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CASE FILE: Esparian Militant {2ND LIEUTENANT}
Maribel Mauricio Minene-uryu-icon-mirai-nikki-14780909-100-100-1 Maribel Mauricio Minene-uryu-icon-mirai-nikki-14780909-100-100-1 Maribel Mauricio Minene-uryu-icon-mirai-nikki-14780909-100-100-1
"I set my sail. Fly, the wind will take me. Back to my home, sweet home. Lie on my back, clouds are making way for me. I am coming home, sweet home. I see your star, you left it burning for me. Mother, I'm here.

Eyes open wide. Feel your heart, it's glowing. I welcome home, sweet home. I take your hand, now you never be lonely. Not in the home, sweet home. I see your star, you left burning for me. Mother, I am here."

-Set sail, coming home-
-Bastion-

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FULL NAME:
→ Esparian name: Maribel Mauricio
Aerugese name: Matsudaira, Momoe
Code name: Sun bird "Dom aves"

AGE:
→ 24

SEX:
→ Female.

BIRTH PLACE:
→ Cordoba, Esparia

RACE:
→ 1/2 Esparian, 1/2 Aerugese

DEPARTMENT:
→ Janitor/"Burial Agency"

DATE OF BIRTH:
→ 31th of Decemeber


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HEIGHT:
→ 172 cm

WEIGHT:
→ 67 Kg

PICTURE:
Spoiler:

Dom aves:
Spoiler:


Ḥashshāshīn:
Spoiler:


DESCRIPTION:
Facial features:

When in duty, Maribel would have her silky & thick hair which bangs covers some parts of her face and said hair that reaches her hip dyed in lilac. As for her eyes, lenses changes their colors into amaranthine with the left eye always covered in an eye patch, this eye patch has it's own functions that will be discussed later in the weapon application. She has a well drawn eyebrows just like her cousin, a medium sized mouth with it's lips colored in shy cherry. Her ears are usually hidden under her hair, however if anyone was able to spot them, they would find that those ears fits well and is proportionate to her heart shaped face. Maribel's nose is neither pointy long or shorty oblate, something in between that compliments well her other facial features.

When not in duty, the only difference would be her hair being in it's natural color which is dark brown and her eyes in light brown. In this case her left eye goes free without an eye patch.

Maribel's face is very expressive. it's capable to show very angelic and peaceful features which would prove very comfortable to the eyes of others. In the same time, it is capable of making the sadistic look of a daring devil..all depends on the mood of this bitter beauty.

Of course, she looks definitely oriental. It means, Momoe inherited her looks from the Aerugese side. Nothing Esparian is or in here.

Bodily features:

Maribel maintains mainly medium proportions following her Aerugese inheritance. Her skin is white but not pale. Momoe has a well toned and athletic body however that would go unnoticed by others. Her fingernails are trimmed well and always unpolished. The half blood takes care about her hygiene and makes sure of always being odorless all times. Momoe's has unmarred skin except for two bullet wounds in her abdomen but she went a cosmetic surgery to hide them.

Wares:

When on her shady business and duty, Maribel would be seen in her janitor outfit. All mostly in black and indeed black is elegant. In a formal business suit, she clad herself always. A white shirt covers her upper body with a loosely tied black necktie, as for lower body, there is this black formal skirt for freedom of movement that reaches her knees, however Maribel's legs are not bare but covered in black leggings that reaches her thighs -so her skin is perfectly hidden beneath skirt and leggings- while her feet is dressed in formal black shoes. Indeed, she is the woman in black. Of course, it must be mentioned that Momoe wears a black formal coat with the janitor badge on it, beneath said coat the the suit's black jacket. Finally, Maribel's hands are covered by black gloves to keep her equipment and weapon clean of fingerprints.

In casual matters, not in duty and freedom of movement is required. Momoe is dressed in olive green hooded shirt with zipper action, dark blue jeans and whitey sport shoes striped in dark green. Of course, the white socks shouldn't be forgotten.

When in social occasions which she doesn't participate in them a lot. Maribel never wear extravagant eye catching wares. Momoe prefers simplicity provided by a modest dress that doesn't show much and a sandal.


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PERSONALITY:
A world of contradictions is a world divided.

Scarred soul: Maribel simply didn't start her life right. It want totally to the wrong direction from the beginning. What to expect from a child who received her teachings from the underground not from the school? The wall separating between the right and wrong fell years ago. For her, regret is meaningless and remorse, pfffft..that one is already in the nearby trash can. Everything is permitted, nothing is true.

