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Post by Guest Fri Jun 24, 2011 3:12 am

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CASE FILE: Chimerae
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”Size doesn’t mean everything!”
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FULL NAME:
→ Jan Eisenhauer
AGE:
→ 10

SEX:
→ Male

BIRTH PLACE:
→ Amestris

RACE/SPECIES:
→ Ant (yes, the insect)/ Amestrian

GENERATION:
→ Generation 2.

DATE OF BIRTH:
→ 8/19/01


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HEIGHT:
→121cm

WEIGHT:
→ 29kg

PICTURE:
Spoiler:

DESCRIPTION:
The thin boy known as Jan stands four feet tall, very short and is thin as a twig, having only 50lb on him, or about 22 kilograms, he wears a thin te-shirt that is kept rather clean despite where he often finds himself living, wearing over it a thicker black coat that seems as though it would be impossible for him to wear, easily more heavy than he is, the black coat acts more as an exoskeleton than a coat, the sleeves tucked up almost all the way up just so he could get his hands in it, and straps around his wrists to keep it from going down, the coat itself is not really part of his body, but Jan tries to find some of the best 'armor' he could find to wear, his instinct telling him to try and protect himself. the coat however is just hard, not really much of an armor as much as it is an unwearable unconformable jacket. the coat reaching down to the floor. His pants are long sack cloth pants that go down and gather at the floor, his shirt being the only thing that is not over sized for the little boy.

Jan’s face due to the change from human to chimerae has changed only slightly, his skin seemingly more boney everywhere, even for how thin he is, his eyes seeming to be made up of many different lens in the same eyeball, however this seems to have no effect on how he sees things. His hands on the palms are slightly barbed, very slightly however as he can control when they extend, and when they do they are just little sharp hairs, far from a danger. His teeth on the inside of his mouth are much sharper, however are also smaller, almost like a baby’s, there are three times as many teeth in his mouth than normal, but they are much smaller and sharper, meant to cause pain with each bite rather than to eat.

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PERSONALITY:
Jan is, in all reality, a child, he laughs, he plays, he gets into situations he is not supposed to be in, he loves to smile, he wants the attention of his peers and elders, he is a child, plain and simple. He deviated little in terms of personality, he was and still is a clam kid, and found himself secluded most of the time just thinking about how awesome life is. Sitting out into the sun during the day will pals and sleeping the night away.

The changes in behavior really started when he turned into a chimerae, he quickly developed the attributes of the animal that was chosen for him, the ant. He became devoted to a single task much more easily, even if it took him hours of undoable work he would keep at it until he was pried away by the ear. He horded everything he could get ahold of, and organized it all in his room. Thinking that he had to keep everything nice and neat, but at the same time it must all still be there, everything must stay and if you don’t sue everything to its fullest, than you are wasting what is being given to you. He took the group a lot more, trying his best to organize his peers and move forward to a better day, however he hated trying to be the leader all the time, as it did not fit his instinct to lead.

The last big change that came is a major drawback to this otherwise perfect little boy, his addiction to candy that started almost the moment that he was made into a chimerae, Candy, to most people, is delightful, nice treat, for Jan, it’s 100% needed to function. Thanks to the 4th generation chimera he has going on his ant qualities shine through, and the attraction to candy is one of the biggest things. It is not just a treat for Jan, it is crack, and it has a similar effect when he eats enough of it.
LOVE:
1. Candy (it is literally like crack to him, and is just as addicting)
2. Group activities
3. Stacking and organizing things
4. Hording
5. He practically likes people who show a commanding aura, and will do anything to please one should he find one.

HATE:
1. Disobedient peers
2. People throwing his stuff out!
3. Reading D:<
4. People being a hog
5. People not giving him his candy fix

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HISTORY:
Jan was born in Amestris, the militaristic society whom at the time and place of his birth was trying to, like most societies making super soldiers. Children in the area where he was born in were often given up on thanks to the poor state of affairs there, and Jan at the age of 5 became one of these people. However Amestris did not give up on these children, oh no, they were the experiments, the front lines in the war of finding new ways to use animal with person. And Jan’s case was one of great interest to many an alchemist trying to find a way to make a fourth generation chimerae insect, in his case, an ant. Afterwards if the subject is not killed by the experiment the next step of course being to study how he develops to unsure it is safe to perform on others.

