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Post by Guest Tue Jul 19, 2011 3:43 pm

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CASE FILE: Alchemist/Cretan Militant {Sergeant Major}
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FULL NAME:
→ Nuchiha Saiya Revan

AGE:
→ 27

SEX:
→ Male

BIRTH PLACE:
→ Disputed ((Born on the border of Cretarian/Amestris, due to the war the border constantly shifts. Paperwork says Cretarian and Nuchiha considers himself Cretarian.)

RACE:
→ Cretarian

DATE OF BIRTH:
→ 1984, 3, 12


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HEIGHT:
→ 203 Centimeters

WEIGHT:
→ 67 Kilograms

PICTURE:
Spoiler:

DESCRIPTION:
→ Nuchiha's skin tone is Caucasian, he stands approximately 203 centimeters, and weighs about 67 Kilograms. He is considered by some bulky due to the weight/height ratio, but he does have muscle mass which adds to the weight. This weight is considered healthy for his height, age and build. Nuchiha has Hazel eyes, which strangely some interpret as blue or green, Nuchiha does understand this as Hazel is a mixture of blue and green. Nuchiha has dark blonde hair, and thin eyebrows. His hair style is medium cut, partially wild to keep his hair low maintenance on the terms of brushing it.

Nuchiha has cheekbones that are higher than normal but it isn't notice-able unless you true-ly look. Nuchiha's casual attire varies, sometimes he wears a simple athletic pants/t-shirt combo, or jeans/t-shirt. Nuchiha however has a wide selection for his attire, sometimes he needs to hide from certain people. Specifically Amestrian forces when he is in hostile territory, which happens often.


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PERSONALITY:
→ Nuchiha had a personality that some said was harsh, others said he was mature. This is subject depending on the situation at hand. Nuchiha could say what he thought, when he wanted too but often doesn't to keep his position within the Royal Task Force. Nuchiha strived to rise through the ranks, because he wanted power, and becoming apart of the Royal Task Force was a major step forward. It wasn't a rank at all, simply the elite forces, rank isn't a requirement skill is what you need. Due to this however, Nuchiha sometimes viewed himself as better than others, since he was a "elite" in a sense.

Nuchiha also puts serious emphasis on trust and loyalty, because people who can't be trusted and soldiers that aren't loyal could rebel or betray you. Nuchiha often never trusted anyone, on a first meeting because you never know a person's true intentions. This gave Nuchiha a survivalist instinct, to ensure his own survival and anyone important to him. This survivalist instinct however, sometimes clashed with another instinct he had, fierce loyalty. Nuchiha was fiercely loyal to his commanding officers, performing commands instantly, or most of the time.

Privately and known by few individuals, Nuchiha was originally a sensitive person, he was like that since he can remember. This was known by only Nuchiha himself and his parents. He never shown this in public, because he thought it would make him weak. He has immense control over his emotions to make himself appear a better soldier in the Cretarian Military. Nuchiha doesn't know that if this got him into the Royal Task Force, and he may never know. He simply keeps his emotions in check, only showing them in privacy or around specific individuals.

Another weakness, which could be his downfall sometime later... Was that he was a romantic person, he kept this in check however. He thinks that when he finds someone, if he ever does it would be something like... Something like you read in a book, but even better. Nuchiha never found anyone so far, and partially doubts he will. Nuchiha isn't even sure why he is like that, maybe it was due to being on the run constantly and partial isolation.

LOVE:
→ Family, strategic/tactical games, maps, legends, loyalty, swimming, swords.

HATE:
→ Bad scents (In Nuchiha's opinion), idiocy, improper weapon maintenance, people getting his eye color wrong.

DEEPEST SECRET:
→ Nuchiha was true-ly a sensitive person, and was a romantic person. He however kept this in check, of fear for losing his military position, or getting himself killed by breaking down in the battlefield.


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HISTORY:
→ Nuchiha was born on the border of Creta and Amestris, so his birthplace is disputed. The paperwork, or most paperwork says Creta, and Nuchiha considers himself to be born in Creta. Unfortunately however, according to some customs officials he was born in Amestris. Nuchiha grew up in a strange automobile, always on the run because of the Creta - Amestrian. The earliest memories that can be made out, even faintly is when Nuchiha was looking back at a former home as it was torched down to prevent invading Amestrian forces from scavenging anything. Nuchiha always lived his early years on the run from the Amestrian forces, sometimes coming back to former homes that were previously torched.

However a prominent memory was when Nuchiha first discovered alchemy, he remembers the day clearly. He was walking around the streets, as he saw a alley with a book in the middle. Blood was everywhere, but he was captivated by the mysterious book. Nuchiha picked it up, and began to read it. It was obviously Amestrian, but as he continued to read he began to crave more. He took the book, completely ignoring that fact that it wasn't his. Nuchiha was 5 back then, his mind was ready to learn but unfortunately he couldn't comprehend the complex mathematical and scientific formulas.

Nuchiha was interrupted by his parents when he was reading the book when they snuck it away from him while he was distracted. Nuchiha learned some information from the book however, which was equivalent exchange.

The next memory is foggy, he remembers screaming, as Amestrian Soldiers charged into the city again. When he was 8, Nuchiha's family finally moved to Drachma, to start a new life away from war. Nuchiha learned Drachman, because that was the only language of the area and Nuchiha began to attend schools in Drachma. Nuchiha was a exceptional student, but was in no way the best student. Nuchiha was however the best at strategy and alchemy in his school. Nuchiha eventually became bored however, no one could beat him, and no one wanted to play any of the games anymore.

