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CASE FILE: Chimerae
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FULL NAME:
Jeur Kage

AGE:
62

SEX:
Male

BIRTH PLACE:
Aerugo

RACE/SPECIES:
Aerugese/Snake/Gorilla

GENERATION:
4th Gen

DATE OF BIRTH:
10/1/1949


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HEIGHT:
187.96cm (6 foot 2 inches)

WEIGHT:
96.4 kg

PICTURE:
Spoiler:

DESCRIPTION:
Jeur as he stands today towers over all his friends and foes as a colossus of power, the hulk-like body of the monstrous beast stands six feet two inches off of the ground, looking down at almost anything he has to interact with. the gigantic head of Jeur has many features that make him clearly stand out in a crowd, including tusks that extend out from his bottom jaw on ether side of his mouth, tiny (in comparison, everything of juer's is huge) red eyes seem to peer directly though you, and his glace has struck fear into the hearts of even top generals of his own country

White braided hair comes out of many areas of his face and head, at the crown of his huge head having the most hair to show from it, his hair was already white naturally before the transformation, however, it also has never been cut at the crown ever since. and this piece of his overall look seems to be a very important part to him, as he keeps it safe like a zealot guarding secrets. his beard as well seems to be important to him, as no matter how many times he has been disciplined to cut it, he scared the publishers more than they scare him. decorations ornate these long ropes of hair near the ends of the braids, on his head a kunai, or throwing knife is used with a ring around the hair to keep it in place. while the beard is kept in tact by a huge ornate ball at the end of the braid.

Green skin covers the body of Jeur, as a somewhat side effect of the snake chosen to insure a generation four chimera like none other, the light green skin however seems to be thin as it is stretched over many pounds of rippling muscle, his ribs, abs, and 8 pack shown most of the time clearly, as a sort of symbol of pride, his arms each look like the could block the end of a cannon, with 'wrist guards' created with the purpose of insuring loyalty at one point being attached to bother wrists, each weighting 30 pounds by itself, the make each swing and each punch all the more painful, Red ink markings all up and down his arms show signs of fire shooting from his shoulder, into his body and down his arm, a tattoo seemingly made during his younger years when he was getting used to the pain of his chimera form, and the blood boiling in his body. other markings on his back are signs seemingly placed on by people whom have used his service, branding him based on his performance, the signs range from meaning blood-lust and chaos and demon, to discreet and shy. there are a total of 9 markings in all. each with a story.

when it comes to his wear and his equipment, he uses only blades, and dawns no armor, thinking armor as a means to weight him down and thus, an attempt to kill him. and swords as the only true way to fight a man. he wears a huge long robe meant for a shaman or religious leader, going though these robes like they are candy, each one in ribbons after each mission. his swords are all custom, as a normal blade would be more like a pocket knife to his hand. and would only harm himself, the blades made for him are decorated with black and gold, with patterns on them. a rope belt around his waist holds many smaller, useless to him swords given to him by those he has peace with whom had given him gifts. they are to show off how many others will come for them should he fail. names of any officers of varying ranks and divisions on each blade.
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PERSONALITY:
Jeur has a very complex personality, but it can be explained in different sections rather easily, starting with his humane side, to get it out of the way.

Humanity

Like all chimeras, soldiers, from the most evil of pirate king to army born and bread military brat, we all have our humanity, and Jeur is no exception. He refuses to fight someone whom is not armed, unless he knows the person can fight without a weapon. he will insist on assassination targets to arm them self properly, and should they attempt to call guards, he takes it as taking up arms. the guards themselves being their weapon. Besides that his humanity is split depending on whom he is dealing with.

Human of any kind (child)
Juer refuses to kill a human child, thinking it as one of the greatest of sins one can do. and dishonorable in every way, as most children would never be able to match up to the strength of him, and they lack the understanding of death or danger to call for proper help. and even if they did, it would not be to fight, it would be to run. it is imposable for Juer to see a case where killing a child is an honorable thing to do.

Human of any kind(adult)

Once a human has become an adult in Juer's eyes, that person has every right to do as he or she wishes, including challenge juer and die by his hand. he veiws women and men the same, as in his eyes both can be a danger to him, and if they are smarter than him, they should have every right to test their mettle. however, men that look totally able to fight him head on, Juer as no problem with slicing their head off before they knew what hit them.

