Summers, Avalon

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CASE FILE: Chimerae/Ciel Militant

"You got a problem, bro?"
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FULL NAME:
→ Avalon Reviere Summers

AGE:
→ 21

SEX:
→ Female

BIRTH PLACE:
→ Napoli, La Cerise

RACE/SPECIES:
→ Cerisian Ram/Horse

GENERATION:
→ Generation 4:

DATE OF BIRTH:
→ April 15

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HEIGHT:
→ 6'1

WEIGHT:
→ 160 lbs

PICTURE:
→

Spoiler:

DESCRIPTION:
→ Ava has hair cut short with an odd greenish tint to it. Most lighting makes it a golden color while in other lighting it's bright and very vaguely a grassy green. The hair is light and slightly wavy cut short to her neck and worn with a barrette on each side. Her bangs are cut short and stop just above her eyes of sky blue. Her face is youthful and glowing with young health, though usually furrowed in concentration or annoyance. A light glaze of pink lip gloss usually sheens on her gentle curves of pink petal lips. her cheeks are a bit rosy and her skin color is a very light tan.

Her body is tall for most women. A good six feet in height and her whole stature is curvacious. Her bosoms are a good D size appearance with a skinny waist and then some widened hips. Her legs are muscular, showing good tone. Her toenails are painted red on occasion and fingernails to match. Dainty and feminine fingers and toes. Her arms hold some muscles, slight in the lean muscles upon the upper arm.

Her clothes are a jacket of brown color, short and tight upon her curves. A rim of black fur around the hood. Her top beneath is a dark green top tied to form around her bosoms. The dip shows her well developed bosoms well. Her bottoms are a pleated skirt of various colors. Another option she wears is a pair of short, jean shorts that barely cover her ass. Her feet are either naked or laced up with dark brown boots that reach her knees. Beneath, sits a pair of white or black socks. He has no tattoos or visible marks.

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PERSONALITY:
→ Ava is a headstrong woman with a lacking in the thinking field. Often times she simply lunges into her job. Her mind is an act first, think last sort of situation. Her body focuses mainly n adrenaline and the rush of fighting and just impulse. Ava never backs down from the chance to fight or to get IN a fight. She's rash and rather stubborn as a mule. When she makes a decision she sticks to it unless a superior says otherwise and in some few cases that doesn't work either. The only people she has enough respect for that she will completely listen to, are her older brother, Adryion, Marcolo or Wolfgang. Otherwise, Avalon has no interest in listening to a person's opinions or thoughts.

Avalon is a blunt woman. She could care less if something is going to hurt your feelings, she will state it rather bluntly. She is not the type to beat around the bush, and hates it when others does it to her. She has little patience with many things and at times can be seen as a woman with anger issues. Avalon is quick to anger and hard to simmer down. She never lets things go, When she's hurt, she dwells on it for months or even years and is the type to take revenge. She is silent on her own opinions unless asked and has a respect for manners. She gets mad when people don't follow these manners and will promptly correct them.

When happy, she'll give a silent smile and rather calmly enjoy the moment. She''s not too excitable except when fighting. While in battle, she is the type to taunt enemies. Using her body to tease them if she must, she would kill anyone if they were sexist towards her. Ava believes herself to be a strong individual and refuses to fall into stereotypes about women. With little knowledge about cooking or sewing, she's more versed on the battlefield and her only information on plants is which ones are potentially dangerous. She's the type of woman who'd rather go to a traitor pull as compared to a romantic evening. Romance makes her gag and she absolutely hates public displays of affection.

In some cases, Ava is shy around people. For example if she were at a party, she would hide in the corner, by herself unless addressed. Avalon does not just dive into a group without a purpose. She hates to seem a bother, so she avoids people most of the time. Her personality makes her seem almost anti social, but she loves to talk and listen to what other people have to say. Of course when not in battle that is. Avalon is the type to take charge when in a battle and hates people who can't take things seriously. She's not the type to lie unless necessary and in fact has a 'Knight in shining armor' type of mindset.