Business oriented: How the world works? how to hunt opportunities? How to make good judgement ? Maribel is indeed trained to become a cold ruthless killer but she is neither insane or maniac. Momoe is capable of rational thinking showing always nerves of steel and definitely no weakness.

Infamous: Taking into heart her uncle's first teaching, Maribel would seek doing incredible feats to prove herself to be the best within the agency. In order to be such, she discovered that cunning and seamless calculation are the first steps on the road..Indeed, there is a lot to be learned.

Brilliant mimicry: Resourceful and adaptable, Maribel can take any role in the battlefield if that was needed. Out of the battlefield, she can take the shape of an innocent woman always hiding in plain sight like a wolf hiding in a sheep's skin. A loner to begin with, Maribel always strives to enhance and develop herself. Because there no one better to trust except herself. Momoe believes in herself, She is her own man.

Timid apparent: Self explanatory and incremental to the last feature. When not in duty, people would see her as a quite and innocent girl easy to approach and she act as such not because she is a brilliant actor..perhaps, that is what Momoe actually yearns for. Simply, to be a normal girl.

I am still human!: Very contradicting indeed, yet explains the urge trying to be normal. In the very deep of her conscience, there is still some good to be uncovered perhaps in the future, she would be able to do something good for the sake of good. This may reflect on her social interactions, but what would be the result? that remains to be known.

Tough love: Indeed, Momoe is a loner but she is a human and humans were created for social interactions. In there, there would be the fountain of life and Maribel ought to drink to feel alive. Definitely, she would meet people and some of them, Momoe would call as close or friends. In troubles, this bitter beauty would be the first one to prove assistance. But beware, Maribel will be mean to strike some sense into whom she acknowledge and will be very inclined to flip tables.

Raison d'être: Maribel undergone indoctrination and like a true bloodhound, she is loyal to her master. Esparia is always right, Esparia is never wrong.

Set sail, coming home: Despite being a traveling freak, she wishes someday to settle down and take some rest for a while. Maribel may not look like it, but she honors family ties. After so much time away from her Aerugese family, Momoe would link the broken ties sooner or leter.


LOVE:
→ Esparia, red carnations and Andalusia
-Aerugo, cherry blossoms and Okinawa
-Maribel has a soft side for children despite not meeting with them often
-Momoe has soft side for small animals as well.
-Maribel is a nature freak. Eventually, she is used to the nature as the nature is used to her
-Squirrels
-Mango and Peach
-All of sort of weapons. White weapons, firearms and explosives
-Bloodhounds
-Drug cocktails

HATE:
→ Alchemy, it is well known what Esparia's stance regarding it.
-Liquors, very contradicting indeed.
-Small animals mistreatment. In a sense, another contradiction.
-What her master deems as troublemakers
-Pigs, she just doesn't like them.

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HISTORY:

An improper story


“People are just but a memory, so choose wisely what kind of memory you want other people to remember you with..”

The man who was called as ‘Hisamitsu’ spoke the words while holding the lit cigarette in his hand while being dressed in his leathery white suit and black shirt, he addressed the young girl in front of him.

“I shall be the tycoon who shall build Okinawa with his own hands to glory and greatest heights. It shall be my seat of power while I rule my own world of underground. People will seek me to do them favors and they shall address me as Hitokiri..all for the sake of the empire.”

He ceased as the cigarette tip found it’s way to his lips, puffing away smoke after the fateful inhale. “So, what about you kid?”

Momoe wasn’t able to look into his eyes, his resolve was strong and she was still young. In front of her, there was a gun on the desk, the same desk her uncle was sitting on its chair. With hesitation and shaking hands, Momoe picked it up.

“Well..you gonna learn things the hard way..but your mother always told me that you are an Esparian and she believes that you guys tend to do miracles.” He crushed the burning tip into the nearby ashtray. “Let’s do it then, I shall teach you until I deem you ready. Then you shall return to your homeland and do whatever your mother asks you to do.”

That was about twelve years ago..

***

Dom Aves

Maribel is a half Esparian and half Aerugese, born in Cordoba 31th of December 1987. Her father was a cartel boss who married an Aerugese woman, the latter had Yakuza familial ties. After one year of their marriage, the duo gave birth to a fraternal twin. While Maribel maintained a complete resemblance to her oriental heritage, her twin was quite the opposite and remained true to Esparia's will. Familial disputes within the cartel erupted due to the bizarre looking wife and child, as they didn’t agree from the beginning to such bonding. It ended with a divorce, with the Aerugese part returning to Okinawa of Aerugo.