Chimera (non military)

run-away or city chimera, ether way they are scoundrels and have no Honor they do not deserve the freedom they have no matter what they did to get it. having spent his entire life, and in fact still is in military custody after he had been transformed. he has no love for other chimera that, for some reason get to roam free as he rots in the shadows fighting the pain of his burning blood. his humanity does not extend to them in any way. the reason for this however is a lie, he has nothing but envy for the chimera outside the military. and wish to join them every day, and strip himself of the honor he at the moment holds closer to his heart than anything else.

Chimera (military)

Pity and love is all he can feel for Chimera that are part of the military, any military, he dies a little inside every time he must kill one on the other side. as he knows the situation they are in. from the second they awake and are changed, they go though pain like no human must face, and follow it up by being told you are property, and must do as you are told. being part of the military before turning into what he is now. he had even served with chimera, and not until he became one did he realize the hell it can be.

Honor
Honor for Juer is split up between three different sections, War, Peace, and Social. the honor system is a seemingly made up code of ethics made by Juer in what people guess his spare time during missions. he holds them all to heart very closely, and takes great offense when it is violated or when something or someone is 'dishonorable'

War

Honor in war is done by giving your opponent a fair chance no matter what, particularly when they are physically inferior to you. a proper warning must be given and a request for them to arm themselves be made. the battle does not start until they use their weapon. be it a call to arms, or a sword of their own. they are not to be simply killed without a chance. Lastly, no one is killed that does not need to be, people can be pushed around, even injured, but no kill shots that are not on the target or targets. Children are NEVER the target, nor are they EVER necessary to kill. unless they are chimera.

Peace
Peace does not just mean between the world powers, Juer seeks a relationship be settled between all individuals. as so long as you are an adult, you have the honor to make your own choices. In a peace relationship, the weaker of the two parties must provide the stronger party with something of theirs, it does not matter what, but a gift must be given, while the stronger party in turn, asks the weaker party if they wish to grow stronger. Juer has not had many peace relationships with many people. but those whom have tamed this chimera have found themselves much better at what they do for it. most of the time the gift is something simple, like a tie for his hair or a sword for his belt.

Social
The social aspect of his honor system is the most important of the three by far, as while the other two are both used under certain circumstances, the Social aspect is to be respected at all times. and while one may be neutral, as most are, in witch there is a relationship in witch the person does not fall under ether of the two categories, the still fall under this one. and any violation of this branch is considered even more dishonorable than most other acts. Under the Social tree of honor we have appearance and interactions with others, witch are much like anyone else social code.

Hair and markings show what one has been though, a scar over someone's eye, particularly if the scar is old, demands respect. markings on the body that mean something, such as "demon" should be taken to heart. and the amount of respect one gains from Juer depends on the scar, its placement, and its age. a small new wound on the arm holds much less sway than a face-wide scar down though one's patched eye that has aged over years ago. Lastly, hair is a way to demand respect, as it shows how long one has been alive, as Juer's hair never stopped growing. he has never cut it since his transformation. and due to this, has extremely long hair on the crown of his head, and beard. Cutting someone's hair for them is one of the greatest offense one could do to juer, as it is a sign that you do not care about/ wish to steal someone's experience from them. on the other hand, someone giving a lock of hair is a sign that you wish to gift them your experience, and is one of the most honorable things one can do for peace.

the social code is much more simple for juer, be kind to those kind to you, if you must kill the person, you do not have a social relationship with them, everything is neutral here. be stand off-ish if the other seems like a threat. respect personal property, if the person is ahead in command, obey their orders. if that person is below you in command, expect them to do their job. if we are equals, than treat them as such. Chimera that are not part of the military are never under this situation. they are instead part of 'war'

War!

War, a disposition as far as Juer is concerned, it is a relationship shared between the parties involved, both parties know what is a part of war, all is fair here. if it is not a dishonor, it is allowed. and even some things that at other points would be dishonorable and now fully allowed. the parts of this part of his personality are Stealth, Bloodlust, and Guilt.

Stealth

Stealth is a very necessary part of any type of warfare, even juer understands this fully. being part snake was done for the purpose of giving him many different abilities to do with the different ways the animal traits would mesh together. stalking and watching a target for days is not something juer has had a problem with. the giant can be as silent as a church mouse when the time is right. so long he is properly prepared, and is not wearing anything that would betray him such as boots. however, killing using Stealth is not a method Juer agrees to at all. in Fact, he has yet to kill a man that has not know he was there, or has had a proper warning of their doom. he uses the Stealth as a means of getting what he needs, and that only.

