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NIN
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CASE FILE: Alchemist/Non-Militant
I want that cake
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NAME:CASE FILE: Alchemist/Non-Militant
I want that cake
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→ NIN
AGE:
→ 6
SEX:
→ Female
BIRTH PLACE:
→ Aerugo, Edo
RACE:
→ Aerugese
DATE OF BIRTH:
→ Feb 3rd, 2007
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HEIGHT:→ 112.8cm(3'7''ft)
WEIGHT:
→ 18.15kg(40lb)
PICTURE:
→
- Spoiler:
DESCRIPTION:
→ Nin has stark white hair that has grown out from her evenly chopped haircut. It is now grown over her shoulders and she also has to peek behind her long bangs. She has blood red eyes set in round sockets. Just like any 6 year old, she's short and has stubbly limbs. She likes wearing dark clothing and has a habit of wearing no shoes. The only blemish on her skin is a permanent burn mark on her upper right arm in the form. It looks as if someone had twisted a clothes hanger, heated it up, and pressed the word "kami" in kanji on her arm until it bled. Due to her albinism, she is prone to burning and eye problems if she isn't protected. In the beginning she didn't know that there were measures to be taken because she was never given an explanation since measurements had already been taken and were considered to be under control. The first day she was out in the sun, she was in pain and her eyes felt numb. Over time she learned that she was supposed to wear clothes over her skin and wear sunglasses and sunscreen. Though, all she does is wait for twilight and stays in the shade.
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→ She loves soft fabrics that remind her the color of the sun. Something she can brush against her cheek and make herself feel like she's flying in the air. When it comes to fighting, she is the yin to a master's yang. She had spent most of her short life fighting to survive and had learned how to face plant before she could speak. Her quick temper and rightfulness to act served her the right to survive, but not the right to get friends. When ever there was a wrestling competition or a tousle, all of the children except for her would end up with teary faces and broken noses. She loves shiny toys and dark colors to envelope herself into.
Her life was filled with darkness as she was a child and had stayed with her whenever she fights. Her blood red eyes can only show unrequited love, unrequited hate and confusion. Her intelligence can shine through the trajectory of her own body through the air and how much damage she can deal in one blow mathematically without even knowing what a centimeter is. She loves to sit next to a flower and look at the different dimensions of it's own leaf and even stare at a person and tell what favorite food they like. In life, nothing is about facts. It's just how they flow through.
As soon as she looked at a cell phone, she didn't know what she was looking at, but 10 minutes later she found out how to break it apart to make a bomb, how to listen in on people's conversation, how to track them, and even how to hack a computer using a $30 smartphone. Though the first time she saw a yoyo, she was enthralled. She could see so many dimensions with just a turn of a string she would be able to play with it for hours on end.
NIN had learned what death was, that people do not live simply in black and white and has developed her knowledge to such an extent that she is starting to become renown in the internet world as "hacker X". As she grows, she starts to understand more around her surroundings and her feelings for more and more people grow.
LOVE:
→ Yoyos, candy, blood, fish, big coats, good computers, ice, rainy days, boots with holes on the top, ATMs, umbrellas, games with bunnies in them, panda coats, anime, manga, chemistry books, internet, lights that move, pillows shaped like sushi, xbox, clothing shopping, good RAM, swing sets, sweet grass, tasty clam chowder, ice cream with hotsauce, pizza with tobasco sauce-oliveoil-penutbutter-and jalapenos, huge burgers, tiny houses, root beer floats.
HATE:
→ chicken, dogs, angry people, computers, soda, police people, gambling houses, big guns, shots, hot days, the color purple, labrodors, tall people.
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HISTORY:→ When she was born her mother was also albino and was considered a complete beauty. After her mother gave birth though, she was put through a strict training program. She was to stay away from the windows and be exposed only to soft lighting. Her physical training started also, by placing bags of rice on each limb she grew in strength and so the number of bags grew also. She learned how to kick at 2 and how to face plant at 4.
One day she saw a window open and decided to see what was behind that bright glass. She jumped out of the window and her world lit up like nothing else. She ran across the dirt roads and as far as her inhuman 5 year old feet could take her, taking in all of the color. Everything blinded her and scared her, but not enough for her to look away from such beauty. Until she ran into the city and got confused. Even though she had a loving mother and a home, she still didn't want to go back. She had been living in the city ever since. She lived off of the orphanage that had taken her in. There were no reports of her missing or even a birth certificate.