Momoe was fueled by her mother’s scorn and the prejudice her mother suffered from the cartel however Momoe didn’t feed on the scorn itself, it drove the young half-blood to be the hand smiting what supposed to be the punishment, all for the sake of her mother. Maribel received training Aerugo under the tutelage of her uncle however without being affiliated or participating in yakuza missions, she learned from him many things, most importantly how to gain others' trust as it was crucial to gain ranks within any kind of organization. Things goes at first by befriend someone from the inside, impress them with good skills in order to gain a foot hold within. Simply, it was all about good skills and good judgement.

At the age fifteen when she was shipped back to Esparia to self learn the ways of her people alone, without knowing much, her uncle had some contacts in esparia just to keep an eye on her. Eventually, Befriending cartel members allied to that of her father’s, Sun bird soon was invited in, with her father and sister not knowing she was part of the team by then. Dom Aves rose in ranks starting to get privileged information, later on access to bank accounts, the alliance hideouts and warehouses. Eventually, the cartel depended on her leadership in some aspects; they had come to trust her. Maribel was eighteen by then, it was when she had to make a choice. To build up power and forget about everything or take out her mother’s revenge, it was her moment where the fate of a whole alliance lied within her hands. She decided to take it, taking all the back accounts for her own use, selling secret information to rival cartels. The very cartel Maribel served crumbled to its knees pushing her father into the corner as rival cartels began their heavy assaults on him. Within and through the chaos, Momoe slipped in to make the assassination, however her human nature prevented her from doing killing her own blood, choosing to withdraw instead, disappearing completely from the scene. Reports indicate that her father and sister were able to escape.

Dismayed, with no purpose, feeling the bitterness of failure and the years cast into the sea and the innocence lost, Maribel decided to go vigilante seeking fame for the sake of it while operating alone taking into heart the first teaching of her uncle. Young in age and unwise, she didn't understand the true meaning of her uncle's words scarring her soul more in the process. Momoe was indiscriminate when choosing her targets. She hunted rebels, cartels and government officials; however her streak of wins was thwarted when she tried to assassinate both Diego and the current Presedente at the days of the revolution which ended in the coup d’etat. At this point, her uncle's observers reported her back as killed in action.

Maribel was given the choice of whether to choose death or as a criminal, to repent by joining the bloodhounds; Dom Aves chose the latter, being hollow from the inside and without a truel Raison d’etre, she didn't resist indoctrination. She survived the training grounds of the Panei and Kamahen. Maribel was able to operate solo performing well in eradicating resistance pockets across Esparia. Surviving the odd circumstances where others had fallen and defeating all bitter odds, Momoe was able to live longer compared to her bloodhound colleagues thus she was able to impress the one upper echelon of the esparian republic, certainly not by dressing in fancy but by decorating her blades and bullets as a hunter in the blood of her preys like a trophy, even with the narcotics curse that would let any mind go berserk ultimately becoming unwary of their own safety consumed by blood loss in the end. She was able to tame the addiction to the drug cocktails coursing through her veins making it more poetically beneficial rather in harmful. Maribel was able to prove herself worthy of redemption. She was named 'sun bird' and later on induced to the janitor’s agency and still serving for a year until now.

Currently, Maribel lives alone and continuously in travel and making journeys to other countries while in the secret aiding Esparia when her services are needed.

***

The lost chapter

Pain struck her down clueless, Maribel straggled behind with her slender legs looking for a wall to lean on. Oh, a younger version of Maribel found it at last, slipping downwards looking for a comfortable sitting posture. But, it didn’t matter really. For scarlet was seeping away leaving behind nothing but cold and a feeble mind. A hazy figure stood before her. A weak but wicked smile was formed upon her lips feeling the euphoria of an impending death. Her unhidden amaranthine eye glimmered in recognition as her small lips parted little words with him.

“Well done”

Spoiler:

At such moment, her eyelids ere beginning to falter, things began to be blurry. It was then, Maribel saw an angelic creature standing behind the ‘el Presidente’ she couldn’t tell how much wings it did have but it was both beautiful and august. Her mind resolved to the final conclusion that if death was a drug, then it would be the best drug ever.