Blood lust

WAR! DEATH! BLOOD! the heart pumps and the painful blood though his veins moves faster, as the pain becomes more intense so does the will to inflict pain! Vision becomes tunneled, thoughts become blurred. entire hours of time go by in what seems like a few moments, and by the end Juer is covered in the blood of his opponents. the Strength he uses while enraged is enough to make any man tremble in fear. He is nothing but a monster, a brutal animal with the will only to kill. reasoning with such a beast is not possible, and even those he honors close to his heart will be torn apart by this rage.

Guilt

Juer is a man with a lot of time to reflect. he has done so much, and from what he understands as yet another result of the chimera transformation he may not die any time soon. maybe life to be 100 years old and still healthy. this however is not a happy thought to him. death was never something he thought he could thrive and love doing, and while during the act it was all well and good, and his honor system he gives everyone he can a chance that they deserve, it is never enough. ending countless lives is and never will be enough. in his old age, he wishes nothing more than to live without a thirst for violence. but so long as he serves the Military, he will do just that.


LOVE:
Order
Blood lust
Violence
Chimeras that are part of the military
watching his prey
the color blue
large women
People whom can speak to him as not a monster

HATE:
Idiots
Dishonor
chimera's outside of the military
Humans disrespecting each other, particularly if it is an adult disrespecting a child, and vice versa
the color white
women whom are seen as sex objects (hookers, strippers, etc.)

DEEPEST SECRET:
1. He wishes nothing more than to leave the millitary, and in fact deeply envys those whom live apart from it.

2. he has never done 'it' before the transformation, thinking foolishly that he might end up more attractive thanks to the animal features, as if it was some kind of anime. the result however has left him unable to reproduce, as well as the attractiveness of a troll.


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HISTORY:
Chapter 1.
Pre-military


"If you do not awake soon boy, I am going to drag you to the recruitment center by your neck!" Ah, the joy of being a military brat. Juer woke up, 17 years old on his birthday in a middle class home in Aerugo, they did not have too much, but what they had an abundance of was tough love. Juer's father served in the military for years before meeting his mother, a state alchemist whom is almost always off working. the family kept contact with each other, so it was almost as if she was never really many miles away. Juer's father came up to the room of the sleepy teenager and with a kick almost hard enough to blow the door off it's hinges blasted his way into the room, walking inside and laughing a bit "I said time to wake up grunt!" Juer stood up quickly, sleep still heavy in his eyes, wearing nothing but his boxers, as he sleeps in them and stands at attention. "Put something on kid, you wanted to me like your old man. today is the day to do it!" Juer's father smiled at him wide, he had nothing but pride in his son, but never really knew what he could do to show it. deciding that the best thing he could do is push him harder than he ever could think to so his son succeeds in whatever he wants to do with his life. leaving the room now to prepare to leave as Juer gets on something to wear, finding nothing better to put on than his father's old security division suit to wear, it was outdated and torn slightly, but almost perfectly well kept otherwise. Putting it on and looking at the mirror in his room made him feel like he was looking at a real solider, about to go to war for Aerugo, and he could not even begin to wait. His father walking in and seeing him dressed in his uniform making him almost lose it in how proud he was. it was as if eh was looking into a mirror. "Hey..uhh dad, how do I look?" His father stopped for a second and looked at him, trying to think of something nice to say, but unable to find the words. "You..Ya look good kid, if not for the fact your wearing the hat wrong the top part is not tucked into the pants the badges don't belong to you and your shoes look like you stepped in something...or everything for that matter. clean yourself off a bit more, if your going to try and impress the military by looking like them, try to look like them first." Juer looked a bit dumbfounded and insulted as his father left once more to get more things ready, looking again at the mirror and nodding a bit, removing his father's badges and cleaning himself up to look proper. looking back again and going downstairs of his home, nodding to his father as the go to the military recruitment offices. once there waiting a very long time just waiting to get checked out, there where many tests and even more paperwork, he felt like he was in school still taking tests. however it was all over eventually and when it was there was one last thing, one of the many doctors in the building would have to look over all the paperwork as well as his medical history before signing him up and giving him a date to get on the bus to boot camp. walking into the room where he would have to take his physical, a very important but also infamous for being an embarrassing or to some, just plain funny test. to Juer, it was very funny. "alright kid, time to take your physical." the older male doctor came into the room and juer was already just about out of his chair laughing. holding it in however for the sake of being let in the doctor kept going. "you seem to be perfectly healthy, and with your families past with us I can imagine you have been thought quite well, metal stability is in check. your as strong as an ox, we just have to take your physical." Now almost totally losing it he stood up and as the doctor was doing the tests needed Juer couldn't help but crack at least one wise comment before the tests where done. "Doc, if your going to be playing with my willy would you place put on warmer gloves?" The doctor however was not pleased, even though Juer was laughing quite a lot, and as he left the offices with his tests results sealed, he waited confident as ever for his dad to arrive, and as he did they bother towered over the sealed piece of paper, Juer tearing it open and reading the results of when he will be shipped off to join the military, and what division he would be put into. only to find however, the letter F in red bold in the box telling him pass or fail.