To her words are just words. Actions speak louder. If you have dreams lunge for them. She hates to see people crying and will be the type to say "Suck it up and move on." She wants people to reach their potentials and reach the most of their lives. Avalon is woman of few words, but trustworthy and reliable. She will never tell a secret (unless ordered by Wolfgang). She also hides the fact she's a chimera and tries her best to blend in as normal being in society. She also loves children and likes to babysit. She has a motherly instinct and knack.

Headfirst into battle, Ava is all too-willing to fight and take down an opponent. She likes the feel of her blunt weapons to connect with something. Not much of a tactics person. she had plenty of brute strength. She knows how to think, but half the time she doesn't show it. She is easy to anger and hard to calm down. The slightest of insults can send her flying off the handlebars and at a split second's notice she will snap. Not exactly 'pleasant' Ava is rather intimidating in her irritability and unbalanced lifestyle.

Ava is extremely violent. She does not hesitate to beat someone to a pulp and runs practically on adrenaline. She IS however very dedicated and in some ways sweet. She does not tolerate much. As well, she isn't afraid of showing how she feels with the help of her bat. She never leaves anywhere without it. It's something she keeps in hand and never threatens to hurt people with it. In her mind three chances is all you get. As well she talks in a way where if you don't cooperate she's going to fuck you up.
LOVE:
→ Sharp objects, running head-first into walls, children, dancing, fist fights, arm wrestling, eggplant, blunt objects

HATE:
→ Whiny people, spicy foods, eating in general, reading, bears, fish, red and greens, planning, shoes, shopping

DEEPEST SECRET:
→ A spy for the Falzone family on Wolfgang

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HISTORY:
→ There was a time long ago, a young woman was born. Just as any child, they started off in a normal life. Avalon was born second to the Summers family, and as far as anyone knew, she was the last. It was no problem, though her family was not rich nor poor, they had their uphills and downhills. Two siblings that were both rather violent to each other. Even at the age of one, Avalon got in fights with her brother that ended with both getting scratched and bloody. Why the kids were so violent towards each other, they could never tell, though in all truth it was their fault to begin with.

Behind closed doors, Avalon and Adryion both knew their parents were violent towards each other. Screams for mercy and pleads. When they were done, mom or dad would stumble out as a bloody mess. Bruises to hide, they thought their kids would never notice. There was a silent worry in the siblings as they reached into an age of about five and six. Their innocent eyes witnessing their mother full-out punching the father in the jaw. What had he done? Neither kids could grasp what 'Out drinking' meant. After all, drinking was needed day to day. That's what mom had always said, right? Especially, on hot days. The days mom would bring out lemonade to the children.

Starting school, was most uncomfortable for Avalon. She didn't know how to control her anger. Usually she would end up hitting her friends and peers. Though she didn't mean it in a bad way, she hurt her classmates. Sternly she was reprimanded and forced to talk to a therapist for a week before her parents said she was perfect the way she was. In their eyes, she was an angel, in fact Mr. and Mrs. Summers enjoyed both of their children. They thought of course these kids were perfect, truly a successful hand on their part, though they knew not of half of the stuff Ava and Adry did. The most devastating was the time Adryion drove his bokken hard into Ava's face. The kids were playing, but Adry had gotten too excited and managed to slice his sister's face open with a wooden sword.

After he panicked on his sister's profuse bleeding for two whole minutes, he screamed for their parents. In a rush both were out there and Ava was rushed to the hospital. Both parents were mad at Adry of course, but they showed it by ignoring him for the next few months. Ava felt it was her fault and guilt swelled in her chest. Though she was only six at the time, she still felt it was her fault Adry was getting ignored. Her own self would chase after him and give him more attention in place of their parents.