***

Report # MM-77582

The agent was a former bloodhound, her actions in the field of battle was noted. Here are the reasons why she was considered as a candidate to get her inducted in the burial agency.

Operación: Noche de grito

Objectives:

-Destroy defensive installations.
-Prepare for area for aerial assault from the nearby naval fleet.

Reports indicate a heavy resistance pocket within kamahen. Bloodhounds deployment advised to ready area for aerial assault.

Strike team would be deployed at Mid-night within kamahen at designated insertion point. The strike team would deploy 5 Km away via a helicopter at a very low attitude to go unnoticed from hostile radar systems. However, they were hit by Aerugese type 93 SAM surface to air. the landing zone was hot, strike team was forced to evacuate immediately from the helicopter -Note: The enemy knew about the insertion and shall be explained later in due time- Unready, team members swam to the shore seeking jungle coverage where an ambush was prepared.

The agent decided otherwise, diving mostly only taking short strides to the surface keeping her from losing breath. She circled around the enemy to ambush them from behind getting from the least place they would expect their foes to appear, by climbing up a very slippery cliff. Dom aves was able to locate the resistance communication center and quietly infiltrated through stealth neutralization of her targets, Maribel secured information about the mobile ground-to-air defenses and opted to send encrypted messages regarding the air defense and the important military structures present within mission's perimeter. After that, she sabotaged and disabled the communication system forcing the well prepared enemy into a state of disarray. According to the new information, strategies changed and it was decided to make heavy naval bombardment. Strike team was advised to pull out, but the agent disobeyed and went after a nearby high ranking officer unit within the resistance, eliminating his bodyguards in the process eventually abducting him then evacuating in time.

Thanks to the abducted officer, we gained more information about an insider within our ranks who was executed later. In the light of this new more information, more bases of the resistance were discovered and strike teams were launched to shut them down permanently.

As for Dom aves, she was found guilty for insubordination and it was ruled for her to serve in a solitary cell with hard work for a month. Usually, the military court would have issued more harsh verdict but decided not to, thanks to her actions which saved more Esparian lives.

It was decided to test the candidate abilities since showing different mindset than her comrades in trade to ascertain whether she would be able to carry out her Janitorial duties and here are the results.

Assassination attempt #1: Successful.

Dom aves was instructed to assassinate a heavily guarded target who was an enemy for the republic. The target was making an audience in a closed theater in foreign country X. Maribel gained access to this theater attending plays many times before the audience would happen to spot all the advantages she can use. In the same time she -anonymously through different channels- personally researched information regarding her target and his bodyguards behaviors to understand their guarding procedures and their what to do in crisis times. Momoe infiltrated the theater from roof through air ducts planting smoke bombs to be detonated remotely to enforce chaos in due time.

Knowing where her target would exit, she chose a high elevated position granting her hard angle of sight to shoot howeve it was the least suspected for a sniper to be present. The window of time given to her would grant only a small time for one shot to be made

After detonating the smoke bombs, the bodyguards acted accordingly and sought to exit from where Momoe expected. The shot was made and the target was neutralized. and the agent pulled out without getting attention to herself.

Assassination attempt #2: Successful.

Dom aves was instructed to assassinate another heavily guarded target within Esparia. Target was an old man living in a high scrapper hotel in Malos Ciudad, it was decided that he was a trouble maker so the agent was sent after him. However, it proved difficult to infiltrate his two floor suite through normal means. So, Maribel befriended one of the maids serving inside to know when the old man was alone and how the patrols went inside.

It seemed that the target instructed his guards and home service not to disturb him at mid-night, he intended at this time to take a warm bath then read a book in his bed while leaving a window opened. He always slept in the right part of the bed if one would enter from the door room.

So a plan was devised, a disguised Maribel booked a suite just below the target's one. All in mind, with a climbing tools and in the destined time at night. Momoe made her attempt while avoiding when the patrols were nearby negating their ability to see her from inside, she climbed two floors to his window. Maribel found herself inside and hid behind the door that when opened would block her prey's vision from seeing the assassin sent after him.

He took his last bath and as planned the target found his way inside. With a fiber wire in hand and quite steps, she went behind unnoticed to strangle him to death crushing his wind pipe. No blood, no sound. No one saw, no one noticed. Maribel returned her dead prey to his favorite spot in his bed. She descended down leaving behind no fingerprints and evidence of her presence.

But the mission didn't end for her it this point. Her contact inside needed to be eternally silenced, the maid died from a street accident. According from autopsy, the maid was drunk..