Jan survived being transmuted with the insect just fine, in fact, there was no failure anywhere, he became the exact replica of what they were looking for in the next line of soldiers, he had incredible strength for his age, barbed hairs on his hands used to climb, his body became more boney to the point where it was showing nearly everywhere. In an attempt to see out of curiosity how this would work in a domestic setting, rather than open War field witch would come later in his life, and so they put him in a small house and watched how he acted. And after showing all the personality traits the alchemists felt like staying to see, took him out. This was a mistake….
Jan, after being denied the freedom he had the ‘right’ to, being watched at all hours of the day and having no free will of his own, was able to express himself in some way though living in the house, the feeling was so reliving that he did not want it to end at all costs. And as he was taken out he attacked the guards, biting and tearing clear though his sleeve and into his skin, pushing with all his might and throwing him to the ground. The next guard taking out his weapon and had only enough time to arm himself before Jan was upon him. After the bloody display of the guards he made, the board in charge of this experiment labeled the operation a failure, and proceeded to send Jan to what they hoped to be his death.

An incinerator, or rather, a big fire at the bottom of a big pit, was all that awaited Jan now, in the otherwise open fields around him Jan was, now almost totally unable to move, trying frantically to think of a plan. Finding one only after they had dropped him into the pit, and left him to burn. Jan stuck to one of the walls of the pit and slowly inched his way to the top, afterword’s tearing free of his bonds, and seeking another life, somewhere, else….

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TRIVIA:

→ Amestrian = Green
Cretan = blue

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ALIAS:
→ Jack M Tama, if I don’t use my username, this is who I am at all times

OTHER CHARACTERS:
→ First! Character ^_^

CREATOR'S COMMENTS:
→ I’m new….be gentle…that is all you should care about in terms of be as a person XD otherwise its my character I want you to look at, not me

FACE CLAIM:[*code]SERIES/ARTIST/character[/code*] (Take out the * and this message)

CUSTOM RANK:
→ Stowaway
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Post by Reila Tsukino Fri Jun 24, 2011 3:38 am

REVISE

1. Username: it has to be your character's name.
2. Race: German does not exist. Change it to Amestrian.
3. Species: Ants are not animals. However, I'm making an exception because it's intriguing.
4. Height: 121 what?
5. Weight/Description: Someone who weighs 50 pounds at age ten would have staved to death. Your bones ALONE weigh 50 pounds.
6. Description: "the black coat acts more as an exoskeleton than a coat" IS this coat PART of him or not? Make this clear. Is it just a coat or what?
7. Generation/History: This seems like a generation two to me.
8. History: It's much less "an operation" and more so that you are transmuted with the animal (and in this case insect) of choice. Chimerae are created by alchemy. So there will be a transmutation circle and all that jazz. If an ant crawls into the human transmutation circle, you will be combined with it. That's why it would be cool if it was actually an accident or something. It's a bit rushed. Maybe add more to how he became a chimera. Or I'm just used to reading 390823042 word histories so don't sweat it too much.

Note: Chimerae is plural and Chimera isn't plural.

Awesome character and an exciting new addition!
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Post by Dai Fri Jun 24, 2011 6:09 am

R E V I S E

1: I'd like you to reduce your weight, please. Preferably to around... 30kg. 47kg actually puts him as obese, and I don't think you'd like that for an ant chimera.
2: Speaking of, seeing as he's Gen 2... No, I think it can work. You understand that he can't transform? Not so much a revision, as just a heads up.
3: Description: Just fix the weight.
4: History: Along the lines of what Aki said, you can change it, or you can keep it that way. It's acceptable.

So... yeah. Just fix the weight. XDDD
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Post by Guest Fri Jun 24, 2011 11:06 am

Edited weight

I kinda wanted it that way ^^; the reason I wanted him ether Generation 4 in the first place is because from at least what I can understand from it a transformation is not needed, the animal behaviors and crap are done while human .-.

I woulds like to be generation four, but tbh anything that fits the above works for me xD

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Post by Reila Tsukino Fri Jun 24, 2011 2:21 pm

APPROVED

The reason why I'm writing off Gen 4 is because you are fused with an ant, which is already impossible to begin with. I can't see a transformation being possible at all. Gen 2 covers the *insect "behaviors and crap" while human. So we both win by you being Gen 2, which is why I suggested it.
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Post by Guest Fri Jun 24, 2011 4:35 pm

sounds perfect to me ^-^

yeah, the ant transformation sounded kinda lame anyway ^-^

thank you!

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