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Post by Guest Thu May 19, 2011 10:36 pm


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CASE FILE: Transmutation Equipment
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Devon Grimm
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NAME:
Twilight

TYPE:
Elemental

LEVEL:
Level 1

FORM:
Laser Beam

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BRIEFING:
Devon Grimms alchemy is a bit different than the average person you’ll come across. His is by far more tactical, and can be a bit difficult to pull off if the cards aren’t placed properly. His ability specializes in causing panic into a persons mind by the art of blinding them. Might seem hard to pull off, but the shadows are a great example of stirring fear inside a persons being. Devon simply pulls out a small laser pointer that he keeps on his person, and directs the dot into a persons eyes. This works by sending his alchemy through the form of a laser beam into their eye directly, which then corrupts the optic nerve. By doing so, the nerve deadens and stops sending images to the brain. In a sense, the person becomes temporarily blind. If you think about it, whenever a person suddenly becomes blind there will be an overwhelming fear that takes over. From there, Devon Grimm would use his sword to kill the victim or another method of choice. For now, his ability only extends to five feet in front of him, so anyone further than five feet would not be affected by the blindness.

PICTURE:
Laser:
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Circles:
Spoiler:

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SPECIAL ABILITIES:

He doesn't need a transmutation circle.


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Post by Aurelius Schwartz Thu May 26, 2011 5:00 pm

REVISE


This is approvable, but I know you're seeking perfection <3
Under special abilities, that's where you want to copy and paste the paragraph/s from your character app (which you put under briefing instead). Leave the "he doesn't need transmutation circles" sentence and bold it. And write up something for briefing. This is where you describe like... what he needs to know in order to use his alchemy. You can use this for an example: https://mdalchemist.rpg-board.net/t834-lightning-staff
Also, if you're planning to lvl him up to high levels, I suggest using the arrows or it might get confusing. ^_^
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Post by Aurelius Schwartz Mon Jun 06, 2011 2:25 am

Your archive date is June 12. Finish it by then.
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Post by Dai Sun Jun 19, 2011 1:53 am

You're past archive date. Archived.
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