Adryion was Ava's idol. The wild boy always followed by an Ava shadow and as odd as it was, the two shared everything with each other. Heading into the age of eight, Ava felt she was in love with her brother. An odd feeling, their parents knew nothing about nor the stuff they talked about. Adryion soon became protective of Ava. The two were inseparable, until the net year when their parents purposely divided the two. They could no longer share the same room and instead, Ava had a room of her own on the opposite side of the house as Adryion. Both children were confused by the sudden move and claimed their parents hated them. Of course this was a blade that cut thick into their hearts, but rules were rules. Ava was saddened but there was nothing really to do, except slip into her brother's room late at night.

A few years passed and Ava took up her own interests. Starting with horseback riding and whittling, she always found time to spend with her older brother. Time flew by way too fast for her liking. Ava took up a new interest in automail. The curiosity she felt led her to be apprenticed by a man at the age of twelve. Though she was young, the title was fake. The man thought if he made Ava do everything an apprentice should she would loose interest, unfortunately, she didn't. Well it was bad luck on his part, because he got stuck with a small girl with anger issues to help him repair the broken. There were times that Ava got upset and completely destroyed the project. Her teacher would get pissed off at her and sent her home early. Those were the nights she cried and Adryion gave her faith. The hope she could better, the hope to go on.

Reaching high school, her brother vanished from her life. There was no warning, no good-bye. Ava was deeply cut and couldn't understand why he would betray them all like that. She wanted vengeance and revenge. Her anger boiled over the pain and she sought to get stronger. To prove she could be without him. For the most part it worked, but only to cover her inner weakness. She broke a lot for that following year. Tears were shed for him and she couldn't believe he was gone. Her mind was blackened and her judgement was shuttered. It took strength that she didn't have.

It was odd, when she got involved with a man she normally wouldn't consider twice on talking to. He was creepy, but he made Ava feel special. He spoke to her about her problems and gave her peace of mind. They never 'dated', she was simply visiting him to talk, like a fly to honey. It was a turn of bad luck when he drugged her after a scary fight. The two had an argument about something that Ava can't remember. It was soon he dragged her to a place, far away where he and two other men in lab coats experimented on her body. "You want to die anyways, don't you?" Was the last thing Ava could really remember. Her mind was disoriented by the drugs as the pain went all over her. Horrid torture she endured without being able to so much as scream.

There was a piercing light and a sudden sickness, her mind was covered in utter pain she didn't understand. When she awoke, two were asleep in their chairs. One such of the men smirked at her, "Do you like your upgrade, you're a chimera now. A freak!" Ava felt a pierce of rage at what they must have been doing to her. With relentless rage, she grabbed a bat that was nearby. An odd instrument she wasn't used to seeing, rusty nails sticking out of it and she brutally beat the men. Whether they were dead or not, she wasn't sure. Her vision was red as she tried to control herself, storming out of the building. Somehow she found her way out and towards her home.

Her parents disapproved of her, but she didn't care, Ava had new ideas in mind. So as quickly as she could, she applied for the Gelemortian military. She didn't have time to work through the ranks yet, instead she began her ruthless training. Odd to her, she was feeling stronger than before, and faster. Those men.. said chimera? Through her time working for that government, she looked it up and tried to figure out how was the best way to make her new body work. It seemed with a lot of training, came good outcome. With being a foot-soldier, Ava always showed her backbone, though in a bit of a scary way. Her anger issues were prominent and terrifying. She had a tendency to go blind with rage. A few times it was impossible to hold her back from completely pulverizing a person.

Life became harder, her father disappearing no sooner after her brother had left. The two parents whom fought all the time were officially divided and Ava barely even noticed his absence. The lack of him being around anyways had made her believe he was always too busy for them when in actuality, he was hopping around at night and during day he DID work. eventually his wife had enough and told him to get lost, so he did. Ava knew little to none of this and the fact her mother herself had an affair of her own long ago. The seemingly perfect family full of flaws, Ava being one of them. She would never know that her brother and her were of separate fathers and she no longer cared for the broken family. The only person she cared for was her mother.