A matter of Internal security: Successful.

It seemed two indigenous tribes were in a kind of dispute. Delegation was appointed in specific location within Esparia to discuss some matters while their blades held at each other. Said blades are two new sniper rifles one side bought, A specialist was needed to stop stupidity from even beginning. Dom Aves was dispatched to supervise from a long distance with a sniper rifle of hers while observers from our side tapping their conversation.

Well, matters escalated and Maribel was given the signal to intervene providing two sniping shots right at their sniper rifles muzzles disabling them from shooting while not killing them. It must be noted that the agent chose her position a strategically where she spotted her targets and in return they didn't. No blood was spilled that day. The agent continued on sabotaging crucial facilities on both sides incapacitating their battle abilities and preventing further escalation.

Operación: Testamento

Her last test was to infiltrate a certain cartel which proved as a nuisance at our borders. Sent with nothing but her clothes on her, Maribel was able to impress some guys in with some little skills. She didn't how off on the contrary, Momoe performed modestly keeping her acting real. As a foot soldier or rather a cannon fodder, she survived, since it was the best thing Maribel do in addition to completing the missions given to her. The agent didn't hesitate to dispose of any opposing Esparian militants to keep her cover clean and any haters from within the cartel discreetly by moving others in her stead doing her deed. Climbing the ladder of ranks while showing her true capabilities bit by bit, for that she was considered as prodigy at this point further gaining the trust of her temporary superiors. Soon, they depended on skills and later on she got herself a spot in the board, this was obviously the checkmate.

In about one month of this mission, this cartel was wiped out by joint force of different Esparian cadets dealing surgical strikes depending on precise and accurate information. And the board members were swiftly assassinated by our insider. And that was a mission accomplished.

Analysis: The candidate is able to act differently and accordingly to the situation at hand. Maribel may sometimes deal with her enemies up and close or from a long distance depending on her tactical mindset and the strategy drawn and deployed for her to follow. The committee deems her performance passable thus makes her worthy of joining the cadres of the janitorial ranks. However it is up to the Presidente to decide.

End of report

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TRIVIA:
Janitor: Yeah, Maribel is a burial agent and no, you will never know it. And if you did, it would be too late.
Survivability: Maribel was able to survive through almost inhuman conditions and that was furthermore honed when she was enlisted into the bloodhounds. She can receive extreme punishment and still be able to fight.
-Stealth: It is her way mostly of doing things; Maribel trained herself for silent steps. An example: Running to get past away easily from patrols, or to approach someone from behind to strangle. Stealth is the keyword and stealth, she would do.
-Show me the power!: Maribel’s body is very tolerant to receiving drug cocktails which are made specifically to enhance all of her physical and mental abilities.
-Former Bloodhound: Surviving through both panei’s and kamahen’s jungles taught her the arts of close combat quarters.
-Esparian!: Maribel is a half blood but her Esparian crimson coursing through her veins is potent. Resourcefulness, adaptability and quick learning mark her as her marksman and sniper skills and abilities would do. She can operate lonely as a sniper being well versed in the arts of fieldcraft, camouflage, infiltration, recon and observation. Or be integrated into a team where the skills of a designated marksman are in dire need such as quick and precise shooting while laying down accurate rapid fire. It must be noted that her favorite spot to shoot is the eyes. Yes, the word 'omni' is always potent, beware.
-Aerugese!: Momoe is mostly inclined to the Aerugese culture so regarding how she interacts with people, she is a lot more Aerugese than Esparian.
-Underground: Despite not serving the yakuza, Momoe got an idea of how the criminal underground works. Adding to that, she as a Maribel served in the cartel. Forging identities and credentials is natural for someone who wants to get somewhere and eventually get things done
-Ḥashshāshīn: Being a bloodhound, means using drugs to enhance the user’s abilities. Naturally, there is no compassion, there is no mercy. There is only a very cold ruthless mentality with one objective in mind, to carry out inhuman commands with total precision.
-Wicked sick: Sometimes, drugs pills or drug cocktails are needed to be smuggled through security stations all around the world. Maribel always hide one in her 10th orifice out of habit.
-Demolition expert: Maribel’s other profession is making explosive devices, delivering them and defusing any hostile explosives as well.
-Hearing sensitivity: Maribel trained herself to locate her targets through the means of hearing if there was no visual contact,. applies only in short distanced gunfights where even the faint sounds can be heard.
-Relations: Maribel or rather Momoe is a first degree cousin to Matsudaira, Shin Ai “Nakajima Tomoe” and her uncle is Matsudaira, Hisamitsu who is Tomoe’s father and my fifth character to be.
-Maribel is ambidextrous
-Maribel: The name it’s self has many meanings. Mainly it is ‘bitter beauty’, it’s spanish contraction of the names Maria and Isabel. Maria means "sorrow". Isabel is the medieval form of the name Elizabeth.It means "pledged to God". In Latin, it means “star of the sea”. The name origin is “Miryām ” It may mean "wished-for child", "bitter", "rebellious" or "strong waters" it might be derived from an Egyptian word myr "beloved" or mr "love"
-Mauricio: Mauricio means "The Moor". This is not her father’s by any means. Her colleagues in bloodhounds called her like that since she didn’t look like an Esparian. It was their way to describe her as a stranger and foreigner.
-Momoe: Momoe is pronounced MowMowEH- Momoe's origin and use are both in the Japanese language. Momoe is of the meaning 'peach tree branch'.
-Matsudaira: Momoe belongs to the well known Matsudaira clan of course from her mother’s side.
-Aizawa, Mai..the same voice actor of Uryuu, Minene is also used here.

