering the cliché nature of this kind of character. Keep working at it!

[Kit Estenial]

Ready for a revist!

[Kit Estenial]

[bump]

[Guest]

No need to bump this. Don't do it unless you've made significant changes, and little messages like [bump] really aren't helpful, just adding to a spam quotient that we aim to keep fairly low.

Cause Aki's off in Disney, and she's pinned this app as hers, NORMALLY, you would be stuck with no judgment til the 28th. But she told me to take care of it once I got home, and I will be tomorrow, so you'll have a revisit then.

[Guest]

REVISE

1) A young what? Who's Vincent Price? Try to refrain from using comparisons to real world or fictional figures. Not only is it hard to distinguish for those unfamiliar with the context, it also looks sloppy.

2) One of Aki's points still stands. He's nine years old. How doesn't he get caught?

3) Okay, look. It needs to be made very clear. Hematophagy is an alternative way of getting nutrients. What you're suggesting is that this hunger makes him insanely powerful, but, in reality, it won't. It'll make him lethargic. Emaciated. Unable to move, really. It'll be just like fasting. And furthermore, in order to trigger this hunger, he will have had to not only refrain from drinking blood, but eating and drinking entirely. So he won't be more powerful, and whilst maybe out of mind and entranced from sheer hunger, he's going to be weak and brittle. There won't be any bloodrage.

4) If he's as hungry as you say he is, he's not going to be acting properly, and probably won't be stealthy or fast. Think zombie. It's highly unlikely he'd have killed all these people. Hell, in fits of hunger, you don't lash out at the nearest cow and try to devour it. Even if it gets that dire, that's a pretty bad state. The only logical explanation here is the ability to link the consumption of blood psychologically to the emergence of a secondary feral personality in his earlier years, but even then, that would emerge slowly as he stops drinking blood/taking the tablets. And he'd still get fucking hungry, and be weak as all hell.

5) Dual-wielding isn't the act of simply being good with knives and blades. That's just... being good with knives and blades. Slight technical hitch.

6) Where does a twelve-year-old get the CASH to travel the world?

[Guest]

REVISE

1) No. This needs to be made clear. There is no blood-rage. Even linking psychological factors, NOTHING is enhanced. He won't be stronger in any way. He'll be weaker. Much weaker. Instinct and reflex won't be increased in any manner. He will lose all semblance of who he is.

Yes, it IS possible for dormant personalities to unlock hidden strength within people. But if this is triggered by days of starvation, he won't be able to utilise whatever strength is there, because he'll be so damn hungry. It's still not feasible that he can kill adults in this state, but I can at least go with that. You need to make it apparent that there's a struggle.

2) Make it MUCH clearer about the triggers for him to lapse into the trance-like state. Try to refrain from using the word 'bloodrage', or anything that suggests he's getting MORE powerful. Reinforce the facts entirely that it makes him weaker. Cause that's what it'll do.

[Guest]

APPROVED

Thanks for being amiable about this, Kume. Glad we could finally come to a conclusion and that it's something we've both worked towards - this has been tricky, and you'll need to keep your wits about you posting, but you're good to go!

[Iris]

Archive date is October 15th

[Reila Tsukino]

You gotta put the [WIP - DATE] at the top for when you moved it into revamp.

[Kit Estenial]

Revamp be done. I call forth the judgment hammer of the mods!

[Reila Tsukino]

APPROVED

Most excellent my dear friend. Aurelius Approved. XD

[Jay Furor]

RE-APPROVED~

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