Unfortunately, things turned worse for Ava. Her mother developed cancer and slowly she started her descent. She was lucky enough to receive treatment for it, but it was only delaying the inevitable. She was slowly passing away. Ava could only watch helplessly as the treatments were not enough to save her mother, yet she would go on and continue working until even then her doctors put her on leave.

As the cancer continued, there was a new side that came to her world. Upon coming home, Ava found a man in her house. At first she was terrified, but then she became upset. A brief word of the conversation had reached her ear and she knew instantly this had been about money. The man seemed to want something from her mother and Ava would burst in. Her voice booming with demand as the demanded to know what was going on and who was trying to harm her mother.

It seemed the man was pleased and spoke over her mother's screams of her to go away. Information given and she was told of her father's debt and how since she was the last able-bodied person in the house, she would have to take place of her mother. Though Ava didn't like the idea and nearly fought him, but given the choice of her mother in debt and her, Ava begrudgingly agreed. Essentially, she sold herself to them for her mother's freedom, as short lived as it were. No one spoke a word of it and life went on.


An intervention helped things only a little bit. It seemed her rage at her brother had pent up and built more. The brief spurts of violent rage was how she let her emotions out and though it was unhealthy, the general said it was fine, as long as it was towards the opposing side. The second she set a hand(or bat) on someone in her platoon, she was going to rehab. Ava agreed with this and focused firmly in studying automail to help ease her wild ways. It was a temporary distraction, but it worked wonders for the surrounding time.

A great speech was held by the the leader, yet a shadow was in hiding. A man had come to assassinate the man and people stood without knowing. In pure instinct, Ava burst forward and pulled her bat back. A mighty swing from her arms and the man was sent flying. She proceeded to chase after the body, jumping on him as he collided on the ground and glaring down with a smile. "Go ahead, try again, buddy, I dare you." She hissed to him as her hand gripped tighter to the bat. "I'd just love to beat the ever-loving shit out of you." She swore to him in a quiet voice so only he would hear. People were in awe as she got up and kicked him at another officer. The man was trembling now, but Ava had a look of satisfaction on her face.

A clap was heard from behind her and she felt a slap on her back. Poised and ready to attack, she turned her eyes to watch the leader himself staring at her with a smile. Her hand instantly dropped the bat and as she went to apologize for near-attacking him, he gripped her shoulder and asked a rushed voice, "How would you like to be a Royal Guard?" It was as if he was joking with her, but he stood there, awaiting her answer.

Avalon's jaw dropped as she stared at him with a shocked face. Had he really just asked that? She was in stunned silence and the man answered for her. "Yes, Mr Leader. That sounds like a marvelous idea." He would coo in a bit of a falsetto. "Ah! Marvelous, we're all set here, then. You start work.. as of five minutes ago! Good job at doing your job!" Avalon was still stunned at the situation and while she went to form words, all that tumbled out was her name. Wolfgang nodded, "Well now, you're a royal guard!" Another slap on her back and Avalon simply nodded. Well, that worked.

Though it had happened spur of the moment, Ava stood by Wolf's side. The wild girl was all too-willing to follow him around and protect him. Though a bit on the extreme side when it came to defense, she took her job seriously and did her best to defend Wolfgang. There was tension long on the rivers of Gelemorte, but Avalon didn't have time to be there for once. A family emergency had come, she found out her mother was dying. Though Ava didn't like the idea of leaving Wolf's side, she was allowed to for this circumstance, to stay by her mother in the woman's dying days. Her father wasn't there, for some reason, but Avalon didn't care. He'd been gone for a few years now. She wanted someone to be by her mother's side in the drawing if the last breath.

