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run run run (raiu only)
Labelisa held a soft smile on her face as she walked down a dirt road. she didnt know where she was going, and didnt really care. All she wanted to do is find a place to rest her head and call it a night, even thought i was still earily in the morning. Labelisa stoped and turned around, hereing a twing snap. "h-hello?" she asked looking around, but not seeing anyone. she started walking when she heard a growl. this time when she turned, she saw a large wolf, its fur black and silver and it was running right for her. Labelisa screamed and started running.
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He really had no idea where he was going. He had been given the minor job of investigating the western borders of Amestris and had barely made it through clearance. The train ride there had been hell. It was so long he thought his back would never stop hurting. It had been an interesting experience though none-the-less and he hoped the results would be successful. He was not looking forward to writing up a report... Though with the circumstances now, he doubted it would be any time soon. Holding the map sideways, he stared at the trees surrounding him. For all he knew he could be in the never-ending forest of doom. Shit.
Ah! He saw a dirt road and ran over to it in joy. Trying to find it on the map, he felt the patter of feet before he heard them. Looking up, he discovered a girl followed by...was that a dog? He stood there in question until she was about to pass him. That was when he realized it was chasing her. In mild surprise, he stuck out his leg and watching the creature tumble to the ground. Furious, it lunged at him. Damn, it had to have been as hungry as he was...to attack a human was unheard of. This girl must have pissed it off or it hadn't eaten in days.
Tsune stuck his metal arm into the jaws of the silver and black dog and thrust it away. "Leave." He commanded the animal and as if it were obeying him, it left quietly back into the woods from where it emerged. Strange animal...
"Oi...you okay?" He called back to the girl who had been running for her life.
Ah! He saw a dirt road and ran over to it in joy. Trying to find it on the map, he felt the patter of feet before he heard them. Looking up, he discovered a girl followed by...was that a dog? He stood there in question until she was about to pass him. That was when he realized it was chasing her. In mild surprise, he stuck out his leg and watching the creature tumble to the ground. Furious, it lunged at him. Damn, it had to have been as hungry as he was...to attack a human was unheard of. This girl must have pissed it off or it hadn't eaten in days.
Tsune stuck his metal arm into the jaws of the silver and black dog and thrust it away. "Leave." He commanded the animal and as if it were obeying him, it left quietly back into the woods from where it emerged. Strange animal...
"Oi...you okay?" He called back to the girl who had been running for her life.
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Labelisa panted, finaly stoping when she noticed the wolf was triped and sent back to the woods by a man standing on the egde of the road. Labelis was shaking slightly, trying to calm down. "y-yes im f-fine" she studder, half from the left over fear and half from her habit. She walked to the man and bowed, her black as night hair falling off her shoulders as she did "t-thank you so m-much s-sir, i o-owe you m-my l-life" she said and stood back up.
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"Aa," Tsune said, bowing in return. He gave her a smile and joined her on the dirt road. "Where are you headed?" He asked, watching as the wind blew his long ponytail out to the side of his face and beyond as if it were silver ribbon. He figured that if this girl was going somewhere with civilization, then he could somehow figure out where he was and how to get back to the border so he could return to his own country. It was all so confusing. Tsune glanced down at his beat up black messenger bag where his notebook was covered in notes he took for his report and frowned. This wasn't the kind of thing he was good at, and he hoped that the higher ups wouldn't kick him over the head for it.
He looked back up to meet her frightened eyes. "If you wouldn't mind, I'll escort you there."
[Remember minimum word count is 150 per post~ Alaric might take off points--don't want that~]
He looked back up to meet her frightened eyes. "If you wouldn't mind, I'll escort you there."
[Remember minimum word count is 150 per post~ Alaric might take off points--don't want that~]
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Labelisa smiled "i-im h-heading t-to (random town in cretia), h-how about y-you?" she said with her shy studder while pushing a peice of hair behind her ear. She wondered who would be out here in the middle of no where. but then agian she was so it wasnt that strange. Labelisa pulled down her dress slightly and held her hands infount of her. her scarf flowing with the wind, looking almsot like water.
{what are points for anyway?}
{what are points for anyway?}
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[You should go read all the rules ^-^, but here's the part about points.