Chapter 2
Pre-Chimera part 1

"I am sorry sir, but this must be a mistake!!" Juer stood on the over side of a tall desk, in witch the recruiter sat. Looking over unamused at the case file for Juer as a military boy "Kid, we have applications coming in by the truckload. and not once has this docter made a mistake. If he says you are unfit for the military, you shoulder be at my desk complaining, you should be at his feet thanking him." Juer and his father could not begin to believe what was happening, and enraged his father spoke up. "For a joke?? has your doctor even been NEAR a barracks? one joke can not be enough to kick my kid's application out the window!" the cold eyes peering from the glasses became hidden by glare as the recruiter looked up slightly to see the two of them, a grim frown on his face. "I am afraid it is, besides that is not the only thing, your child, Mr. Juer kage has also shown signs to be susceptible to addictive behaviors, as well as Attention disorders that make him uneasy to carry a gun unless he is fully intent on something. and his little 'joke' prompted our doctor to believe your son may not be ready to join the military, to be frank kid, your too childish and we don't" want you to carry a gun or push a pencil" Juer and his father looked at each other for a moment before looking back up at the recruiter, Juer's father speaking up again. "You cant be serious this is absurd! My son is a modeled student and you should be happy he wants to help this proud nation not turn him away! is there anything that can be done?" The recruiter, as if he was waiting for this question, gave a small smirk before looking back down again, going though more papers. "There is something yes, I can set it up so your son skips the stupid crap. he starts going directly into long and separated missions and trains on his own free time, witch he will have a lot of. he will be on a tight leash and will bark when we say bark, it is a program used to help people who want to join the military but cant be out in front with the real men. you will bark when we say bark, bite when we say bite, and so on." Juer's father looked fairly shocked, and steped back a bit as all this hit him at once, before frowning and raising his voice to say "Wait a second here, I have served for nearly half my life and I have never heard of any such 'program'!" The recruiter smiled slightly again, and looked back up as he seemed to have gotten the paper he was looking for. "Captain Kage, not everyone can walk in your footsteps. this program was created recently as a way to let everyone who wants to at least get a chance. in total Juer will get the same, if not more training than you ever did and become an elite solider all his own. all that is needed is for you to sign this paper, I will have the representative and master of operations for this small branch of the security department fill you in fully." Juer took the paper quickly, wanting to read it over as best as he could, walking with his father and looking up, unsure of what he should do about this. "Father, this seems like my own chance. but it seems really..strange. no boot camp, long missions, this seems like something out of a spy movie of some kind.." Juer's father nodded slightly, seeming to be deep in thought. "I have a lot of questions for the one in charge of this little operation...but I don't like it at all." Juer nodded slightly, this really was something else, but if it was the only way to get into the military and show his father he can do him proud, he was more than ready for whatever it is he had to do. reading over the agreement however was something fairly unsettling. the Parchment was riddled with vague or broad statements. the general idea however seemed to be that he would be signing his life away, in a much more real fashion, and in return he is given room and board, training, and whenever he is sent away on missions, free house sitting services. as well as room and board wherever he went to go. witch sounded even more like he was going to become some kind of spy, and while the idea seemed kinda cool, too good to be true in fact, it also reeked of foul play.