However, this was also Nuchiha's downfall as bullies began to look for any differences. Nuchiha's eyes were the perfect difference, appearing blue to some but green to others. Nuchiha was ridiculed for this, and eventually he was pushed over the edge and he was expelled. Nuchiha began to learn to control his emotions, but he just couldn't, so he simply tried to ignore people. Nuchiha's parents found him another school, but the walk was nearly a mile long however. This didn't affect Nuchiha, he was already used to the cold, and he wore heavy clothing.

As Nuchiha was wandering around the town, he happened to meet a friendly old man. He never learned his name, he mistook Nuchiha for a street urchin however. He couldn't give Nuchiha much, but he gave him something that he would use later on in life. Knowledge of Alchemy, he taught Nuchiha simple tricks of the trade. Turning snow and ice back into water instantly, but pure water. And how to turn local plants into bread. He warned Nuchiha about the rules of Alchemy if he wanted to take it further. Nuchiha ignored these warnings as he already learned them at a very young age.

As Nuchiha grew up, the laws pertaining to alchemy became apparent. Nuchiha was warned by government officials every time he even prepared to use alchemy. He never used it in public though, because he knew he would be arrested. By the age of 15 however Nuchiha was framed for misconduct on the grounds of using alchemy. Nuchiha was bailed immediately by his parents, and the true criminals were never found.

At the age of 17, for some reason they fled back to Creta. As they went back to Creta, Nuchiha needed to get a job he wanted to help his family. Nuchiha was able to get a job as a store clerk. The job wasn't glorious, but it wasn't horrible either he had a decent wage for him to simply stay due to the war. Nuchiha eventually quit his job at the age of 20, and wondered what he could do.

At the age of 21, it sprang to him suddenly. He wasn't unemployed for long, it was about 1.5 weeks before his 21st birthday. He could serve in the Cretan military, he would be helping his family and his country. Nuchiha was trained, and passed training quite easily for some reason. He was immediately sent to the border to fight Amestrian forces. It wouldn't be until the second skirmish until something actually happened. Nuchiha was ambushed by a lone soldier, and his left arm was torn by his bayonet.

Nuchiha made it to the medical bay, but not before losing a decent amount of blood. His arm was saved, and there was no need to prosthetics. Nuchiha was warned to be extremely careful, as he was extremely lucky. The next 6 years of his military career were nothing special, the only thing that made him stand out was his fierce loyalty, and during the first 2 years he learned to 'cancel out' his emotions.

The most interesting part of his career, was when he stumbled upon a Amestrian history book. It talked about Roy Mustang and the Mustang Group, well a section of it did. However the history wasn't what intrigued Nuchiha, it was the flame alchemy. Nuchiha spent any and all of his free time researching and studying said flame alchemy. Over time, he made a exact replica of Roy's gloves, the concept was simple, but not easy to perform.

It wasn't until Nuchiha was 26 that he mastered Flame Alchemy, or the basics. It took him 4 years to learn a formerly secret technique. Nuchiha had no intention what so ever to share his discovery, it was his to use. Nuchiha knew that others discovered what he knew, but he simply laughed at them. It wasn't true fire alchemy, it didn't follow the original procedures or guidelines.

By the age of 27, Nuchiha was invited to join the Cretarian Royal Task Force, which was led by Dietrich himself. Nuchiha immediately accepted this invitation, the Royal Task Force only compromised the best of the military, what was Nuchiha so good at? Turns out he was good at being unnoticed, and his fierce loyalty made him a perfect candidate for any missions that may end in his death.


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ALCHEMIC/ALKAHESTRIC ABILITY:
→ Flame Alchemy
Flame Alchemy is the manipulation of the concentration of oxygen in the air surrounding the target, raising its density to a level at which it becomes combustible and creating narrow pathways of oxygen through which can direct the ensuing flame birthed by the spark.


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TRIVIA:
→ Can speak and write in Cretarian, Drachman and Amestrian
→ Nuchiha is a very adept swimmer
→ Nuchiha is also adept at disguises, and forgeries to a degree.


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ALIAS:
→ Nuchiha, Nuchiha101 (Please be aware, I only use those two. There are users with usernames similar or the same, please don't accuse me of anything.)

OTHER CHARACTERS:
→ This is my first character on this site.

CREATOR'S COMMENTS:
→ No comments really, don't have anything to say.

FACE CLAIM:
Code:
[b]Wolf's Rain[/b]/[i]Hubb Lebowski[/i]

CUSTOM RANK:
→ Member of the RTF

OFFICIAL TITLE:
→ The Flamethrower Alchemist

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Post by Guest Tue Jul 19, 2011 5:02 pm

I am technically finished. Or I think I am.

Dietrich said I could be apart of the RTF (Royal Task Force) so I took the offer.

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Post by Reila Tsukino Tue Jul 19, 2011 6:50 pm

REVISE


1. Picture: Sorry, but you can't actually face claim a FMA character. If you need help finding a new one, just ask!
2. History: There's no way that anyone can master alchemy at age 5. XD A person's brain hasn't even fully developed by then...

Everything else is perfect. Good job and welcome to MDA!! ^_^
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Post by Guest Tue Jul 19, 2011 7:50 pm

Revised the application

1. I got a different face claim, they look partially similar but the hair color is and other features are more accurate to my description this time around.

2. Didn't realize that, I apologize. I moved it to ~9-10 but not mastery, more like basic concepts and learning over the years.

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Post by Dai Tue Jul 19, 2011 8:13 pm

R E V I S E

I KNOW this is nit-picking, but can you change your date of birth to an actual date, please? It's just for sake of understanding. ^^;

Other than that, perfect!
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Post by Guest Tue Jul 19, 2011 8:23 pm

Honestly, it's not nit-picking the birthdate can be important info later on. Thank you for mentioning it.

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Post by Dai Tue Jul 19, 2011 8:26 pm

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Post by Dai Tue Jul 19, 2011 8:31 pm

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