She spoke of a small hut where everyone was named NIN until they passed an exam and were clad in black. After that, the word JA came after and they were sent out to do chores. Even though she slept and ate in the orphanage, she never stayed for long. She remembers seeing a bunch of drunk men and they said she looked like a kami. So she decided she was a kami and in a fleeting thought she should make it true. So she twisted a hanger and burned it into her left arm. She made the wrong decision.
After that, life went on living. She hacked a few phones, stole cash so she could buy nice clothes and toys. She got the cash from hacking 200 different accounts and taking the spare change out of it all of them without them realizing. If it was over a yen an hour, then there would be some worry. But if she just went over half a yen an hour for 20 people a day, she would have 2400 yen a day ($24) which would end up 16800 yen a week for her to play around with.
She now made a small house on top of an abandoned mill that's filled with toys, candy and games that she hordes in there. Even though she still goes to the orphanage to sleep and eat. She never really liked spending time with the children, maybe because they hate her or because in her mind they're stupid. She was supposed to go to grade school last year but she had skipped until they expelled her. Their clothes were awkward, the kids there stand of poo and tears and even the teachers looked a little slanted. She was happy to live her life it has been going. Never seeing that dark room, never seeing those saddened kid faces, and never seeing another day away from beauty and color.
She had met some funny characters. She had met a boy named Kean and a man named Hei. From that encounter she was able to speak a little bit of Drachman and it had grown from there.
One day, her lovely fort broke down and it had been a long time since she escaped from that place. Two whole years, in fact. She had gained a name for herself on the internet due to playing around with the accounts of agents in other countries. No one had caught her yet, but she wished they would. She was so lonely. Soon, the loneliness grew to hatred and she decided to rob a store. No one was giving her any attention unless it was negative, and she'd rather have that than nothing at all.
Once she had shot and killed people and took the money, she ran off but got caught by a Yakuza boss and a lady. She was so confused why they were there, and why they were chasing her down. weren't the police supposed to do that? Though instead of killing her, she was taken in by them.
Through that time she had begun to feel what a family was like. Even though the Yakuza was supposed to be a bad organization, she viewed it as the best and the most pure due to the fact that they brought a child into their loving home. She learned about bombs, torturing, and various other things. She even learned about integrity and love.
She expanded her Drachman to almost being fluent and she even learned alchemy from a man named Bronze in which she met while she was hacking into an ATM. The face that she will never forget is Nakajima Tomoe, her onesan. While she was learning alchemy, she found that it could be used to internet purposes also.
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TRIVIA:→ She has an IQ of 175 and suffers from oculocutaneous albinism
→ Aeruguese, Drachman, Binary
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ALIAS:→ Bai
OTHER CHARACTERS:
→ Osamu, Mr.Peach, Elisa Falzone
CREATOR'S COMMENTS:
→ isn't she adorable?
CUSTOM RANK:
→ Hacker X
OFFICIAL TITLE:
→ The Firewall Alchemist
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Last edited by NIN on Mon Jul 09, 2012 3:25 am; edited 14 times in total
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Re: NIN
{REVISE}
Couple of little things :3
Birthplace: It would be Edo, Aerugo, instead of Tokyo
Description: You're only at 97 words and it needs to be 150 minimum. Just expand on her a bit and that's good :3 Her albinism would not only affect the pigmentation of her skin and eyes, but also the sensitivity of both (I have a friend with this condition, actually). Perhaps describe her reactions to things she is sensitive to, or the measures she goes to protect herself from them since she's smart enough to know what to do?
Personality: Must be at least 300 words, and you're at 121. You mention she's a genius, maybe discuss how she actually perceives the world around her given that she would have an entirely different understanding of it, being that she's both a child and smarter than 90% of the adult populace?
History: Needs to be at least 450 words; you've got 311. Again, just a bit more expansion and you're good.
Couple of little things :3
Birthplace: It would be Edo, Aerugo, instead of Tokyo
Description: You're only at 97 words and it needs to be 150 minimum. Just expand on her a bit and that's good :3 Her albinism would not only affect the pigmentation of her skin and eyes, but also the sensitivity of both (I have a friend with this condition, actually). Perhaps describe her reactions to things she is sensitive to, or the measures she goes to protect herself from them since she's smart enough to know what to do?
Personality: Must be at least 300 words, and you're at 121. You mention she's a genius, maybe discuss how she actually perceives the world around her given that she would have an entirely different understanding of it, being that she's both a child and smarter than 90% of the adult populace?
History: Needs to be at least 450 words; you've got 311. Again, just a bit more expansion and you're good.
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