→ Being fluent in both Esparian and Aerugese, also Cretan with a clear accent of Aerugese. Due to her profession, she is also fluent in Saamaltaat


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ALIAS:
→ Crimsonblade, Crim and Shizu.

OTHER CHARACTERS:
→ Nakajima Tomoe, Angelika Arnwald, Kagura Shizuka

CREATOR'S COMMENTS:
→ Take twentypoints from Angeilika arnwald, Shizuka and Nakajima Tomoe.
Yeah, Esparia is manly. And Minene is awesome.

FACE CLAIM:
Code:
[b]Mirai Nikki[/b]/[i]Minene Uryuu[/i]


CUSTOM RANK:
→ Dom aves.

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Post by Reila Tsukino Thu Jun 21, 2012 1:20 am

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Post by Guest Fri Jun 22, 2012 9:46 am

^^ ok I am ready and please, be merciful.

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Post by Guest Sat Jun 23, 2012 5:58 am

{REVISE}

- I may not have put this anywhere, and that is a mistake on my part, but the Bloodhounds do not act as Snipers, but in particular, happen to be Storm Troopers, and Assault Teams where otherwise there is a high chance on losing a unit, and incur a high fatality rate as a result as a heads up. So best brush that up in the history. The way she is described in function is more akin to mere Esparian commandos or scouts rather than a Bloodhound, whom attack in teams, and usually in a berserk assault, the drugs make them exceptionally aggressive, and as a result, tend to ignore wounds and a lot of them die off from bleeding. It is quite rare to see a Bloodhound that lives for quite a long time due to this method of operation, and those that do live, earn a pardon for their crimes of course as you put up.

- Bloodhounds aren't chemically enhanced per se as opposed to merely more tolerant towards the drug cocktails they take, and are addicted to it as a result. They are enhanced by chemicals, but not chemically enhanced. Point is, their prowess should come from their own physique than the cocktails they get. The cocktails only "help develop" the physique towards that specific angling. That one is for the trivia.

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Post by Guest Sat Jun 23, 2012 8:44 pm

Thank you very much for the heads up. As per your counsel regarding those two points, modifications were made to the history and trivia. I hope you find it to your liking.

Edit: Take twenty points from Angeilka, Shizuka and Tomoe accounts.

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Post by Guest Mon Jun 25, 2012 1:45 am

Mind detailing though why she was accepted into the Burial Agency despite being a former Bloodhound? Burial Agency looks for people with a strong degree of independence, cunning, and willingness to get through endeavors smartly when presented with an obstacle, quite the opposite of the Bloodhound doctrine. Describe those and you'd be golden.

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Post by Guest Mon Jun 25, 2012 5:39 pm

As per instructions, History had been modified. I am ready for your verdict and thanks for your patience.

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Post by Guest Tue Jun 26, 2012 12:36 pm

Final detail I noticed, Janitor uniform is actually a formal black business suit with a tie, and can be pants or skirt for a female, but just pants for a male. They often wear formal coats as well with the Burial Agency's badge on it.

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Post by Guest Tue Jun 26, 2012 4:41 pm

Of course, Done as told and thanks again for the head's up.

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Giving you the rank of 2nd Lieutenant.

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