Also, be creative...make up the name of the town~ Don't worry if it actually exists or not. I mean we are in the future so new towns could be built anyway. ;P
To make posts longer, throw in some adjectives; try to use detail; focus in on small things like scenery or your characters features/clothes, etc.; and what I do, is describe what my character is thinking at the time, like reactions to things/actions. Hope that helps! <3]
Also, be creative...make up the name of the town~ Don't worry if it actually exists or not. I mean we are in the future so new towns could be built anyway. ;P
To make posts longer, throw in some adjectives; try to use detail; focus in on small things like scenery or your characters features/clothes, etc.; and what I do, is describe what my character is thinking at the time, like reactions to things/actions. Hope that helps! <3]
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"Sounds good," Tsune spoke quickly, motioning forward. He was eager to get back, and the town she was headed towards sounded like it would have a train station. He patted his pocket that contained his new wallet and the chain attached to it jingled slightly. It was great being given traveling money too. He grinned. "Shall we go?" He asked, watching her scarf with mild amusement. It seemed a bit colder here... and he wished secretly that he had gotten a scarf before he left. Damn. Sighing inaudibly, Tsune realized that he still held the map in his other hand.
"You do know where we're going right?" It would really suck if she didn't; then he would be stuck again to wander lost around the foreign country. He was lucky he knew English or seriously he would have already been killed or taken prisoner or something else that was mildly confusing.
"You do know where we're going right?" It would really suck if she didn't; then he would be stuck again to wander lost around the foreign country. He was lucky he knew English or seriously he would have already been killed or taken prisoner or something else that was mildly confusing.
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Labelisa looked at him. She tilted her head confused. "i guess this guy is going the same way i am" She thought. Labelisa shruged and started walking. She had to pull down the bottom of her dress for it would start to ride up on her. she walked next to the boy "s-so w-whats your name?" she asked shyly as her hair moving in the wind. Labelisa pulled off each of her gloves. It was a bit hot out and she was starting to sweat.
[take away my points for this one, i cant think of anything eles]
[take away my points for this one, i cant think of anything eles]
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"I'm Tsune, and you?" He asked, looking over his shoulder at her as he walked onwards in a random direction. Inwardly, he wondered where on earth he was going and was about to ask her, but changed his mind. It was only when the trees began to thin out ahead that he turned to her. "This is the right way, right?" He stared off at the seemingly endless dirt road, but then suddenly caught sight of something. A building?! He could have cheered from happiness, but figured he would look like an idiot. "Looks like some kind of town up ahead... Where are you from, anyway?" He blinked, innocent blue eyes at her and adjusted the annoying strap of his brand-new messenger bag that dug into the skin of his non-metal arm. He should really get rid of the habit of slinging the heavy thing around the wrong arm. He figured it would take some time before his brain realized it was more logical to wear it the opposite way rather than suffer the whole time.
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Labelisa smiled as he asked for her name "im labelisa, it nice t-to mean y-you tsune-kun" she smiled. labelisa couldnt wait till she was in town. first she would get come food, real food too. not berrys and fish. labelisa grined as she saw the town ahead. labelisa could see restrants, stores, a hotel!!. labelisa grined "race ya" she grined and took off, laughing all the way. her mouth was watering just thinking about food. steak and eggs, mash potatos and gravy, even toast sounded good!!. labelisa was half way down a hill when she triped [color=cyan]"Oh crap no!" she yelled as she strated to roll down the hill, she was bouncing like a ragdoll as she landed on top of a bush "owww" she growned and sat up rubbing her head "racing is a bad idea" she said and tryed to get up slowly.
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"Aa. Same here," Tsune answered her back with a bright smile. "And no need to be so nervous. I'm not going to hurt you and I'm sure nothing else is going to attack us especially since--" He watched her take off towards the town and blinked in surprise. What? He stared after her for a while before her spewed words echoed in his head: 'race ya.' Then he understood and took off after her, catching up and slowing down beside her. She seemed happy; that was good. He couldn't help laughing back and mirroring her smile. When they began running down a hill though, he suddenly saw her trip and reached out to grab her, but then lost his own balance, trying to get to her. He tumbled over himself and landed on his butt. "Itaiii..." He muttered, standing up quickly to see that she had landed in a bush a bit further down. He ran over to her and reached out to her successfully this time. "Hahh! It wasn't a bad idea. We'll still make it there faster than we would have. You're okay right?" He shook silver hair out of his face to get a better look at her. "Hungry? I'll getcha something~"
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