jeffs rpg dude

[Guest]

CASE FILE: Alchemist

im dead inside which means im 3 parts dead


FULL NAME:jeff andrews


AGE:
17
SEX:
Male

BIRTH PLACE:
resembool

RACE:
amestrian

DATE OF BIRTH:
12-9-1993


HEIGHT:
185

WEIGHT:
90

PICTURE:

Spoiler:

DESCRIPTION:
emo stalky build with a cross shaped sword a long scar on his left upper forearm white hair and a weird looking grey jacket that is made of an unidentified substance is easily identifiable by the endless trail of ladies that follow him has his hair spiked and wheres skinny jeans has brown eyes and is around 6 foot 2 inches and 180 pounds so is a little on the tall side and is quite skinny a handsome kid who has a medium voice slouched way to him and has headphones dangling in his ears at all times because he is usually listening to scremo music has a unusual way of walking see its a little bit of a gait but i just think its because slouches a lot a kid that has a lot of scariness in him like a vampire almost except hes a good looking guy thats what he looks like



PERSONALITY:
A rather depressed and melancholic figure with a penchant for emotional instability and angst. Having had emotional traumas that shaped him to be scarred as trust is something hard to earn from this lonely and rather unlucky individual, to whom his morose mannerism hasn't exactly endeared him to whomever speaks to him. Indeed, for having lost what he held dear to strangers, he has grown to be overly protective and even possessive of his family.

Compulsive in all regards into trying to protect what little he has that remains in the world. Striving to keep his moral compass which is the little fabrics he has lest he sinks into absolute and complete depression and to become an emo. A sad little emo who has not much to live for as suicidal intentions fills him. Everyday contemplating upon death yet stopped with the thought he has something to live for after all in the form of his last family members, being the last of the last.

By no doubt this fuels his frustration and masculine temptations to produce children. Desperate yet a hopeless romantic as he strives to gain a foothold into explicit fornication all for the sake of offsprings than for love, which he is sadly not inclined to believe in, preferring to be morose after all and melancholic.
LOVE:
his blade
his girl friend
his brother
scremo
alchemy
HATE:
life
chatty people
people who harm his loved ones
people in general lol
humonculus



IDOL:
andy sixx bvb lead singer

HISTORY:
History: A sprite and stout young fellow filled with happiness and love was born at a point in 1993. He was most cheerful as his birth was marked to be in Rasembool, in the legendary Edward Elric's home village. A pure Amestrian no less, as his family were rather religious, having him baptized as he had the hopes of life thrusted upon him, expecting a good career and a good future as he has been led to believe. Life was like a fairy tale to himself.

Having had been handsome and skinny since birth though, he wasn't exactly criticized for being so good looking, or in shape for that matter. For he had strong friends to begin with as he had a relationship with them no matter how much he got nagged about it from his mom no they are nothin but trouble his mom always said . They had defended him although due to that bond, which everyone liked and founded good friendships in whilst being a good kid . Yet despite that, he was happiest in the world and most cheerful despite being so attractive.

Listening to outrageous scremo music in his teenage years as he had a favorite band or something like that which was Asking Alexandria. After all, he was a depressed kid due to his fathers death which almost tore apart his whole entire family.

Later on he has developed his hair to be parted aside to cover one eye whilst wearing black clothing as he listened to alternative musics in comparison to the more popular pop music. Life was good for a time as he spent time with his best friends in rather morbid and frowned upon practices.

All was good until... a day came and some proto-Homunculus killed and destroyed his family. Well some of them. He still had extras, but that made Jeff sad. Years went on as he slit his wrist and cried in the corner as he relieved himself of his depression as he goes along, becoming emo and depressed in appearance not to mention devilishly handsome. His girlfriend being the only thing he has besides his brother didn't leave him due to the fact she became in love with him as well. Seeing her as the only love interest there after his friends died off.

Seeing her as family... as he lived on his life as an emo civilian with no purpose in life but to protect what little he had in the form of his girlfriend and brother. Having lost everything, not to mention the scar on his right arm is mostly from all the slitting of his wrist and sometimes even under-forearm.




ALCHEMIC ABILITY:
can make heat from his blade by sacrificing gunpowder and oxygen the flames melt anything on contact: the blade

FILE: Transmutation Equipment


His name:Jeff andrews
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NAME:
lead atom destruction mwahahahaha XD
TYPE:
fire and basic

LEVEL:
level 1

[FORM:
its a blade he holds he is how ever immune to the heat

BRIEFING:
it takes oxygen and gunpowder mixes with air pressure and makes the heat from equivalent exchange. its main ability is everything it touches melts however i am immune. it can be used as both offensive and defensive. my trans mutation circle looks like the full metal alchemists circle but smaller and much more powerful i can also make it one handed.

PICTURE:

Spoiler:

it can be made on any liquid ,solid or gas substance


SPECIAL ABILITIES:
i can make heat equivalent to that of 2 lead atoms from my keyblade that disentagrate anything it touches im immune and basically as hot as 2 lead atoms hitting each other







TRIVIA:
i speak all languages in yellow



ALIAS:
jeff
OTHER CHARACTERS:
this is my first character

CREATOR'S COMMENTS:
can i have my gf and brother follow me around?

FACE CLAIM:
Anime guy from photobucket from no show the claw alchemist all copyrights to him

CUSTOM RANK:
major general

OFFICIAL TITLE:
the blue flame alchemist

CASE FILE: Custom Weapon

Character's name jeff
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NAME: the bam ur dead cross sword

TYPE:
a sword/club

FORM:
a cross


BRIEFING:
it looks like a cross. it makes super hot heat that disentigrates things . it is also jewel studded in the bottom half i am holding the sharper part in the picture. it is around 3 feet high and 20 pounds. that is my sword.
[font=courier new][size=18]PICTURE:

Spoiler:

SPECIAL ABILITIES: emits heat that comes from my blade that can disentigrate anything

[Aurelius Schwartz]

REVISE

To follow the basic rules first would include:

1. Keeping the same coding and not changing it.
2. Making your transmutation app a separate post from your character app.
3. Following the word count rules.
4. Titling it correctly.
5. Alchemic ability: blue flames aren't realistic.
6. Homunculus and Homunculi is the same thing, therefore you only have 4 hates.

There are about 100 more things wrong, so correct these first and then get back to me.