as they where about to leave the building with the paper, as it instructed them that in order to make their decision they need only send it to the same office by mail, or don't. as they came tot he door however, the man whom he recruiter had been speaking about stopped them both, he was a well dressed man in a security department uniform. he had no metals or ranking on him however. he smiled at them, he was a father small man, at least not as imposing and large as others before him, with short blonde hair. he reached for each of their hands separately and nodded a bit to each one of them while speaking "Ah, Mr. Kage and Juer kage I presume? I had already been been informed that you Juer kage wish to be one of the first in our new little 'program' is that correct?" Juer's father frowned and quickly stepped in front of juer as the man focused in on him, the man now looking up at Juer's father and seeming to gulp slightly "yes now if you would stop jerking us around for a few seconds and tell us what the catch is on this very strange deal here that would be great." The man looked up and stepped back slightly, needing to gather himself for a moment before speaking "ah...yes, well. the idea is this, we have many soldiers out there risking their lives in straight out battles already...the reason why you failed the test. and where directed to me, is because your son mr. kage has been determined by us to be above needing such a thing happen to him. we wish to take him, train him, and make him into something better than the rest. an unfortunate side effect is, you cant exactly refuse this offer.. if the mail is not sent to us in a few days, we will have to arrest the two of you." The two of them where instantly dumbfounded. they had wanted for juer to join the military but, like this was not what juer or his father had expected. the man backed up further and smiled a bit. "Now now, before you get all defensive and make a big deal about it here, note that we are not planing to change too much, in fact Juer we are offering you a very good life, at the cost of a few personal freedoms. and now please, that is not that bad.." Juer looked at him in awe of the stupidity of that statement, but knew yelling was only going to make it worse. he saw no choice here but to go with it, after all, it was a great deal still. "I guess I will take the deal then..." The man smiled slightly and nodded a bit. "great, when you get home, just send it to us and we will pick you up in a few days., where you will be briefed for your new life."

Chapter Three
Pre-Chimera Part 2




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TRIVIA:
In case it has not been properly explained in total what all 'abilities' I wish Juer to have, here is a simple list of everything Juer can do (this list may update)

(since history is not done yet, many of these abilities may not fit yet)

1. extreme Strength, able to easily carry 80lb in each hand without it effecting him.
2. extreme fortitude and thick skin (however, the inability to wear any sort of armor)
3. Weakened eyesight during fighting (it is normal otherwise, but while fighting even if not in a state of blood lust, his vision is a tunnel)
4. Intellect fitting for that of a wise old man.
5. Stealth that a spy could shake a stick at.
6. Poison Venom as saliva.
7. Green skin
8. Appetite fitting for that of someone his size, he needs to eat at least three times the normal healthy amount for someone his size to function at peak performance.

Languages:
XINGESE
CRETAN
AMESTRIAN
AERUGESE
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ALIAS:
if I am not anyone else, I am Jack

OTHER CHARACTERS:
Jan

CUSTOM RANK:
The Demon of Aerugo
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CASE FILE: Custom Weapon
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Juer Kage
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NAME:
Hands of God

TYPE:
Large Katana sword

FORM:
two large, 5 foot long katana with extended grip, made to fit Juer's hand perfectly black and gold patterns cover the grip leading into a curved long single-sided blade, like that of a claw from a huge monster

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BRIEFING:
"what is this!! this is no blade! not one fitting for me at least!" Juer casts a stranded battle katana aside, it hitting the ground and spiraling off into the wall, the handle mangled beyond simple repair "B-but...You are not entitled to any sort of 'special treatment' Juer! its best you get used to-" Juer turns and faces the outfitter, the one in charge of seeing to it he is outfitted properly seemed to have no clue how to do so for the monster. showing him his hand, cuts on the palm showing that it would be impossible to hold the blade correctly "The grips are weak and the weapon cuts the wielder! if you wish a proper solider than you should outfit each one accordingly, now find or make me a weapon fitting!" the leader in charge of the operation to control and use Juer had just walked in now, having heard enough from outside the hall. "come now, John, you will do as he requests. have the alchemists make something! I don't care, just gear him up already, he only wants a few swords.."

The blade was crafted after witch as juer and the leader had stepped outside, the outfitter putting in a request for militant alchemists to make 'A sword worthy of a monster" the result was nearly every militant Alchemist in Aerugo crafting piece by piece a Katana worthy of just that, many different metals combined into one to make it fire-proof, ice proof, shatter-proof. and most importantly, Strong. in the right hands the blade could cut though a tank like it was a tissue. and those hands where found years later after Juer returned from one of his most important missions.


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SPECIAL ABILITIES:

The hands of God is, to be put simply, indestructible. they have been passed though the hands of many alchemists with the sole purpose of making the blades strong enough to survive anything. thanks to this the blades are very heavy, about 50lb for a pair of katanas. and with enough force put into it, could cut though just about anything. it would take an immoveable object to conflict this unstoppable force


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