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TRIVIA:
→ She has a scar on her face from a play fight with her brother.
→ Almost never wears shoes.
→ Is afraid of cameras
→ Favorite flower is a tiger lily
→ Favorite animal is a red panda
→ Has rode horseback since she was ten
→ Know the difference of poison ivy, poison oak and Poison shumack
→ Thinks Fire retardant is an insult
→ Never wears make up Likes to wear lip gloss
→ Likes to make wood sculptures
→ Hates clowns and mimes
→ Chimera ability: It gives her agility and strength. She's slightly stronger than a human with a rock-hard skull and is a bit more agile at maneuvering than most human. She would make a good thief. Ava has worked harder on her strength and outside of chimera form she has the strength of an ox, capable of pushing smaller cars without too much effort. Her head is hard enough to crash through concrete with only some minor trauma damage and her agility lets her be equal to a trained horse.
→ Thinks people with dark skin sat out in the sun too long.
→ Likes to play with other people's hair.
→ Has a pet ferret named 'Bandit'.
→ Is dyslexic. Has a tutor to help her read.
→ Is prone to fits where she beats people senseless.
→ Obvious anger issues
→ Automail mechanic in the works. She can to some basic stuff, like tuning up automail and make basic automail, nothing flashy but capable of functioning enough.
→ Adryion's HALF sister
→ Favorite weapon is a bat with rusty nails.
→ Favorite color is aqua.
→ Speaks basic Amestrian,learning Cretan, Rouenian (Gele dialect), Cerisian and sign language
→ Owes over $20,000 to the Falzone family from her father's gambling problem.

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ALIAS:
→ Ammy

OTHER CHARACTERS:
→ Valeria, Iris, Deity, Lucrezia, Blas

CREATOR'S COMMENTS:
→ Level up to level 2/ Revamp

FACE CLAIM:

Code:

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CUSTOM RANK:
→ Panda Hero

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Archive date is May 8th.

[Guest]

{REVISE}

- Minor fart, if you're having an Italian birthplace, like Sicily, that would be a Gelemortain territory, true, but it would be classified in La Cerise rather than Gelemorté itself.

- Being colorblind in one eye isn't subject or notable to give massive migraines in that ocular aspect and hasn't been subject to it either. Elaborate more if you're sticking with that gig.

- On your way to editing all of that, explain a bit more about her back history in her origins as having been born in Sicily as a Crieg person, a minor thing if anything.

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edit made

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bah Archive this for now

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Alrighty, archiving then...

[Reila Tsukino]

REVISE

This is your 6th character so I'm not going to go easy on you~

1. Take out the brown color from the title please. >.<
2. Description: "but she gets the body of a horse with the hooves of a ram." --read this: https://mdalchemist.rpg-board.net/t1209-chimera-information Specifically: → Can transform, (but they cannot change their mass. For example, a person cannot transform into a mouse and crawl under a door). Meaning, that for her body to somehow transform into a horse's, she'd have to gain more mass. Hooves are possible, but morphing a horse but from nowhere would hurt like a bitch and isn't possible.
3. Is that really how to spell tai-kwon-do!? Weird. Learned something =3
4. History: "However, reaching her eighteenth birthday, she made a decision to join in the army." --What army?
5. History: I don't know if I missed this or not, but uh...how did she become a chimera? How is a wound across her face life threatening? How/why would a doctor randomly transmute her into a chimera if that's the case? How/why would no one notice?
6. History: And how did she quit being a royal guard then...? Because it says she's just a Chimera in the header. Or is she a Militant of some country?? I believe you said Gelemorté and I'm guessing the random guy in your history is Wolfy. Please, mention him by name at least once to alleviate confusion. And how you mention Ava as 'the woman' is misleading and throws off the reader into believing that you're talking about some random woman not your character.
7. History: Add more imagery!
8. Trivia: "→ Has horseback ridden since she was ten" --*Has rode horseback since she was ten OR Has ridden horses since she was ten
9. Trivia: It's Rouenian not Rouen (that's the country name).
10. Alias: Isn't your alias Ammy or Ami?!

Note: I'm being really hard on you on purpose. <333 Let's make this character awesome!

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made changes, redid history completely

[Reila Tsukino]

APPROVED

EXCELLENT. It's 90% better then the first time I read it!

You had to still put Ciel Militant in the Header, but I did it for you since it was like nothing.

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